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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this is just perfect. As I was reading it I was visualizing the entire thing. I so wish that we got to see this in the show . Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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smit each tym i read ur updates i feel so so gud i cant even express!!
ur stories are so sweet and realistic that we can very well imagine barun and sanaya playing the roles and it always seems as if the show is playing in front of our eyes...😊
dis is also one of ur best shots..u have involved payal in it i loved it more..payal's character never had a chance to grow in d show but here she is having the same presence as arshi..acha laga sister bonding dekhke...😊
ur shud hindi is making me more perfect and giving me more command over the language..toh dekho ur updates are teaching me aswell...😆
at the start of this shot wen payal khushi were talking and almost beech tak pata nai chala ki wats the matter i was becoming restless ki akhir wats the matter and it turned out to be shyam..
always insecurities lead to fight between this couple and now arnav's insecurities is leadind to the fight now!!
khushi is intelligent😆😆
now dat she gave her kasam lets see wat happens!!
dis too is a nice one smita...😊
p.s:wen i first read the title i felt it must be something on the lines of our show wen janmashtimi happend arnav was all teasing khushi about their suhag raat but dis turned out to be whole different one
Edited by Cute6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Smita...That was Awesome👏
By reading itself i am able to visualise the scenes😃Loved it and waiting for the next part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Dear!😊
Loved it!!
Update the next part soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Smita, thank you for the pm.

The beginning was quite intriguing... it was fun trying to guess what Khushi wanted of Arnav and what he could be against... Shyam's name cropping up in betwixt added to the suspense! The Arnav-Khushi convo veering toward Aarav's preparation for his Hindi test is quite realistically done. Arnav jumping to the conclusion that he is being asked to dance to a devotional song and so refusing is pretty funny. Akash and Payal are right about not keeping Arnav in the dark... that way lies disaster, as Khushi knows! It seems like much ado over a simple song but thanks to the hurtful past associations with that name, things aren't all black and white. Again Arnav lamenting the fact that he hasn't been named after Krishna, unlike NK and Shyam, is damn funny! He finding, in Aman, his solution to every problem is hilarious. Wonder how he will get out of the predicament without breaking his darling wife's heart. Quite heart-warming and praise-worthy to note the smooth manner in which Arnav removed all of Khushi's worries by telling her how things can me managed so as to leave her with ample time to practise... of course, if it gets him some alone time with his wife, that's an added bonus. Khushi catching Arnav and Aman in a lie and even Aarav realising that his dad is in the doghouse is amusing. "Past me aisaa kayeen baar ho chuka hai ki galti meri hoti thi par main wahaan se chalaa jata tha. Aur tum.. peechhe rehkar sabki baatein aur taane sunti thi. (squeezes her hand) Main nahi chahta tha ki dobara..." that's a nice way to show Arnav's realisation of how much he has sinned against Khushi in the past... the mature manner in which both try to resolve their disagreement is like a breath of fresh air! Eager to know what Arnav will do. Loved the realism you brought to the dialogues, with nothing exaggerated.

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Janmashtami TS: Will he or wont he?
Part 2
28.08.13,8:30 am,poolside..
When Khushi came to the poolside,she found Arnav standing alone by the pool,deeply lost in thoughts.
The waves of the pool were reflecting on the sharp contours of his face.
Khushi lifted her saree slightly above her ankles & frowned.
Khushi(thinks): Paayal toh pehni hain humne. Phir Arnavji humari or mude kyun nahi?
She kept her hand on his shoulder and called loudly.
Khushi: Arnavji..
Arnav was momentarily startled.
When he turned around,he found his wife frowning at him.
Arnav: Kya hua?
Khushi: Woh.. Mohanji aa gaye hain. Toh.. hum.. nikal rahe hain.
Arnav: Okay. All the best! I'm sure u'll do well!
Khushi(faint smile): Shukriya! Achchha,suniye..
