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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 11 years ago

I loved the way u started it.

Rey leaning down on his palm and watching Kria...

Sharon pulling him up...

His masti, humming n dance...

Dazzlers n weaklings helping him...

I personally love that song n imagine KR in it...

Now, my dream is here true...

Im reading an OS on it...

I loved Rey's antics...

He was so cute...

Baatcutter is angry n he made her smile...

I loved d scene where he places his hand on heart...

Overall,

a beautiful...

amazing...

Stupendo...

Fantabulous...

Update..👏👏

I am waiting for my Aashiyan OS which u told u will write

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Anjori

@anjoriii

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Posted: 11 years ago

yeh pakka humari kria hi thi na ???

itni bold and wild ... ahem ahem

rey ke toh maze hain

anyways loved the OS

such a nice concept

amazing as usual ^_^

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

6th OS-
it was simply outstanding..
Kria's bold sensual steps were described wonderfully..her dress was Wow..
Finishing was superb..
Lucky Rey got Kiss in front of everyone!
Finally they became official..
Luvd it a lot

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

bwahahaaa.. Dee...

this was sooo awesomeee :D

i just loved it.. from the start till d end...

tooo gooddd :D

especially d start.. whn Rey ws leaning on his palm..but then slips..

Sharon asks him wats wrng wid him.. and he again gets lost.. lolaaa..

how he tried to manaofy her..

every1 helping him...

then chocolate pastry in d end..

too too tooo cuteee.. :$

Loved it.. Loved it sooo muchhh.. :* :$

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is fab

I loved how it started with Rey dreaming and later ended up with Kriyaansh..
The manan part pura filmy tha...

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Neha

@Neha_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved all d OSes
u r an amazing writer
amazing piece of work
plz accept my frnd request nd pm me when u update

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Jst a single word..cute..d os was damn cute nd i felt rey so so so adorable...actually ab tk ka bst os...

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it...

finally rey got a kiss from kriya...wo bhi sabke sab samne..

awsome os deethu...

tera yeh os ka series bahut superb hai..

thnks for the pm..

update soon

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payal sood

@love_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome os...
U r a. Fabulous writer...
Than for pm me

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was just fabulous and marvelous os... loved it from the start till the end...

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