ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Will wait 4 ur update 2moro... Cnt wait 4 it... Super excited...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: asthagarwal
Will wait 4 ur update 2moro... Cnt wait 4 it... Super excited...

Meri line mat bolo aap 😡

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

that was just amazing

loved it

loved the conversation between khushi and payal

so now khushi knows that arnav came to visit her in hospital

Aisa koi baat nahi, Payal. I am glad he forced me into this marriage. Otherwise it would have been my biggest loss.

khushi is happy that arnav forced her to marry him

and now khushi is all determined to solve the mystery of arnav😉

khushi is trying to follow all the traditions which arnav's mother followed

and she made motichoor ladoo

and then arnav was remembering khushi and her weird behavior and was missing her

khushi now easily get affected by their close proximity

God, please ask him to drink fast. Please please please please, yeh kya ho raha hain. Why is he doing like that and why am I like that. Please god please.

and now arnav understood that khushi is affected by her presence

and he decided to not leave her started to tease her

and then arnav asked her about what she was thinking and she replied like this

I was just thinking of introducing 3D floral prints on the LIPS.🤣🤣🤣

khushi was so lost that she didn't even realized what she said

so no wonder arnav started to cough badly and laughing

even i was laughing hard😆😆

khushi is just so adorable

awww old arnav is coming back. i mean arnie! she laughed so freely this time just like arnie

and the hug

this was one of my favourite scenes today😛

and then arnav's stomach started to growl! poor arnav. he was so embarrassed when khushi bent and tried to listened to his tummy!😆

Are you too fasting?

Why?

She asked seeking answers.

For the same reason as yours. He replied looking intently into her eyes.

For you? She asked.

He nodded Yes as his reply.

For me? She asked.

He nodded Yes pursing his lips as his reply.

For our home? She asked.

He nodded blinking his eyes once, acknowledging.

For our Family? She asked with bit of tease and shyness in her eyes.

khushi came to know about arnav's fast

i just love arnav. he changing

and then arnav questioned about her life as gupta

and he realized that she had changed herself and also she wanted to know about arnav.

and she confessed that she gets really scared seeing him all angry and arnav was surprised to hear that

and then started one of most weirdest conversation i have read and it was about diapers! 🤣😆

when you grow old to 70 yrs, dont ask me to take you toilet "Khushi, take me to toilet dammit" in your signature style. I am sure thats what you would say.

Arnav couldnt help but chuckle at her pathetic yet cute thoughts.

She continued, You know what my response would be then?

No clue, but I am sure it would be more disgusting. He spoke raising his brows.

I will say, "Dont I have better work, pee in your diaper" She giggled, tapping her feet in the pool water excitedly. Arnav Singh Raizada peeing in the diaper. Wow, what an idea? Haina?

Bilkul bhawas aur ghatiya! Very disgusting as I expected! Do you even realize how pervert you are? He asked totally surprised at her.

Dont call me pervert. I just state facts. She angered and tried to get up to leave.😆😆

khushi got really mad when arnav called her a pervert

khushi is very weird. but she is cute

awww khushi fell in love with arnav's signature when she first saw it

and when she admitted that to arnav he was nervous because he is not used to such compliments before. but now he is getting used to it

and khushi can also most sign arnav's signature and arnav is all surprised to know that

and then came t73 email talk in between and they talked about it

khushi was really sad to know that arnav 'd not have replied though he saw those emails back then. but he tried to make khushi better

Even if you throw me out, I am not going to leave you in this life time, because I have planned lot of stuff to torture you.

i just loved this line

it was so cute

and then when arnav saw khushi's mehendi with nk's initials he was sad but tried to hide it

but khushi can easily figure him out/\. she knew that e was sad

and then when khushi came in saree arnav was all lost in her

and khushi knew that arnav would come to the pooja and he came

khushi can read arnav like a open book now. she knows that he is trying to run away from old memories and she wants him to get rid of it

ane then klaka told arnav about the childhood story of arnav and khushi aboy motichoor ladoo

khushi was really embarrassed, but he was enjoying himself

khushi tried to stop kaka. but that didn't work

arnav and khushi khushi are so cute in those days

and then came the other part which was my favourite

arnav kissed khushi on her cheek that too twice

khushi couldn't do nothing but blush!☺️

in simple this update was mind blowing

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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aarushh

@aarushh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

omg ...! wonderful update yaar...

thanks a lot for the pm...

no words yaar...

u always rockzzz...!!!!!!!!

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: asthagarwal
Pooja

Mil gya mil mjhe update mil gya 🤗

I m the gundi of ur thread rofl 🤣

Btw dii awesome update mjhe toh laga I wnt get it today as bcz dere were no sign of ur frm past three days but u surprised me and I love yo for that[:'(]

Part 1

I love the kaka and khushi talk it was so pleasant to she dere love towards arnav for what he is and how he is changing

I loved how khushi tried to justify well actually nt tried but actually sad with confident that he is nt against it bt running away frm the rituals bcz of his past I m glad she is understanding him in some ways atleast ..

Soo called payal to know about her wedding incidents and wanna know did arnav visited her loll impatient girl she is and cleared her doubt after her offie encounter wid him still I appreciate it

Moti choor ladoo now fnally she remembered it haina dii u made her remember loll

She prepared moti choor ladoo for him omg omg omg wow how does it tasted dii

Awww my arnav is missing khushi rofl he Is gettinghabituated to her presence everywhere nw like I said thinking of her is his permanent job nw he called her and she ignored wat the for booth ..!!