Arnav: Hmm?
Khushi: Phal dinning table par rakhe huye hain aur santre ka juice fridge me hai. Aarav uth jaaye uss k baad aap dono milkar naashta kar lijiyega.
Arnav(shocked): Aarav ab tak so raha hai?
Khushi: Ji.
Arnav(quirks his eyebrows): Strange!
Khushi: Jab tak woh khud se na uthe,aap usse mat jagaiyyega. Kal hi toh uss k tests khatm huye hain. Aaj aaraam karne ka haq banta hai usska!
Arnav nods in agreement.
Khushi: Aur suniye, Nanheji apne kisi dost se milne gaye hain. Jab woh aa jaayenge toh unhe bataa dijiyega ki unhe sabko lekar shaam k 6 baje tak Lakshminagar k peechhewaale maidaan me pahuch jaana hai.
Arnav: But tumhara program toh 6:30 se start hoga naa?
Khushi: Ha,lekin agar wohlog 6 baje tak nahi pahuche toh aage ki seatein nahi milengi. Aur peechhhe se kaaryakram dekhne me mazaa nahi aayega.
Arnav: Fine. Main usse bataa dunga.
Khushi: Janmashtami ki pooja ki zyaadatar taiyyaariyaan toh ho hi gayi hai. Aap bas pooja ka saamaan laakar Hari Prakashji ko de dijiyega. Aur.. samay par khana kha lijiyega aur dawaa le lijiyega.
Before Arnav could even nod..
Khushi: Aur haan! Naniji ko yaad karvaa dijiyega ki aaj se unhe khaane k baad pili waali goli k saath-saath hari wali goli bhi leni hai.
Arnav(frowns): Kaunsi hariwali goli?
Khushi: Hai 1 goli jo Dr.sa'ab ne iss baar likhvaayi hai.(holds her head) Uss ka naam yaad nahi aa raha hai..
Arnav: Not a problem! Main dekh lunga. Tum ghar ki chinta chhod do aur meri baat suno.
Khushi: Ha,boliye?
Arnav: Apnaa phone apne paas hi rakhna. Agar maine phone kiya aur tumne nahi uthaya na toh u've had it!
Khushi: Ha,ha theek hai! Pallu se baandh k rakh denge phone ko! Bas?
It was only after Khushi said the above line that Arnav's gaze fell on her saree.
Arnav: Aaj saaree kyun pehni?
Khushi: Tyohaar ka din hai naa? Toh humne socha saaree pehenna sahi rahega.
There was a minute of awkward silence between them.
Khushi: Toh.. hum.. chalein?
Arnav: Wait! Meri baat abhi poori nahi hui hai. Wahaan preparations aur practice k chakkar me khana mat bhool jana. Tumne kal dinner bhi theek se nahi khaya tha. 1 toh waise hi aaj fast hai. Oopar se tumhe dance bhi karnaa hai aur kaam bhi. Kuch khaaogi nahi toh weak ho jaaogi.
Khushi: Ji,hum kha lenge.
Arnav: Breakfast kiya tumne?
Khushi: Nahi,dibbe me le liya hai. Abhyaas karne k baad kha lenge. Ab humein.. jana hoga varnaa der ho jaayegi.
She turned & was about to leave when Arnav called her back.
Arnav: Khushi..
Khushi(turns around): Ji?
Arnav(pats her cheek): Take care.
Khushi felt herself tearing up.
Khushi(in a small voice): Aap bhi..
Arnav: Aur..
Paayal(calls loudly): Khushi...!
Khushi(turning towards the door): Aaye jiji...!
She wipes her tears before heading out of the room.
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15 minutes later..
