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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

so beautiful, so detailed, so cosy, so romantic yet so comfortable honeymoon. it is the best i read

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Hope your doing fine now...RB!

That was spectacular ...it was amazing ..loved it...RB!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Welcome back, RB.

Hope your wrist is better now.

I don't have words to express myself here.

This was such a beautiful love story.

Don't know how you manage to write such different stories.

This was a pure and simple love story and I loved it.

Their friendship, their love, their relationship is so beautiful.

Love how they understand each other.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautifully written ! Nevertheless ... despite the quote ! ❤️

Edited by _disha_ - 11 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

It's been so long since I read something you wrote that I'd forgotten just how brilliantly effortless and yet extremely refined and professional your writing is. Writing in the present continuous tense always gives a piece the edge of being...live...if done well and you do it with such elan

To me you are like the Aamir Khan of Arnav-Khushi writing!

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Rushed from twitter to IF to read it...
U knw I still sometimes read ur story LOnely Under Sheets...becoz that story covers some realistic aspects of Married life in a beautiful way...
This OS is fantastic...I was just lost in another world while reading this...I m loving this Arnav though khushi seem bit strange to me...A naughty cheeky Arnav is always LOVE LOVE LOvE...Teasing cajoling Khushi into his plans...
Its awesome Sookie...
One thing I want to tell U that after 3 or 4 years when I will b married,,I would defintly make my Husband read this n take me on a such trip...*lost in dreamy world*
U r brilliant writer Sookie...I m waiting for next chapter of Waves n Particles...:)
Hope so ur wrist is doing fine...

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I am at a complete loss for words to describe exactly how i feel after reading this and that is my state just about everytime i read any of your works...they render e speechless. You never cease to amaze me RB.

Your writing has an inherent charm in it and its simplicity and effortlessness are perhaps the most alluring qualities of it. You know you are brilliant and i just enjoy reading everything you write.

I wish i could express my admiration eloquently but words always seem superfluous and inadequate to me.

Just keep on writing because you are great at it.👏

p.s.- Thanks for the pm.

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

RB,

This is a truly beautiful OS, which romantically captures every nuance of their relationship with frankly awe inspiring clarity; you perfectly depict the inherent fiestiness, friendship, and love in the relationship. Importantly the story shows an honest discovery about each other, which for me is the hallmark of what every successful, longlasting relationship in our lives are all about. However what I loved the most is how you seamlessly blended their past, present and future and so in essence gave a snapshot into their blissful life together, full of fights and nok jhoks and also importantly; love.

Simply amazing

Manreet :)

Edited by manreet_gill - 11 years ago