Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9) - Page 16

Love u smita... And love ur work!!!

such a beautiful description of emotions.
loved how tiwariji n girija devi played perfect cupids. n the ramcharitmanas' aranya kand was a perfect fit 👏
finally arshi togeher. for hameshaa.
lovely ending although i never wanted it to end. 😳

waiting already for 12th.

Simply beautiful story. Thanks for the email and see you at the next story!

i am already missing dis story

PART - 20

ok finally khushi realised dat she does not belong there where she is in varanasi coz her mind nd soul belongs to where her arnavji is..! ❤️

loved it how u have made her realise how much she is missing her hubby nd she should get back to him immediately..!

Girija devi's words keep on ringing in her mind nd wen going to sleep she all dreamt of her hubby nd his care which he showed to her from d time they had met nd gradually wit evrythng flashing in front of her eyes he realised dat she is missing her hubby nd its time for her to b in his arms nd there witout thnking for a momnt also she called him up nd cried her heart out making arnav firstly go confused by her sudden crying nd den wen khushi said dat she wants to see him nd dat too as soon as possible,he could nly feel complete by thnking dat his wife's dev maiyaa has finally listened to him nd is all set to bring khushi back in his life nd witout wasting a minute he started to bring his wife back wit him..!

Loved it how khushi finally bid goodbye to all nd thanked girija devi to make her understnd evrythng nd realise dat her life witout arnav is simply incomplt nd i love it how d old man tiwari ji who is knwn to b angry alwaz also gifted her a box of jalebi nd she hugged him saying him good bye nd there wen she was waiting for her hubby looking at d door,she saw him enter nd witout wasting a minute she ran to hig him nd he happily took her in his embrace close to his heart promising himslf dat he will neve eve let he go ❤️

wat a beautiful chappy it is

loved it to bits ❤️

C 🥳 NGRATS ON NEW THREAD

so beautiful that i can not describe it...thank you

PART - 21

I love it how they were sitting in d car nd stealing glances nd khushi could not help but keep her hands on his thighs nd he mentally thought dat he owed to devi maiyaa nd girija devi for making khushi cm back to him nd on their way back to their home it startedtto rain as if nature is also poring love on these true lovers nd arnav could not help but get all lost in d sight of his wife enjoying d rain nd he took her to d hotel room nd their wen khushi got herslf out of his coat nd arnav could see her in d pink saree,her curves revealed to his eyes he could not help but let himslf drown into her beauty..!

Loved it how u have taken up dat rainy night nd described arnav's passion for her nd this clearly made khushi believe dat since that very day her hubby is all attracted towards her nd his love has increased wit each passing day nd here they r together in love wit each other truly nd madly..! ❤️

nd then their promises of staying up wit each other for alwaz nd forever nd their kiss to seal d deal nd then their talks abt their love nd passion nd khushi's trembling hands making him get rid of his clothes nd utteing those beautiful words "humare dhadkane ek ho jati hai",hayeee beautiful ❤️

lovely chappy nd perfct ending smitu di 👏

loved it to bits ❤️

will miss this story a lot but me sure u will cum up wit yet another beautiful story soon..! 😳

Super updates but sad it ended 😭 was really enjoying reading dis ff and loving dis beautiful love story and Ye dat was super romantic way u've made them together and finally now they are forever. Thank u sooo much 4 such a wonderful romantic ff and now will be waiting to see ur nxt ff of which KHUSHI, well lets see on 12th September .