Arnav recieves a text message from Khushi which reads: Sirf apnaa hi nahi,apne bete ka bhi take care kijiyega. Aaj k liye bhool jaiyye ki aapko doodh pasand nahi hai kyunki aaj Aarav ko doodh pilaane ki zimmedaari aapki hai! Chaahe jitna samay kyun na lagaaye aur chaahe jitne bahaane kyun na banaaye,jab tak doodh ka gilas khatm nahi ho jata,tab tak usse kursi se uthne mat dijiyega! Aur ramanchi karne k baare me toh sochiyega bhi mat! Agar humein pataa chalaa ki aap uss ki taraf ho gaye aur ussne doodh nahi piya toh aap dono ki khair nahi!
Arnav's lips curved into a smile as he read & re-read the text.
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28.08.13,2:00 pm,Shantivan..
NK was more shocked & less surprised when Arnav entered his room.
NK: Hey Nannav,mere bhai! Tum aaj mere room ka raastaa kaise dhool gaye?
Arnav(through gritted teeth): Dhool nahi,bhool!
NK(holds his ear): Sorry,sorry! So ya,aaj mere room me kaise aaye?
Arnav(admits): Mujhe tumhari help chahiye..
NK: Kaisi help?
Arnav thrusts a pendrive into his palm.
Arnav: Iss gaane par tumhe dance prepare karnaa hoga,2 ghanton me.
NK(confused): Dance? Aur woh bhi 2 ghanton me?!
Arnav(nods): Sharp 4 baje main car me tumhara wait karunga. Agar tum late aaye toh tumhe costume nahi milega! (points to his clothes)Phir tumhe yeh hi,track pants aur T-shirt pehenkar dance karnaa padegaa. So dont b late!
He is about to leave the room when NK stops him.
NK: Hello!? Oye Nannav! Tum mujhse favour maang rahe the ya mujhe order de rahe the?
Arnav(without turning around): Jo samajhna hai samajh lo!
NK: Agar main help karne se manaa kar doon toh?
Arnav(turns around): Toh Khushi k aansuon k liye tum responsible hoge!
NK(frowns): Aansu? As in.. tears? But why?
He runs after Arnav who had already left the room by that time.
NK: Hey Nannav! Wait!
Arnav stops,turns around & glares at him.
Arnav: Now what?
NK(concerned): Khushiji ko koi problem hai kya?
Arnav: Ha, hai. Lekin woh kisise uss ki problem share nahi kar rahi hai. Main usse uss problem se baahar nikaalna chahta hoon,jis k liye mujhe tumhari help ki zaroorat hai. Is it clear now?
NK: Yeah! Dont worry Nannav! (shows thumbs up) I'm with u!
Arnav: Thanks!
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Later that day,6:10 pm,Gupta House...
Khushi(wearing her earring): Tum jaao naa jiji. Hum aa jaayenge.
Paayal: Nahi Khushi. Hum intezaar karte hain. Ghar me koi bhi nahi hai. Aise me hum tumhe akela chhodh kar kaise jaa sakte hain?
Khushi: Oh-ho jiji! Hum koi bachchhi hain kya,jo tum iss tarah se chinta kar rahi ho!? Hum apneaap aa jaayenge. Tum jaao aur jaakar sab k liye aage ki seatein roklo.
She slides the necklace down her head & pulls the tussel.
Khushi: Aur waise bhi,jeejaji ka phone aaye huye kaafi der ho gayi hai.(wearing nose ring) Ab tak toh unhone clients ko hotel me chhod bhi diya hoga aur wahaan se nikal bhi gaye honge. Baaki sab bhi pahuchte honge. Aise me agar hum dono me se koi bhi wahaan nahi hua toh achchha nahi lagega. Buaji ki daant khaani padegi so alag!
Paayal: Theek hai. Hum nikalte hain. Taala-chaabi mez(table) par rakhe hain. Tum jaldi se taiyyaar hokar aa jaao.
Khushi(wearing hip belt): Humein bas choodiyaan pehenni hain aur haathon me altaa lagaana hai. Jaise hi altaa sookh jaayega hum waise hi aa jaayenge!
Paayal: Aur gajraa?
