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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

You don't complete me. You remind me that I am already whole."

I have no words for this beautiful OS. I have always loved your work and have been not able to follow your other stories but this was absolutely beautiful.

You gave us a honeymoon no one could have thought off and the thought behind keeping her whole name.

I am now going to start reading your FF's from where I have left them, as now I have time .

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG!! This was so beautiful, soothing and calming.
This is so much more and I fail to put it exactly in words. But there was as much love and passion to it as the understanding, peace and contentment.
And the last line written behind the photograph was so good.
It had a envelope of peace and tranquility surrounding it.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I love this unRB like OS very much. Another great example of your versatility. It was a great journey of how their rocky beginning turned into a beautiful journey of love, friendship and simply being the person to bring the best in each other. Indeed reminding each other of how complete they are is the best feeling a partner can instill in their companion. Glad you created this gem for us readers as it was a pleasure to read!

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

What a beautiful OS! Loved the smooth pace, there is something solid in the knowledge of loving and being loved and having that love acknowledged.

This is what I had loved so much about ASR - when he hated - he hated with passion and when he loved he loved with passion. This is such a rich beautiful character - and the two of them together, make it a whole for us!

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This one was great *thumbs up*

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This was one of the awesomest os I have ever read 😊

Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 12 years ago

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Enchante

@Enchante

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

As always brilliantly penned.

You have captured the nuances of love, life and friendship so very beautifully that I am in awe. The warmth, the familiarity, the affection, the touch, and the trip all delighfully fall into place. Khushi's hesitancy in wearing that bathing suit and Arnav's playfulness by keeping in the secret was real fun to read.I read a while back that the phrase 'happily married' is an oxymoron.

Well Arnav and Khushi here seem to live and breath that oxymoron then.

I am so glad I found you. (Which makes it sound like a love declaration...But I am in love woth your writing style...)

So long. I loved the fish. 😊

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Beautiful, natural, real and oh so tender is how I describe the relationship between Arnav and Khushi...

They bicker, laugh, make love and truly appreciate and...like one another. Many people fall in love, but the beauty comes from being best friends with the person you love. It's not all about passion and intensity all of the time...

Yet another one of your works where so much feeling is conveyed in such honest writing. 👏

Edited by moomin4455 - 12 years ago

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DaisyHoney

@DaisyHoney

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awesome piece written 👏 ⭐️

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

RB, that was so exquisite, I have no words to say anything except that this was every woman's dream honeymoon (at least it was mine) --- the kind of honeymoon that lays out the foundations of the married life that should follow such a honeymoon.

That teared me up and cheered me up!

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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