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fannism

@fannism

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Deetha...seriously...kisi din mujhe heart attack aa jaye ga...yar how could u do dat...itne fit r dhansoo kism ke ideas kahan se keti ho...yara m a great fan of ur writng...do pm me of ur writngs...lOve yOu 👏 🤗
Hats off keep it up

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Nice os
ek pal ke liye to me darhi gai thi
ki kria sleeping pills lene wali thi
acha hua rey sahi time par utha gaya

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

OS-8

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I wonder from where u get so many unique ideas!!

It was emotion-filled n very beautifully written..

I was all set to spit venom on Rey n bash him to no extent 😈

But Rey ko bash karna isn't my cup of coffee! 😆 He's too cute to be bashed!

But he made Kria suffer a lot 😭.. how can he get attracted to any bimbo when he has got d most beautiful n cutest wife?!😡

Chalo itz ok.. finally he got some brains in his skull n realised his true love for Kria!

Thnx for giving it a happy ending..

Waiting for next OS 😃

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Superb os..

Loved it..

their tiffs n rey realising what he had done..

Kriya went through soo much...

emotional tha thoda sa..

ending was too gud..😉

Edited by cool_star14 - 11 years ago

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jasmeet kaur

@dilkriyarey

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

omg...!!!ur os are so unique

emotional n loved where at d end they are finally kriyansh...

theyre juzt incomprble to any other

ur ideas...frm where do u get dem...simply superb di...

loved each 1 of dem...

seriously amazing...

plz update soon...

juzt love dem n also u di...

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Sorry for this late comment dear...

I was inactive for some time...

I read 6th 7th 8th OSs now...

6th OS was to ekdum faadu tha...

Kya sedice kiya kriya ne...

I was actually imagining rey's shocked face...

god she actually did that I front of everyone...gosh...

U know I wish esa sach me hota...he he...

7th OS was really cute...

it was kind of a dance os...

rey ne kitni mehnat ki kri ko manane k liye...

ab itni cutly manayega to maanegi hi na...

Really liked it...

8th OS...

it was quite different...

KR having a tough time in their marriage. ...

divorce tak aa gyi baat...

It was really passionate kind of...

really loved it...

waiting for more OSs in this series...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

awesome.. just read al 8 os.. al were extra-ordinary in its own way.. emotional, sensuous, filled with love, pain, romance n cute nok-joks.. superb.. sorry for not giving comment to al os.. sorry for it as i ve 600pms to read so i ll comment n give response to al works next time for sure.. waiting for ur next os...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

meko next time scrap ya fb pe.msg karna.wen u write a new os...

this one was fab...

too good

loved it

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jasmeet kaur

@dilkriyarey

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

di jaldi se ek naya os likhu na

waiting so damn eagerly...plsshhiiee...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#200

I love this song.. Voh dekhne mein..

kitna perfect jaata hai na.. Kria pe.. Sirf dekhne mein seedhi saadhi hai.. but reality is Junior Jhansi ki Rani.. 😆

I like the way you described Rey running behind her.. haye

the best part was.. dazzlers and weakling together.. 🤣

Great one Deeths. 👍🏼