Khushi(realizes): Areh haan! Gajraa bhi toh lagaana hai! Achchha hua tumne yaad karvaa diya. Humein abhi usse fridge se nikaalkar lagaa lete hain varnaa bhool jaayenge!
She goes towards the kitchen & Paayal follows her.
Paayal: Jaldbaazi mat karnaa. Chachaji keh rahe the ki humare kaaryakram ka number shaayad 7:30 baje k aas-paas aayega. Abhi bahut samay baaki hai. Agar kuch reh bhi jaata hai toh ghar waapis aakar lene jitna samay hoga humare haath me.
Khushi(unwrapping the gajraa): Woh toh theek hai jiji par humein Krishna leela aur Raas bhi dekhna hai. Isiliye hum jald se jald aane ki koshish karenge. Ab tum jaao varnaa pataa chalaa jeejaji pahuch gaye aur tum ghar par reh gayi!
Paayal: Theek hai. Aakar darwaza band kar lo.
Khushi: Tum darwaaza bhed kar jaao. Hum toh waise bhi thodi der me aa hi rahe hain naa?
Paayal nodded & left.
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10 minutes later..
Khushi(thinks): Kuch hi der me kaaryakram shuru ho jaayega.Pehle haath k agle hisse (palm) par altaa lagaa lete hain. (opens the cork)Uss ka sookhna zyaada zaroori hai. Phir pichchhle hisse par lagaate hi nikal jaayenge! (tilts the bottle of altaa) Khuli hawaa me jaldi sookh jaayega.
She soaked the cotton swab with altaa and had barely started applying it on her fingertips when she felt a breeze.
A soothing breeze which gently played with the stray locks of her hair.
She was suddenly aware of the rate at which her heart was beating.
Khushi(looks around): Ar.. navji..?
She got up & peered outside from the window.
Khushi(thinks): Yahaan toh koi bhi nahi hai. Phir humein.. aisaa kyun lagaa jaise..
She dismissed her wayward thoughts as she came back to the bed.
Khushi(thinks): Humein unki yaad aa rahi thi shaayad isiliye.. Khair! humein apnaa waqt zaaya(waste) nahi karnaa chahiye. Jiji humari raah dekh rahi hogi.
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The bell rang the moment Khushi finished applying altaa on her left palm.
Khushi(loudly): Darwaaza khulaa hai amma..! Aa jaiyye..!
Aarav: Main hoon,mom...!
Khushi(smiles): Aarav? Andarwaale kamre me aa jaao,beta...!
The door opened & in walked Aarav & NK.
Khushi(smiles): Nanheji,aapk dost ki tabiyat kaisi hai?
NK: He's fine,Khushiji. Aap kaisi hain?
Khushi(frowns): Hum? Hum bilkul theek hai!
NK: Koi.. problem toh nahi hai na?
Khushi(wide smile): Humein kaunsi problem hogi? Sab theek hai! Waise,naniji kahaan hai?
NK: Woh aunty aur buaji k saath hain.
Khushi: Aur jijaji aaye?
NK: Ya,Aakashbhai bhi unlogon k saath hi hai.
Khushi: Badhiya! a.. Aarav,beta aapke dad.. kahaan hain?
Aarav: Woh toh office gaye hain.
Khushi: Achchha?
Khushi didnt know why she felt disappointed,when she herself had asked Arnav to stay away from the function.
Aarav: Unhone aap k liye kuch bhejaa hai.
Khushi(eager): Kya bheja hai? Dikhaao..
Aarav took out a steel tiffin box from the paperbag in his hand & showed it to her.
Khushi: Humare haath me altaa lagaa hai isiliye aap hi isse kholkar dikhaa do.
Aarav opened the box & showed it to her.
Khushi(surprised): Sabudaane k paapad?
Aarav: Aur bhi kuch hai.
He took out the other tiffin from the bag after placing the steel tiffin on the bed.
