Swaron FF: End of Love??[NEW CHAPTER UP!FINALLY]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone,
I just got this thought out of the blue the other day..
I don't know if you'll will like it because its completely out of randomness..
I don't even know how am I going to proceed with the story as I just have a vague concept
So please help me decide if I should write the story or not!




Prologue

College ka woh pehla pyaar..
Woh khoobsurat dates..
Woh first Kiss..
Woh gift's..
Woh raat raat bar baatein karna..
Roothna.. Manana..
Woh Romance..
Woh mushy-mushy talks..
Zindagi bhar saath rehne ke vaade..
Perfect proposal..
Aur fir 'The Perfect Wedding'

What a Perfect love story... Isn't it?
And not to forget.. The Happily Ever After..
Par Shaadi ke baad kya sach main sab Happily ever after hota hai??

Shaadi ko leke bahut se muharavre (pharses) sunne honge

'Shaadi ka laddo jo khaaye woh pachtaye aur jo naa khaaye woh bhi pachtaye..'

'Shaadi ke pehle pyaar ek khoobsurat ehsaas hota hai.. Par jaise hi Biwi andar, pyaar khidki ke bahar'

'Jhagada karne se pyaar badta hai'
Sach main?!

Par agar yeh hi fights shaadi tutne ka reason bann jaye toh?
Kya aisa sach main ho sakta hai?

Do log jo college ke dino se ek dusre ko jaante the.. Samjhte the..
Ek dusre se pyaar karte the.. Jinhone poori zindagi saath rehne ka faisla kar liya tha, ek din achanak DIVORCE jaisa bada decision le liya?

Aakhir hua kya hai?
Kya Shaadi ke baad sach main do logo ke beech pyaar kum ho jaata hai?
Kyun liya divorece?
And after divorce how are things between them?

That's for you'll to decide..
So tell me should I write a story or not?
Please leave in your valuable comments and let me know..




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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue: Page 1
Character Sketch : Page 4
Chapter 1 : Page 8
Chapter 2 : Page 11
Chapter 3 : Page 17 [2 Important Notes]
Chapter 4 : Page 22
Chapter 5 : Page 27
Chapter 6 : Page 33
Chapter 7: Page 37

Edited by TannuVsmSwaRon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar awesom concept..
do continue...
n update jaldi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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do continue...

very nic concept ...


happy ending karna plzzz


update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept
I m luving it alooottt
Plzzz do continue as i know am seriously gonna luv this story alooot
Plzzz update cs or 1st part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I actually really liked the concept.
Do continue.
And thank you for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ye bhi koi puchne waali baat hi ofcourse u gotta continue this after giving such a lovely concept and give us the fabulous updates that you always give.😃.
And kisne bola torture hai padhna bilkul torture nahi hai we love reading your updates so definitely definitely continue and jaldi update do is FF ki..😉.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept..I think, it can be the continuation of 'Best journey ever'.. I mean, they are gonna get married soon in that FF, know.. Then you can continue it in this new one.. How was their life after marriage.. Think about it... I will be awesome.. Something like a season 2...😛Do tell me what do you think about my suggestion.. (pm or scrape me)..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept !! 😊
Continue soon... 😊
P.S - But plz happy ending !! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow concept!!!
i am sure you will rock it!!!
thnks for the pm:)

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