She didn't attend his call bcz he would ditract her frm making ladoo I mean seriously girl grw up

Hayee dere lovey dovey talks and his teasing her was cherry on the cake

Bichara confused arnav wen he heard her calling him aap

Part 2

U think u r smart haan

Dis was short update

U did ramanchi

Poor khushi and her guttery thoughts she kept mumbling and there arnav and heard everything woahhh dats calld luck

Wat a trick to worse her situation loved it to the core dii I love u for dis more and more and more

Summer collection seriously 🤣

Poor arnav hahahaha cnt stop laughing diii 😛

I was actually happy seeing laugh on the couple faces 😊

She came to knw he kept fast ohh how easily arnav get trapped in khushi tricks 😉

I pity him for dis he is rude for the whole world but cnt hide himself infrnt of her 😊

Part 3

Ooo arnav asking about her before being married schedule really raizada dnt have talks to do I guess nowadays 🤓

And she kept on telling him about her waking and ull day routine rofl dats heights nw ahhahaha

You are an loving encyclopedia seriously ahahahahahahah 😉

Peed in her pants really dii yehhh kab hua mjhe q nai pata 🤣

Ohh how loved there diapers talks bcz I m ryt dese raizada dnt have talks nw and specially arnav loll yaa actually he is bad strting convos loll 😆

Now the much awaited question arrived THE MAILS wich was sent by khushi and was unintentionally ignored 😔

How he kept her feeling and didn't hurt her by saying truth and took ans frm her also I seriously had tears wile reading it

Copying mr raizada signature is a tough job wich khushi did almost perfectly I m shocked well dere nthn to be shocked I guess bcz she is mrs raizada

She loved his signature well I loved the mann himself

Urgghh again nk name

But I m glad he didn't reflect his hrt to her but she cught him and the way he avoided nk name was awesome trick hahahah

U know I was happy reading the word Pooja dere although I knw wat intention it was used for but still I was happy to it

I so wanted there love marriage wich he was thinking of a content marriage so dey would also enjoy dere life as a normal couple par destiny holded smthng else for them

Ah there sensing power wich I was always admire dat how does anyone knows who is in love senses the presence of the other one

She was waiting for compliment and as usual arnav teased her by just opening her bun and said ab theek hai

Bus itna hi loll she said loud enough to hear everyone I guess

He denied and she didn't pressurized to him knowing that he will come dats called pure trust

She went and answered kaka to start and he will come and did he camr the arti she choosed made him come down

The feeling that songs delivered to both of them was really something required at the atmosphere

She saw him standing on the stairs she made her way and bought him infrnt of the idol was really sweet dii

But the sweet past of him taking over his bitter memories doesn't allow him to bow down infrnt of god

Kaka revealed the ladoos story to arnav also loll I was so enjoying reading this dii

He made her stand dere and saw her blushing and red face how cute of him mannn I m falling for him every second ufff kya kar diya iss barun ne mjh par

He teasing her again urrggh not so done dii bichari khushi kab tk patience rakhegi

I wnt say for last parts bcz I was blushing deeply reading it

Was awesome I love the romance and arnav kiss and hugs wich he gave for the ladoos to khushi

He teased her again seeing her heavy breathing at there closeness and still he didn't kiss her y damnit

But dnt think u r left

Did ramanchi

Pheww almost 1000 words itna toh update par v nai ata mjhe likhna jitna yahan likhi hu

Ladies, Pooja and Astha, you girls confused me. For a min I was like, why Astha gave me 2 feedbacks. Then I thought may be she just loves me too much.

Then I didnt understand why Pooja name was at the begininning of the post. When I read the "permanent job", thats when I realized its Pooji's feedback...

You girls got me there...

Pooji I didnt mean to do ramanchi dear. I usually write 15 pages for mahaaupdate but this time I wrote 18 pages and I had to split the parts logically. So Part 2 ended up being small but Part 4 was big one..😭😭😭 Maaf karo sister😆😆

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: deepthiya
Ladies, Pooja and Astha, you girls confused me. For a min I was like, why Astha gave me 2 feedbacks. Then I thought may be she just loves me too much.
Then I didnt understand why Pooja name was at the begininning of the post. When I read the "permanent job", thats when I realized its Pooji's feedback...

You girls got me there...

Pooji I didnt mean to do ramanchi dear. I usually write 15 pages for mahaaupdate but this time I wrote 18 pages and I had to split the parts logically. So Part 2 ended up being small but Part 4 was big one..😭😭😭Maaf karo sister😆😆

Maaf kiya dii 😊
i was asked astha dii to make a res for me as my net was troubling me and den i updated my cmnt
Btw dii apko mera trademark word pata chal gya lolll 🤣
and i love u more den anybody here samjhi aap 😡

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Maaf kiya dii 😊
i was asked astha dii to make a res for me as my net was troubling me and den i updated my cmnt
Btw dii apko mera trademark word pata chal gya lolll 🤣
and i love u more den anybody here samjhi aap 😡

Yes meri gundi sister. Noone can take away that right from you..Not today and not ever..

I LOVE YOU...🤗