Khushi: Isse bhi aapko hi kholna padega,beta.
The second tiffin contained tiny rasgullas.
Aarav: Unhone mujhse kaha aapko yeh khilaane k liye.
Khushi: Hum baad me khaa lenge. Filhaal humein altaa lagaana hai. Aap dono maidaan me chale jaaiyye aur kaaryakram ka aanand uthaiyye.
Aarav: No mom. Mujhe yahaan rehne dijiye naa.. I'm not interested in the program. Yeh sab bahut boring hota hai.
Khushi: Aisaa nahi kehte hai Aarav! Aap jaakar dekhiye toh sahi. Aap ko Krishna Bhagwan ki story bataayi jaayegi-drama,bhajan aur dance k roop me! Bahut mazaa aayega!
NK: She's right,Aarav. Lets go.
Aarav: Par chachu..
NK: Agar aapko mazaa nahi aaya toh aap waapis aa jaana,okay?
Aarav(reluctantly): Okay.
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Khushi felt the breeze for the second time minutes after Aarav & NK left for the function.
This time it was stronger.
And her heartbeats were louder. And faster.
She was sure he was around!
Khushi(looking around): Arnavji,aap yaheen hain naa?
No response.
She came out of her room while looking for him.
Khushi: Hum jaante hain ki aap yaheen hain. Aapne kasam tod di isiliye aap humse chhup rahe hain,hai naa?
Still,no response.
She checked the kitchen,the living room,the backyard,the verandaah but they all were empty.
Khushi(irritated): Kahaan hain aap? Aaiyye naa saamne!
When she did not get a response this time as well,she gave up & went to her room.
Khushi(sitting on the bed): Mat aaiyye! Humein sataane me bahut mazaa aata hai naa aapko?
Arnav: I cant deny! Mazaa toh mujhe aata hai!
Khushi turned around to find Arnav in front of her.
Not wanting to give away her true feelings,she continued her act of pretense.
Khushi: Kahaan se aaye?
Arnav: Office se!
Khushi: Ghar me kahaan se aaye?
Arnav: Baahar se!
Khushi(irritated): Khidki se ya darwaaze se?
Arnav(points to the window): Khidki se. Jab tum mujhe baaki k rooms me dhoond rahi thi tab main yahaan tumhare liye wait kar raha tha.
Khushi: Kyun aaye? Humne kasam di thi naa aapko? Usse toda kyun?
Arnav: Maine koi kasam nahi todi. Yeh mat samajhna ki main yahaan tumhara program dekhne k liye aaya hoon! Main yahaan sirf apne bhai ka dance dekhne k liye aaya hoon.
Khushi(shocked): Bhai ka dance? Jijaji kaunsa dance karnewale hain?
Arnav: Main Aakash ki baat nahi kar raha hoon.
Khushi(confused): Phir kaun?
Arnav: NK!
Khushi: Areh waah! Jab woh aapko apna bhai kehte hain tab toh unse chhidte rehte hain. Aur aaj aap khud hi unhe bhai bulaa rahe hain!
Arnav: Kabhi-kabhi, zaroorat padhne par, gadhe ko bhai banaana padhtaa hai!
Khushi: Haww! Bade kharaab hain aap!
Arnav: Yeh baat tumse achchhi tarah se kaun samajh saktaa hai?
Khushi(agrees): So toh hai! Waise,Nanheji ko achaanak se dance karne ka vichaar kaise aaya?
Arnav: He's the best man to answer this question.
He pulled the wooden chair & sat down on it.
Khushi: Woh toh hum unse milne par poochh lenge. Aap yeh bataaiyye ki itna ban-than k kyun aaye hain aap?
She checked out his outfit from top to bottom,appreciating it inwardly.
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Arnav: Main yahaan ka daamaad hoon! Main ban-than k nahin aaunga toh kaun aayega?
Khushi(sarcastically): Bilkul sahi kaha aapne!
