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Posted: 11 years ago
this one is tooo awesome..
i just love this song
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay i have been gone for very long.. 😆
so read all the OS's in one go..

they were marvelous...
you really work hard on these OS's and trust me your work really pays it off...
these OS's are dreamy...

well if i started to describe each and every OS's it might take the whole night 😛
but i can definitely say this that after reading these OS's i am speechless 😳😳
great work 👏👏
truly outstanding

thanks for the PM
and so sorry for the late reply
have been caught with school work 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
KriYaansh OneShot - 8




I am here again with a OS guys!!! ^_^


So this will be a whole new plot and yeah a bit of matured stuff . I gotta warn so I warned.

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"Mumma!!! please ! "he pouted again. She smiled at him. Her prince is too cute she kneeled beside him and cuddled him and kissed his head and said "okay!! "

"Sachi?? aap mai aur papa??? movie jayenge?? mai waha pe car race khelunga okay? " he got excited. She looked at her 3 year baby. He was too cute and lovable. She was about to say something when she heard him clear his throat / She turned back and saw him standing still looking away.

" beta papa aapkeliye chocolate laaye neeche papa ki bag mei hai .. leloge?? " Rey said lovingly.

"yay!! chocolate!! " he ran out to the stairs to reach down.

"dhyaan se Rehan!! " Kriya shouted and sighed. Never he will listen to her now when there is a chocolate down there.

She stood up and looked at him. He was looking everywhere except her . She finally decided to break the silence and before she could speak up he slid a envelope onto the table. They are not in talking terms since months.

She frowned and grabbed it and opened and felt a sudden hard blow . She needed something to take support now. Her eyes raged with anger and looked at him with her blood red eyes.

"Ye kya hai?? "she shouted but stopped seeing her child there. She turned aside wiping her tears and walked to him gathering him in her arms. He was about to cry when she cooed him and took him to his room.

"mumma aap aur papa baat kyun nahi karte?? "he asked innocently.

She sighed. She just can't let this smal heart get effected and even know these things .

"nahi beta mai aur aapke papa toh bet lagaye hue the ki koun kitne din baat nahi karega"she faked a smile

"mai bhi khelun?? "he asked excited.

"nahi beta abhi tum uskeliye chote ho kk?? baad mei?? " she made him sleep and walked to their room . He is still standing there.Closing the door she asked.

"kya hai ye sab?? " he was silent still looking away.

"maine poocha kya hai ye sab "she gritted her teeth making him irritated.

"divorse papers ! dikhtha nahi?? mujhe tumse divorse chahiye... I want freedom from you!! " he spatted venom and turned other side controlling his anger.

" ghutan hoti hai iss ghar mei... tere saath rehne mei!! I wish mai tumse kabhi mila hi nahi hota " he kept on speaking but stopped hearing a thud. He turned back immediately and found her on her knees looking down blank face. He walked a bit close.

" sach mei aap divorse chahte hai mujhse?? "she asked emotionless.

"haan, maine sign bhi kardi tumhara baaki hai ab "he said looking away irritatedly.

"meri ek condition hai bas "she spoke further . He frowned and looked at her.

" Kal raat ko ... will you make love to me??? one last time " she spoke still with no emotion but rey was shocked at her condition .

"How can I "he was cut

"rehan aisa hi paida nahi hua na "she for the first time in those five minutes looked up gritting her teeth.

"theek hai "he said hesitantly!!

" bilkul waise hi jaise pehli baar hui " she said and walked out to rehan's room shutting the room behind her.

Next day she spoke when he was about to leave.

"ghar jaldi aayiye ga "she said and left with rehan . He locked the house and left to the office. He felt highly awkward and weird at Kriya's condition. He brushed off his thoughts and continued his work


IT was 7:30 in the evening and he entered the house. It was unusually silent and he saw her working near the dining table

"rehan kaha hai ?? " he asked her

" meri mom ke paas" she said never looking up.

"kyun?? "

"aage bhi toh wahi rehna hai!! aadat dale toh acha hai "she said and went into kitchen .

he freshend up and came down and both had their dinner in silence. Rey is feeling highly awkward thinking about the condition and all what will happen in few hours. He is not confident that he could do something like such and started getting tensed that he won't get a divorse.

As he entered their room later after attending some calls he saw the room dimly lit in candles. Exactly the way they were on their first night. He saw his shaadi ki sherwani lying on the bed. He sighed and felt highly disgusted at what she is asking him to do. Once he sat on the bed he heard the door click open. He turned sidewards to see her walk in the same shaddi ka jhoda . As she came and stopped a bit in he saw her and noticed the long frame hanging down the wall which was their photo taken in a standing position .. he hugging her from side and she looking down cluthing her lehenga tight blushing. He looked at the picture and her. He never in mean time noticed she had grown lean a bit and lost that bubly look on her face and looked much more matured now. He walked to her slowly when he sensed her stiffen. He still had the same effect on her. He slowly in trance cupped her face and she started breating high eyes closed. Just like the first time.

