ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM INDEX pg-1 COMPLETED - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the chapter.. Very interesting . Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...!
loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for da pm
nice update
its different
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all A Big Thanks for PMing me , otherwise i would have missed this absolutely brilliant piece of work .
About this FF , i just love it.
The character sketch got me thrilled , when i came to know Khushi is shyam's wife and pregnant.
Then i read the prologue and found this FF to be very very different concept wise and exceptionally well written.

Arnav and Lavanya's relationship is just Physical relation with one sided love from Lavanya.
I won't totally blame Arnav , cuz he didn't force Lavanya to get into an intimate relationship , she did it willingly.She has chosen her life herself.
Arnav doesn't want to get married , but at least he is commited .
He's not cheating on her.

And then comes the relationship between Khushi and Shyam.
It actually brought tears into my eyes , to think about Khushi's condition .
Shyam , just uses her to fulfill his physical needs and doesn't care about her baby which is equally his.Felt really bad about her Miscarriage !
And shyam claims that he loves Khushi !!
Ohh Really ??
That's why he's cheating on her just because Khushi isn't allowing him to be intimate with her that too for the sake of their baby.
Urghhh!! He is such an As*****e !😡
I really pity Khushi...
What a hell of a life she lives with a jerk of a husband , and she still accepts him and tries to love him.
But of course , it all does happen in real life...!!
And especially in India.

Both the relationships , be it Arnav and Lavanya's or Khushi and Shyam's , are extremely complex.

I'm really loving this FF.
Its very realistic.

Now i am waiting for Arnav and Khushi's story to start.

Once again , thanks for the PM.😊
And sorry for the Mahabharat sized comment 😳

(PS : i read that u'r Bengali , and well I'm Bengali too, but from Delhi though! )

Keep PMing mee !

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its simply OWSUMpm me too in future please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome...very very interesting concept...loving it :)...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊
shaym is a b***
he cheated on khushi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi-Nikita123

First of all A Big Thanks for PMing me , otherwise i would have missed this absolutely brilliant piece of work .

About this FF , i just love it.
The character sketch got me thrilled , when i came to know Khushi is shyam's wife and pregnant.
Then i read the prologue and found this FF to be very very different concept wise and exceptionally well written.

Arnav and Lavanya's relationship is just Physical relation with one sided love from Lavanya.
I won't totally blame Arnav , cuz he didn't force Lavanya to get into an intimate relationship , she did it willingly.She has chosen her life herself.
Arnav doesn't want to get married , but at least he is commited .
He's not cheating on her.

And then comes the relationship between Khushi and Shyam.
It actually brought tears into my eyes , to think about Khushi's condition .
Shyam , just uses her to fulfill his physical needs and doesn't care about her baby which is equally his.Felt really bad about her Miscarriage !
And shyam claims that he loves Khushi !!
Ohh Really ??
That's why he's cheating on her just because Khushi isn't allowing him to be intimate with her that too for the sake of their baby.
Urghhh!! He is such an As*****e !😡
I really pity Khushi...
What a hell of a life she lives with a jerk of a husband , and she still accepts him and tries to love him.
But of course , it all does happen in real life...!!
And especially in India.

Both the relationships , be it Arnav and Lavanya's or Khushi and Shyam's , are extremely complex.

I'm really loving this FF.
Its very realistic.

Now i am waiting for Arnav and Khushi's story to start.

Once again , thanks for the PM.😊
And sorry for the Mahabharat sized comment 😳

(PS : i read that u'r Bengali , and well I'm Bengali too, but from Delhi though! )

Keep PMing mee !



You must be happy hearing that I love Mahabharat..😉😆
Edited by dieforasr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just start reading it... Looks interesting...

Keep going
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh... poor khushi felt really sorry for her.
Is she okay..??
shyam is disgusting..!!
and Rani sahiba...
will wait to know more... update soon.
thanks for pm.

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