Swaron FF: End of Love??[NEW CHAPTER UP!FINALLY]

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sonii

@sonii

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Very very interesting!

So nice to see the happy SwaRon :) felt so real!

What is going on with them?

Please continue soon!

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

awesome... just superb... now i m so eager to knw what hpnd ke swayam divorced her... plz update soon...

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Awesome update :)

Emotional too ...

Update soon :)

Cant wait ...

Thanx for the PM :)

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

It felt so cute to read the Sharon pregnancy news part...and the "mr

daddy shekhawat"...awww

Bt the following dreadful news...shit it was so sad...

Can't wait ...plsss update soon..jaldi jaldi jaldi...

Thanks for the pm

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Res
unres

Fabulous update Tanvish..
Swayam's care in the beginning was heart warming
He was going to be a father! but then yeh kya hogaya?!
you really left this update at a cliffhanger Tanvish..
am eager for the next one..

Rey: Guys behave.. Ab tum dono Mom-Dad bann gaye ho..

Sharon-Swayam: Toh?

this line really cracked me up..😆
i havent mentioned this earlier..you have an amazing sense of humour too..
thanks for the PM

cheers
Nishi

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

res

unres

it was an amazingg update as always

the chapter was really nice

i really loved how you are adding an underlayer

to the subject you created

moreova your ability to craft english language is breath-taking

n magic tat it creates makes you feel so many emotions

while you are reading the next update

the writing was more straight-forward

i think the best part of this ff is it shows you more

i was completely intrigued on reading

swayam's side of the story

because he has tis guilt which he finds himself in

which makes him feel each day a little less removed

i was completely broken after i read the flashbacks

becoz it was emotional n stated how much in love they

both were wit each other

i also loved the part where you stated tat swayam had grown

to be a father rather than a husband or lover

another part which was fantastically

written was the scene where rishi hands over

the reports to swayam n swayam' s reaction

to the news in itself was epic

swaron 's relationship wit rishi n kr n swaron's realationship

was very emotional n intelligently used

you are becoming more like a

savage, satirical voice bursting onto the scene

keeping ur stories overflowing with vitality;

they are sometimes very dark

but they are also very, very funny.

The characters speak in a strange new language

a kind of heightened bureaucratese

, or a passively received vernacular

that is built around self-improvement clichs

i think tis will justify todays chapter

''I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking,

what I'm looking at,

what I see and what it means.

What I want and what I fear.''

hope to read sum interesting updates in the future

do update soon 😛

-rosy

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Tanvish,Ur writing is amazing dear,I am really sorry that i am too late here,Actually i was checking my pending PM's and found this FF to read..I am only done with prolouge,And seriously the concept is very different and way too interesting..The characterization was perfect as usual..I just loved the prolouge and excited to read firther,So now i am resering here for all the previous updates..

Till then keep writing
Thanx for ur all PM's,Keep sending me.Okay

Prateek