ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM INDEX pg-1 COMPLETED - Page 7

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I m sorry but i don't like the update at all
This is ridiculous shyam is such a moron jerk.
I m not liking such updates

Originally posted by: -Xpress-

poor kushi...
and is shyam also married to anjali???

You definitely get the anwaer in next chapter.

well written ...nyc update...

I m crying by reading this update
plz don't write such update in future

Again a good attempt

Shyam so cheap

Poor khushi

Omg ..on my nerves ..

Yes one thing for sure ..there is no place and value for girls dreams aims intentions likes...
She got to get such a life ...

Waiting for the update

I m feeling very bad for Khushi !! 😭

Originally posted by: dieforasr

Yaah!! I am...Earlier I thought about bengali surnames...but can't think my Arnav with other surnames.

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Hmm firstly as soon as I read your intro that went a bit like this:

"This is only a love story. There is no place for hate in their lives. Arnav, Khushi,Shyam, Lavanya, Anjali. All of them were in love with their desired ones"

I was like Great no hate in the relationships only a happy love story since they are all happily satisfied with their partners in life, and it is exactly what I like to read but then today I read your character sketch and went ah nooo how can we have Khushi married to Shyam?! Then I read the prologue that provided us with insight into the nature of relationship between Lavanya and Arnav there doesn't seem to be any love but a mere physical relationship. Then I read Chapter one and I just couldn't stomach it, the way Khushi is being treated is horrible and kudos to you for being brave enough to cover the harsh realities of life. But u know when we immerse ourselves into the world of fiction we mostly want to see some solace, peace and happy endings with ideal characters. I hope you have some peace planned out for her eventually.

Your work is quite well written and I do appreciate the PM! Let's see what you unravel next hopefully not more than what a fragile heart can handle!

Why & how Khushi was married to Shyam that I tell you after few chapters. My characters are complex.
"In this 7years, she had learnt to love him for not only he is the only man in her life but also he is truly generous with her family"
being a simple & traditional girl Khushi has learnt to love Shyam. "7 yrs" time point isn't a matter of joke. In every arranged marriage, this happens. yaah I have mentioned a situation where a pregnant is suffering.It is quite common in our society.