Arnav(stands up): Bekaar ki baatein chhodo aur yahaan aao..
He opened his arms wide & waited.
Khushi: Nahi aa sakte. (raises both her palms)Varnaa aapk safed kapde gulaabi ho jaayenge!
Arnav: In that case..
He unbuttoned the waistcoat & threw it on the table.
Khushi: Kya kar rahe hain aap?
Arnav(unbuttoning his kurta): Tumhe kya lagtaa hai?
Very soon the kurta found its place on the table.
Khushi: Aapk kapdon ki istri kharaab ho jaayegi.
Arnav(tossing his vest on the table): Mujhe uss se koi farq nahi padta hai! (opens his arms)Ab theek hai? Ya kuch aur bhi karnaa padega?
Khushi shook her head as she approached him.
Arnav pulled her closer by her waist & crushed her to himself.
Khushi wrapped her arms around his back,unmindful of smudging the altaa.
Arnav(kisses her hair): I missed u!
Khushi(tearing up): Humne bhi.. aapko bahut yaad kiya!
Arnav(breaks the hug): Pehle kyun nahi bataaya? U hav no idea ki aaj ka din kaise guzaara hai maine! Jabse subha tumhari aankhon me aansu dekhe tab se pareshaan hoon main.
Khushi: Agar aap itne hi pareshaan the toh apne phone kyun nahi kiya? Humne sara samay apnaa phone apne paas rakha. Baar-baar uss ki or dekhte rahe,yeh sochkar ki ab aapka phone aayega,tab aapka phone aayega.. Par aapne toh phone hi nahi kiya!
Arnav: Maine phone nahi kiya toh kya hua? Tum bhi toh phone kar sakti thi naa? Tumne kyun nahi kiya?
Khushi does not reply to his question.
Arnav looks at the bed to find the open tiffin boxes.
Arnav: Aarav k haath jo naashta bheja tha woh bhi nahi khaaya. Great!
Khushi: Kaise khaate? Humare haathon me..
She gasps upon seeing her palms.
Khushi: Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh toh kharaab ho gaya!
Arnav: Its okay. Sablog tumhara dance dekhne aa rahe hain,altaa dekhne nahi! Come now..
He made her sit on the bed before sitting beside her.
Then he popped 1 rasgulla into her mouth.
Khushi(after having it): Shukriya! (points to the steel tiffin) Papad khaiyye naa..
Arnav: No,thanks! (feeds her)Tum khaao. Waise bhi,tension aur excitement ki wajah se tumne theek se lunch nahi kiya hoga.
Khushi: Keh toh aise rahe hain jaise aapne poora khana chatt kar diya hoga! Sab jaante hain hum! Aapne naniji ko dawaai khilaayi hogi,Aarav ko poora doodh pilaaya hoga.(gets up from the bed) Lekin jahaan khud ki baat aayi,wahaan mushqil se 4 niwaale utre honge aapke gale k neeche!
Arnav: Kahaan jaa rahi ho tum?
Khushi: Sabar kijiye! Aakar bataate hain.
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Khushi returned with a bowl & spoon in less than a minute.
Arnav: Ab yeh kya hai?
Khushi: Sabudaane ki khichdi. Lijiye.. (feeds him) Sabki chintaa karenge par apni nahi! Parivaar k sabhi sadasyon ka dhyaan rakhenge, par khud ka dhyaan rakhnaa bhool jaayenge!
Arnav(swallows): Tum bhi toh yeh hi karti ho naa? Lakshminagarwaalon ka dil nahi tod sakti ho,jiji ka bhi nahi aur Arnavji ka toh bilkul bhi nahi! Par khud k dil ka kya?
Khushi lowers her gaze.
Arnav(feeds her):Tum yeh chahti thi ki main subha tumhari saree ki taareef karoon lekin tumne kuch nahi kaha! Waise hi,tum chahti thi ki main yahaan aakar tumhara dance dekhoon lekin phir bhi tumne woh stupid si kasam khilvaa k mujhe yahaan aane se rok diya!
