ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED - Page 59

Simply fabulous and so cute! loved it! plz continue soon!

Such an awesome update !
This update has given me so many dhak dhak.
Loved Arnav's teasing Khushi.
The laddoo scenario was just Fabolous.
Eagerly waiting for next update.

I am here... To comment. Aur kya?! :p
Coming to update, Di This update was one of the most touching part of the story. It was thoroughly display of emotions.
Arnav fasted because Khushi fasted. When she enquired then he answered the same. That was truth too, things happened with him he never blamed anyone not even Khushi but God...
He was right in his way. I loved that Khushi respected his sentiments but still tried to make him part of Pooja in her way.
I loved the way you wrote that part. I think that was the 1st time, that Arnav's emotions and feelings were visible on his face.
Claps for Khushi.
Did I mentioned last time that I loved their chilhood memories. This was one of very very cute... Cuchie cuchie koo...
Arnav again came to his naughtiness and kissed her in the name of tradition.
Thanks Di, for making their 1st kiss memorable and cutie si.. :D
That was delicate Mahaupdate...

Errr.. Sorry.
It should be Good night for you..
So Good Night and sweet dreamz...

awwwe...why did the update have to end...if only it could go on and on...*sigh*

Lovely update!

Especially the mandir wala scene!

And the rest were super cute! :)

Finally the first kiss adult si kiss! Hehe!

Slow and steady wins the race! :p

Cheers

wah kya amzing update diya di
loved a lot...

Loll astha dii i was in a hurry


Huhhh hatewa u too 😡

and dii knws me and my style lolll 😆