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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: aishasully
Awsomw maaa kya update likha hai appne maza agaya mwahhh obviously my maa update is always the best

awww aishu!! :* lub you!! 😳

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
reswaaa

unreswa...

Dee.. what the heck was that..??? 😲

OMG.. i jst cant believe...

Did i actually read it.. 😲

Dee wat a concept mann..

it was simple.. but the way u showed it.. it added even more to it...

mannn.. i'm actually stunned...

stunned with Kria's boldness...

she danced like a seductress..

dee.. kha se aise moves ke idea aaye tujhe? *thou i know the answer but still* 😆

and that red dress... goshhh...

looks like ki u were in quiet a lot NT's land while writing it.. 😛

i can imagine Rey's shocked expressions.. and whn she left the way he screamed..ahahaa... mast tha... 😆

awesomeee OS Dee... 😃

As alwaz.. Loved it.. 😃

I am soo happy that you loved it!! <3

and yeah so much in NT land :P😆

Red dress badi sexy haina?😉

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

hahahaaa..kuch zyada he sexy hai.. and trust me woh dress dekh ke..and Kria's one dance move.. ahem.. that reminded me of that only...

well u know wat i mean.. dont u.. 😉

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
hahahaaa..kuch zyada he sexy hai.. and trust me woh dress dekh ke..and Kria's one dance move.. ahem.. that reminded me of that only...

well u know wat i mean.. dont u.. 😉

haha I know I know but now kindly shut up!!😆

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

That was awesome dee.. ^_^

loved it...

red dress was so amazing..

and lovely..

and the how you showed how the entire relationship works was amazing..

just kind of lovely...

the way you showed how they dance and everything was so good...

and the way how they confessed..

amazing.. ^_^

check your FB msgs..

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Now that was a seductive OS

kitna masst tha

the BB match reminded me of DMG

hayyeee Kriya's bold moves ne toh killed Rey...

loveeed it

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

wow dii its an amazing update👏

i just loved it😊

aise os aur likha karo

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Ho kya raha haii yah...

Whats happening in your mind..
yeah kahan se likha...
Aise kyu

Mujhe marna hai Ghar ka address hai nah tere pass ghar aake mar daal mujhe..
Aise nah maar..
I'm serious
This was hell...

So much of Bold Kriya
Rey ko tho shocked hi chod diya

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

woahhh deetha...

that was freaking awsummm...

loved it truellyyy...

nd red dresses ...soo sexy babe... i m imaging her nd she us truelly a seductress...

nd her dance moves...

her boldness is jst freaking awsumm ...

beautifully written...

nd amazingly u wrote it before 1:30... :o
i thought it must be aftr 4...:p

sweetly sweet os... ^_^