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Omg Khushi is only 13 omg ! Arnav is sooo nice ! Waiting ...

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DID YOU JUST... DID I JUSTT?? MATURE IN CONCEPT AND CONTENT??? IS THIS ANOTHER...??? *GAAAHH*

*FAINTS*

*WAKES UP AFTER A WHILE RUBBING HER EYES* ANOTHER STORY BY LAZYYLEAVESS!!!!!!!!!! *RUNS AROUND LIKE A HEADLESS CHICKEN, JUMPING IN JOYY*

*BONG* O.O DUDEEE I CANNOT STOP WRITING IN CAPS 😆 SUCH IS MY EXCITEMENT!!!!! [:D/]

Starting from chapter one, the starting was creepy, gave me chills but the ending was hayeee!!!!!! DroOl worthy
Aman is hunk and Lavanya is his lady-love, hayeee
The chapter had a very thrilling wala dramatic feel to it! (Hope it made sense) More like in those thriller novels where the hero fools the villian, grabs the girl and makes a run with his men taking care of the goons 😆
Dunno why, but felt like I was watching a hollywood movie in my mind 😉 Great start 👏

Shyam clearly looks like nut-case. Rally glad there is no Anjali . The place looked like wh***-house, and Khushi looked like she was kept for more fruitful oppurtunities Really glad ASR helped her out 😊

Moving on to chapter 2, looks like she'll be getting all the love that she has missing out on 😃 Nani seems to be aquainted with her, and maybe that's why she asked Arnav to get Khushi out of that hellhole! Just doing what I am horrible at, making guesses 😆

13 and 28? 15 years??????????? O.O *Baaahhh* I'm biting my nails here! Story dark nahi hai, isski mujhe buhat khushi hai The last time you wrote a dark story, I had my hands almost around Arnav's neck for putting Khushi through hell for no fault of her's! 😡 Well let's stay in the moment here, I'm sOOO looking forward to the update

Take care and update soOn 😊

P.S. Sorry for the late update, really sorry 😳

Wonderful update..!!

Arnav brought her to shantivan and was kind and polite to her..interesting.

Do continue soon..!!

15 year age gap...and Khushi is only 13!!!!!

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WoW!! That was an amazing Update...truly fantastic!!!!!!

You are right many questions have arised about khushi's relation to Raizadas??Why ASR helped her and the most surprising part was her age...Khushi 13...Oh my..and Arnav 28...so much age difference...And khushi is already in love with Arnav...So what next..she is so young...:|..confused..but i could bet you will make this storyy so awesome like all of your other stories tooo and I am looking forward to it...I am hooked already!!!!!

The marks on her body maybe because of the beating she had faced when she tried to escape from her uncle's house I think...:p

Plz Update soon!

And thank you so much for the pm...!!:)

what the?15 yrs age difference.😕
is she related to raizada?
waiting

oh before i forget happy birthday dear
what she is only thirteen
oh man that was even worse than i thought
so didnt see this coming as usual
i thought she might be like at least be 20 or something
but it seems that wasnt the case
but then still dont get what was going on
how did they come to know about her
and is this what they do
try to rescue girls like her from such fate
man that was bad real bad yaar
so they took care of her and she had no idea what was going on
well this sure is new
oh god had arnie never come for her what would have happened
well i just shudder to think what would happen
#thanx for mail

That was a surprising update...Arnav 28 n khushi just 13... Can't imagine what kind of story ur attempting...nevertheless it's interesting n intruguinh...

Loved it so far...can't wait as the sory unfolds...

OMG! she's 13? a kid!?