ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#921

what exactly was this di??

i mean, ... umm... ab main kya bolun?

it really feltlike i ust watched a magic show

the update was so well written that i din't feel for even a second that i was reading it, it felt like it was happening to me

i just can't tell in wrds how good it was

no words will b enough

hats off to u yaar

love u

cont. asap

Edited by SobtiFanShree - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#922

edited my comment here...

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ammi22

@ammi22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#923

wow, I was waiting for this, is there more updates today.
This is an amazing update. Love it. love u. Thanks for the PM.

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koisk

@koisk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#924

That was awesome, Arnav just blew everyone away but poor khushi she is soo confused.

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#925

''''She walked back away from him, looking into his eyes. She is happy yet sad. She is happy that she realized his love for him but sad that he is in love with someone else. She is torn between his words and his actions. Nothing matched up. She walked further away looking at him. He looked at her retreat questioningly. After few steps, the moment she thought tears are about to escape, she turned away hiding them from him ''...this part was emotional That was a sweet ,beautiful & well written chapter...i love it &&& Thanks a lot for the vm today,you make my dream comes true by making arshi dance(like teri meri dance) on this beautiful song that im in love with Thanks for pm & eargerly waiting for next koz want to read more

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#926

Superb ipdate soo happy she realized cnt wait for the next update

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#927

beautiful update

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#928

Damn now dis is wat i will say a fantabulous chappy

so finally khushi realised her love for her husband..! ❤️

so sumthng was there on arnav's cheek nd khushi just stretched her hands to wipe it off but arnav was playing wit her by moving backward nd khushi was just following him up moving forward nd finally wen they reached d glass door arnav stopped nd as xpected her fingers began to move at its own accord to his cheek nd she wipe the material off from his cheek but she could not take her hands away from there nd was al mesmerised to check him out but as usual arnav's teasing brought her back wen he asked her abt her paying much attention towards his lips making her blush furiously but d very minute he could sense her nervousness he chnged d topic nd asked her whether she is ok or not nd she hugged him breaking down telling him dat she is getting restless these days..!

His concern nd his planning to cancel d party nly for her was awsum..!

He is sooo caring ❤️

riding d car nd khushi teasing arnav nd he getting all irriated nd making himslf buy wit d mails nd khushi silently observing him nd den her hairs tickling him nd wen she drew it up from her neck givng him an oppurtunity to watch her milky scene was beautiful but being a gentle man he withdrew his eyes from her but could not help for glancing twice..! ❤️

nd den arnav's horrible prank abt being in love wit sumone else which he actually meant to b khushi but she got it all wrng nd got hurt nd angry much to arnav's surprise wen he decide to ask her abt her anger,d car stopped immediately making them get down nd enter d party hall..!

Nd den their entry to d party hall hand in hand nd arnav's protecting her from media by holding her waist possessively as if he will resque her from evry evil thng,awww beautiful nd khushi could not help but melt in his tight possessive hold..!

Their fight reguarding shashi nd patal teasing khushi abt her glowing after marriage was cute..!

Finally khushi discovered her mehendi clad pic in arnav's phn nd as xpected she got
all confused wit this gestur of his..!

Nd finally arnav's speech,awww its beautiful..!

He talked abt evrythng important in his life..!

Akash nd payal den shashi nd den finally khushi,ahhh simply perfct..!

D momnt akash get up nd said "u deserve it bro" was beautiful as it shows their beautiful bond of frndship..!

Nd finally that part where he said abt his achievemnts nd loss on dis very day making khushi all confused was awsum..!

Khushi remebering evrythng nd trying to figur out wats he pointing to say was simply awsum..!

Den him saying dat if sumone can b behind his success is nly his wife,his khushi..!

Nd the way he said proudly dat a woman who is d sole reason for wat he is today is none but his wife was beautiful nd den khushi's speech,beautiful nd cute..!

Den their teasing nd khushi talking abt his bed getting caught bya rnav abt her chcking him out silently nd indeed dis also made her blush,awww how cute dat part was..! ❤️

Den arnav asking her to dance nd she flirtiously asked for his hand nd they danced nd wit dis dance khushi discovered her true feelings for him nd she has now bcum sure dat she loves her hubby..!

She is madly nd irrecoverably in love wit arnav singh raizada nd dis realisation made her happy but at d same tym thnking abt arnav loving sumone else broke her heart into pieces,less did she knw dat her hubby was talking abt her nly nd i really hope that this gets clear to khushi soon coz i cannot see her realisation going to get waste..!

her realising abt her love for arnav has been beautifully described nd trust me i read dat part twice,ahhh cannot b more beaitiful dan dis di..! ❤️

i want her to teasure dis beautiful momnt but not to cyrse this momnt thnking abt arnav loving sumone else..!

I knw dat dis micunderstnding will get cleared soon but still i cannot wait for her to knw abt arnav's love ❤️

beautiful update 👍🏼

ahhh i love it sooo damn much ❤️

i cant wait to read d nxt chappy now 😳

wen will u update nxt di coz i cant wait to read d nxt part 😛

i knw i am being too much restless but u knw na i am actually dreaming abt this story all d tym 😳