Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9)

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_sree_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

excellent story dear...

brilliant writer..👏

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Just finished reading Loving Kushi.

WoW!!

What a fabulous tale.

Loved Arnav's character during redemption. Loved how Arnav was so forthcoming with his love and feelings for Kushi after he realized that he would be nothing without her. It was really refreshing to read how he was affected by her. It seemed so real.

I absolutely loved it when you had Kushi tell Arnav, simply and without malice all that he had done to her. And the horrendous way he felt for doing that.

The clincher was when she did leave. That was the cherry! And the fact that Arnav, in spite of his heart breaking, supported her decision. The words that Kushi spoke, the reaction from Arnav, oh that was so beautiful!

The separation and the subsequent union. OMG!

This is a really fabulous story. Thanks for (sharing and) letting me read it.

I love the way you pen their feelings. The raw passion is so tangible!

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kriti_atharv

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

man i have missed sooo much of your work...this was awsuuum...this is hat they needed to show in the actual series...loved it very much hun...simply beautiful...

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rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: amus5

what the ... 😲 😕

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aayt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

beautiful story well written emotions

u made me very emotional while reading it

the CVs had many bloopers that made second half of IPPKND not so appealing

the IPPKND way more beautiful if they use such a story like this

awesome job dear

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rima

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

I rarely read FF and i am even less prone to following them addictively

I read your story in one go

Please take a bow

I have no words to express my admiration

What I like about your FFs is the feel good aura, the beautiful essence of every character being kept intact, the humour, the pain, the side characters like tiwariji-----it is truly a joy ride

thank you for this from the bottom of my heart

whenever i miss my beloved sow which I still do writers like you revive the memories and joy

and you are by far one of the best

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

That was so lovely. .
I mean superb yaar!!
whatever we didn't get to see in the show. .but desperately wanted them to show such situations ..
Arnav telling the truth to the entire family. .
the remarriage before the contract ends. .
his apologies to Khushi. .
when he speaks out everything he has hidden. .
Still wen khushi decides to leave. .
the separation makes their bond n love stronger. .

n then happily ever after ❤️ 😳

Beautifully written. . 🤗