Their's was arranged marriage. They as any normal couple got married. Both had these strong sensations and sparks whenever they look at each other and Rey made love to her on their first night. That night was the first time in actual he went that close to her and touched her. And later what followed was a night of pleasures

He leaned in and kissed her cheeks when she gripped his sherwani collar tight . He gathered her in his arms and carried her to the bed and making her lie on it gently he layed beside her and freed her from her pallu. She looked so divine and all he could do is just admire her by his kisses. He went upon her and slowly took her lips into his and both kissed with all the restlessness they had in their hearts. His hands worked on their own making her moan high and his lips suppressing her moans. She grabbed onto his hair and pulled him back to take a breathe but he mercilessly kissed her again with all the strength he has. She crushed beneath him. She wriggled feeling his manly frame on hers. As his hand untied her lehanga and slid in to caress her thighs she caught his hand and he looked up at her. She had called for it but now she is just not able to handle it. She nodded her head pleading him to stop.

"tum hi toh chahti thi baby!! "he whispered in her ears with a heavy voice.

" nahi chahiye mujhe.. aur maine already papers pe sign kardi "she said pushing him and sat up to leave. She is just not able to take the pleasure he was giving to her and the fact that he will leave her forever made her inners shatter more. But even before she could step down he pulled her hard by arm and trapped her between him and the matress.

"not so easy baatcutter "he said with a evil smirk and kissed her hard when his hands worked on her clothes . She closed her eyes tight clutching the sheets as he kissed her everywhere. He played for his content with her and she felt his naked form press into hers. She snap opened her eyes . He gently took her into a kiss making love to her.

She moaned his name high as both reached those unsaid pleasures.

Once making love to her he fell on her his head nuzzled in her crook of neck tired. He was fast asleep . Once she realised he is asleep she tried to move him off her. But his grip around her failed her attempts. She slowly reached out to the table beside the bed and tried to grab a bottle of sleeping pills in its drawer. She didn't expect Rey to fall asleep on her. She struggled to grab it and finally could only girp it with her two fingers and in the process of taki it out it slipped out and fell out of her hand.She looked at the pills spilled on the floor. Rey woke up and rubbed his eyes on hearing noise and he looked at kriya who was beneath him and frowned seeing her seeing somewhere and followed her gaze. His anger had no bounds seeing those pills. He bought those for himself as he won't get a peaceful sleep at times.

"wo yaha kaise aayi ?? " he gritted her teeth when kriya lowered her eyes and looked away.

Those pills were supposed to be in his study cabin. that too somewhere deep in the locker out of rehan's reach.

"ye sab kya hai kriya?? ye kya kar rahi thi? " he shouted at her and getting no response he held her hands high crushing her more and asked.

"maine poocha karna kya chahti ho?? "shouted right on her face making her flinch .

"marna chahti hun!! bas ... pata chal gaya?? "she shouted back as tears formed in her eyes.

"u were not like this!"he said shocked.

"aap bhi toh nahi the aise... par tab bhi maine yahi kaha aaj bhi wahi kehti hun Rey!! meri life aapse start hoti hai aur aap pe khatam.. aap mujhse har baat pe naaraz hote the.. baat nahi karte the toh mai office mei over time karne lagi ... aap mere haath ke khana nahi chahte the.. par mai banana chahti thi.. isiliye haath jalaya. taaki chahke bhi aapkeliye khana na bana paun.. ab aap mujhe nahi chahte..acha yahi haina ki mai hi mar jaun"she said controlling hard to not cry in front of him.

"but u can't do that Kriya ... kuch bhi bolo u were not this stupid " he said shocked. She is one of the wisest girls he had come across.

" mai aapko uske saath nahi dekh sakti I prefer this over that "she cried finally. letting her heart out. He froze , went all pale. He was all blank when she noticed and spoke out.

"aaj aapse baat karne office aayi thi "she said wiping her tears. He got alerted. His heart bleeded badly.He cupped her face and spoke

"I swear. ma... mai uske paas tak nahi gaya ab tak " His eyes started watering. She wiped the single drop which slipped from his eyes and said

"I know... agar aisa hota aap mere paas tak nahi aate"she smiled and moved a bit when he moved aside and she was gathering her clothes to get up. He gulped hard. Isn't she the one whom he loved a lot. And how could he even think he loves his assistant?? He hurriedly turned to her to see her sitting . He caught her hand.

"kaha jaa rahi ho?? " he asked tensed.

"Newyork keliye kalkeliye ticket book karne. Papa bhi hamesha se chahte hai mai unke saath kaam karoon"she sad with a small smile and was about to leave when he pulled her back and came upon her.

"u don't understand right??? "he gave a small smile. She looked at him confused. He bent slowly and bit her earlobe increasing her breath. he placed his hand down her throat and said

"shaant baatcutter.. breathe slow. pehli baar nahi ki mai tumhe touch kar raha tha "he looked at her with a naughty smile. She held this confused expression on her face. He leaned in taking her lower lip in his and biting it once and looked at her. Touching their foreheads he spoke.


" ye sab jo hua abhi.. wo fake nahi tha baatcutter!! Its not an end of journey. Its a new begining for our lives. "he looked hopefuly innto her eyes she she grinned and tears flowed continuously.

