Swaron FF: End of Love??[NEW CHAPTER UP!FINALLY]

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Interesting concept...

Awesome start...👏

pls update soon..

thanks for the pm...

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

This ff is gonna be ahmazing!!
The start was just perfect!!
N if m not wrong..both the boys n the girls vl end up in the same club..ryt??😆
Waiting fr the update!!

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

this ff looks a lil promising to me

amazinggly penned

swayam n sharon's pain was very beautifully written

n the small flashback was very heartwarming

i know this ff will will have some really tear-jerking moments

the first flashback indicated tat

it was very heartwrenching to see sharon

remembering when she fell in love wit swayam

looking forward for the update tannu 🤗

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

loved the first update!!swayam filed the divorce..well that was shockingloved the kriya sharon sister bondexcited for more..thanks for the PM

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

amazing update..
beautifully written ..
flash back was so cute..
but the present was not so good ..why divorce :(
n swayam first send sharon divorce file was shocking n acting everything is fine..
really want to know more..
thanks for the pm ..
update soon :)

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: zk456789
Wow awesome start
Now waiting for swaron to meet
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

Thank you dear 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -Raj-
amazing start!!
waiting for swaron to meet!!
your 3rd update I am reading nd this is a lot of fun!
ty for the pm.

Thank you dear 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
Wow awesome start
u put 1 chap very nic... flashback was good

sharon loves swayam...

swayam loves sharon...fir wo hide kyu kar rha ha...aisa kya hua unke beech...

batane ke liye age update kare jab time mile...

Do update soon

Ab unke beech kya hua.. yeh sab kyun ho raha hai uske liye wait toh karna padega 😉

Thank you dear 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Whoa tanvish what an awesome kickstart to your story with such an awesome concept..👏.
They're divorced already??.
Their individual POV's were shown very nicely by you and both kria and rey understand their natures very well.. Both are not the one's who would express their feelings infact they would lock their feelings inside themselves..
Swayam sent the divorce papers to sharon..😲??
I'm looking forward to the clubbing night which will be their first meet after their divorce..
Plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon na I can't really wait to read the next chapter..😊.
P.S- I liked sharon and swayam's outfits they're good..👍🏼.
Thank you for the pm tannu..
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

Thank you so much Kashmi 🤗

This concept is very close to me so I'll put in more than my 100% n I hope everyone likes it..

Shall update soon 😉

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: austen4ever
great start. i like the cool, don't care swayam.
sharon n kria flashback was very cute n very real. thats what sisters do. that and a lot of blackmail!
im guessing they are both going to the same club n we are gonna see swayam thawing , maybe jealous of watching sharon dance with someone else...umm...thats enough guessing for now. gonna wait for you to update

In this FF Kriya and Sharon's relation is something very very very close to me so maybe in future u'll see some more Kriya-Sharon scenes 😃

Keep guessing shayad koi tukka lag jaye 😆 😉

Thank you so much for the comment 😃