OS: The Sum of all parts.

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow

that was so beautiful.

till date i have always read about them being soul mates and life partners but today u have showed me how a relationship has so many sides to it..fighting, loving, caring...everything!

how a relationship is incomplete without frndship and trust!

i am absolutely touched by this work of urs!

absolutely loved it!!!!

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

recently saw this beautiful story...don't have words to express myself here...

pure, simple,innocent love story...u detailed the love, trust and understanding ness of arnav and kushi...

thank u soo much for giving us beautiful OS...

cheers,
kushiarnav1.

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

This was beautiful. ...very romantic

I had alwats thought that your strength is in writing thrillers...nope. this one was too good.. you can write almost anything

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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Well, this was different from what you usually write. This was more warm, and excluded a sense of comfort and familiarity... this is the kind of work I'd like to read next to a fireplace with a cup of hot chocolate in hand. The story was warm and comfortable, without being too saccharine or smutty. Loved it.

Thank you for dropping me the message, RB. I miss our email conversations.

-Vee

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

it was a beautiful piece...u know me,always been ur fan 😊

had all d right ingredients without being in ur face...friendship/love/intimacy/discovering each other/fun etc

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

beautiful os...loved reading each & every part...from starting to taking her passport to their enign of jouney...perfect honeymoon...loved the last line of arnav..

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

A wonderful piece, Arnav and Khushi were portrayed quite differently here and I like it!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

It was not just the OS that I liked but the underlying connotation to it. Like for example the scene at the airport; so unique yet so relatable. Perfectly put, with differing opinions (and rightly so).

A honeymoon away from the hustle and bustle of not just their family members but also the regular hoeymooners, getting to know each other in the process, their indulgences and explorations with the classical intermittent drizzle in the form of the things we are used to, may it be Arnav's insistence on the wet suit and Khushi's explanation on wearing one or the phone call to the family (I so wish we had this in the show)...all of it was just so wonderful!

But the line that takes the cake was the take on the famous 'You complete me'. Arnav couldn't have articulated the presence of Khushi in his life in a better manner.

Loved it!