"I don't understand mai aise kaise kar sakta hun!!! I love YOU!! mai apni pyaar ko bhool gaya aur rehan .. wo toh humari pyaar ki jeeta jhagta proof hai I even forgot him. I am bad.. a bad husband aur papa bhi "he cried hugging her tight.


She kept quite. He looked at her,

"I am sorry baatcutter!! mai kabhi aisa nahi karoonga firse"he pleaded her but she gave a sad smile

"its too late rey!! "he said as she took deep breathes. He panicked. Patted her cheeks pulling her in his lap sitting. One deep breathe and she closed her eyes.

"kriya you can t do this to me " he cried hard and was blank . He sprinkled water but she didnt respond . He placed his ear near her heart. Its still beating . He grabbed hos mobile and was going through the contacts with shivering hands. He in between looked at her once and froze. He caught her peep her one eye closed. He threw the mobile and grabbed her by shoulders to him.

" yeh koi mazak nahi hai!! "he gritter his teeth his eyes red due to tears.

"sorry rey par mazak nahi tha ye "she said looking down and looked at him at his questioning eyes.

" apne pyaar karne walon ko hamesha keliye khone ka dar aisa hi hota hai Rey!! " she said looking away. This raged him more.

"toh u wanted to teach me a lesson aur uskeliye u played this dirty act??? " he was breaking down with guilt already he can't think of loosing her even.

" nahi rey bas ye batana chahti thi ki I went through it once !! dobara jhel nahi sakti "she looked with helplessness at him .

He hugged her tight crying his heart out. Their ego's their fights had drawn a very big line that he forgot his feelings towards her. He was glad that he is back to his love.

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"baatcutter jaldi !! "he shouted . He sighed

"firse normal "he sighed as she never came out. After few minutes she came down fast and tripped and fell in his arms.

"careful kriya "he scolded her and she pouted.

"chale ab?? "he said annoyed. She never takes anything seriously . That annoys him more.

"waise tera handbag kaha hai?? don't tell me you forgot. already itni late aur upar se."

he was cut

"maine ne chutti li.. mai toh rehan ko wapas laane aarahi hun "she grinned. He found himself pulling her close and kissing her. Her smile is so irresistable.

"chutti?? kab tak?? "he asked locking the door.

"hamesha keliye !! "she grinned and his smile vanished.

"kyun?? " he frowned and it clicked him

"no no no no baatcutter. Tum chod nahi rahi ho and "

"arey.. aapko kya pata .. mere pati ko har raat kuch alag aur yummy sa chahiye hota hai!! uski planning toh karni hai mujhe "she winked at him . He wondered how he forgot that he loved this girl to no extents. But no regrets now. He will love her more now. He pulled her close promised her and himself their start of new life with a kiss filled of love.


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So here it comes to and end!! :D

please do hit like and comment.

Stay safe and healthy.

-deetha😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dee... OMG... ye kya likha tune??? 😲

damn..it was sooo beautifull yarr...

I loved it soo damn much...

The tiffs b/w both of them...

Rey realising what blunder he has done...

I honestly loved how Kria emoted her emotions aftr Rey saw those pills..

I mean that whole scene.. damn it made me emotional... sacchi...

it was damn beautiful..

very well written...

Loved it.. 🤗
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful shot Dee..
Emotional tha..
Starting mai I felt ki aisa suna hai but the twist you gave made this special..
I loved it when he realized how much he loved Kriya and was scared seeing those Tabs...
Her leaving out the job for him makes it interesting...Rehan the kid is tooo innocent...


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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous os
rehan he is so cute
rey kriya ke alawa kisi aur se kisi aur se kaise pyaar kar sakta hai 😡
kriya sleeping pills lene vali lene wali thi aur rey ne yeh dekhkar uspar bahut gussa kiya
I loved it when he realized how much he loved Kriya and was scared seeing those Tabs...
Her leaving out the job for him makes it interesting.


u r awsm writer
pta nahi apke pass itne ache ideas kaise aate hai
hats off to u


Edited by angel_luvkreya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
di ye kya tha
me tho ro rahi the padte waqt it made me emotional😭
or rey wo kisse or se kaise pyaar karsakta ha jabki itni beautiful wife hai uske pass😡
or rehan he is so cute
and i loved it when he raliazed he love kria so much😊
finally happy ending

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing os...
first their divorce talk
den kria's condition
der love making
rey's breakdown...
every thing was nicely pennd...
lykd it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
dat was 1 of ur finest work...start was similar 2 an another os i guess marriage bt later on it tuk a full on turn...my breath got hitched sensing kria died...bt came back 2 normal reading afterwards...rehan is so innocent...kria's way of bringing rey back on track was fullproof...fail hone ka to koi chance hi nai..rey realized there is no one other den kriya 4 him...ending was quiet nyc...kria left her job 4 him...great shot, do write more...😊
jst felt lyk asking, ap kisi ko bi pm nai krti ya m exception..?😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome as always

Ah-Mazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Dis was a really different piece from U

Update Soon :)

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