Khushi(enraged): Humari kasam ko stupid mat kahiye! (feeds him)Aapk jazbaaton ka khayaal hain humein,isiliye humne aapko woh kasam khilvaayi! Devi Maiyya jaanti hain ki jab,jab humne woh geet suna,tab,tab humein aapki yaad aayi! Har 1 line ko sunkar humare man me aapka khayaal aata tha. Naam chaahe jo koi bhi kyun nahi ho,jab hum uss geet k bol(lyrics) bolte the,tab humare man sirf aap hi chhavi thi,aur kisi ki nahi!
Arnav: Yeh baat pehle kyun nahi bataayi tumne?
Khushi: Aap hi keh rahe the naa,ki aapse sehen nahi hoga? Toh humne socha ki jab aap aayenge hi nahi,toh yeh sab aapko bataane ka kya matlab?
Arnav(sighs): Look Khushi,I appreciate the fact ki tum mere feelings ki itni qadar karti ho,mere baare me itna sochti ho. Lekin jab tum apni wishes ko sacrifice kar k mere liye kuch karti ho toh mujhe zara bhi achchha nahi lagtaa hai! Thats exactly what u did this time! (feeds her)Apne alaava sab ki feelings matter karti hai tumhare liye!
Khushi: Ha,karti hain! Hum aise hi hain aur aise hi rehna chahte hain!
Arnav(shrugs): As u wish!
He gets up from the bed & walks out of the room.
Khushi(gets up): Ab aap kahaan jaa rahe hain?
Arnav: Relax! Haath dhone jaa raha hoon.
Khushi(sighs): Yeh lard governer bhi naa!
She looks at the smudged altaa & sighs.
Khushi: Sabun se kayeen baar haath dhone par shaayad yeh.. poori tarah se chalaa jaayega. Lekin saabun se haath dhone jaayenge toh pichhle hisse ka altaa bhi dhul jaayega. Phir dobara se lagaana padega. Utna samay nahi hai humare paas. Ab jo hai,jaisa hai, waise hi chalanaa padega.
She stood in front of the mirror & checked herself.
Arnav(entering the room): Achchhi lag rahi ho!
Khushi(dryly): Shukriya! Ab jaldi se kapde pehen lijiye aur chaliye. Sab humari raah dekh rahe honge.
Arnav: Tum jao. Main baad me aaunga.
Khushi(shocked): Kya?
Arnav: Yup! NK ka dance shuru hone se pehle woh mujhe text kar dega. Main uss ka text milte hi wahaan aa jaunga.
Khushi: Isska matlab.. aap.. yahaan tak aakar bhi.. humara nritya nahi dekhenge?
Arnav: Main kaise dekh saktaa hoon,Khushi? Tumne mujhe apni kasam jo di hai! Main usse nahi todunga!
Khushi: Rehne dijiye! Humein achchhe se pataa hai ki aap kasmon me kitna vishwaas rakhte hain! (shakes her head)Kabhi-kabhi toh aap had hi paar kar dete hain!
Arnav: Aur yeh tum keh rahi ho?
Khushi: Humein aapse kuch bhi nahi kehna hai!
Arnav: Lekin mujhe kehna hai-all the best!
Khushi: Bahut,bahut shukriya!
She storms out of the room leaving Arnav smirking behind her back.
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Kindly ignore typos & mistakes.
Credit for the pics goes to Google & respective uploaders.
The final part of this TS will be up tomorrow.
A Very Happy Janmashtami To All Those Who Celebrate This Festival!
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#27
Translation plz 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Translations will be up by Saturday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Superb update
Waiting for the last part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
awesome update...getting very interesting...wt is arnav planing dying to see that :)...loved such caring hubby and wifey :)
very very nice

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