#1 ArShi FF: Love me, Hate me

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

🤗 Yayyy!! A new FF!!! I'm so super happy darling coz you know how much I love your writing, right?

Read the short summery and I just simply knew that I was going to love the story. Plus, you're the one writing it...so like, duh. Also... thank god for no villains. For the most part, I like fic characters to be grey and not black or while. Because... well, let's get real, nobody is complete evil or an epitome of goodness in real life.

Now coming to the chapter...

Loved it. Real cute. Love reading stories which start from the very scratch.

The little scene you created was wonderful. Super cute. I could feel their carefreeness and the happiness of living a perfect childhood.

Khushi is an adorable little six year old with pigtails who loves to irritate 'Annnav'. And Arnav is the typical thirteen year old going through his 'I hate girls' phase. Although... you know with kids these days... things have changed a lot. Look at me talking like an old hag! 😆😕

Love the kind of friendship the two share <3 Me thinks Khushi is already in love with Annnav. I mean...look at the way she always comes back to him even after he chases her away?

BTW, are they family friends?

P.S- Love the banner <3

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awsmmm starting yaar loved it
and i love the takla waala dialog the most

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hey, That's a good start and I am already looking forward to this!!!

Totally loved their pranks and their easy relationship...But you know what, me already feeling sad for Khushi -- poor girl who will soon get a teenage (?) heartbreak...But i love the concept...so bring it on..

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sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nice start
The 1st chapter was very good
Plx continue soon
Thnks for the pm

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

i always loved ur os...now u come up with ff...lovely..
awesome update.. khushi is so full of life..loved this khushi.. arnav's mom dad already loved her.. waiting for more..

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To know this,buddy me;)

@...OceanEyes...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Sorry for being late..i knw i knw..plz dnt throw me ur chappals😆

Awww..my Helee di..u are back, with a bang!!and this ff is the missile..yummy..just loved the chapter..
Arnav as a silly teenager???loved this new avatar of my Arnie boy...
Khushi SHARMA??Y??i have an obsession wth the name 'KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA...'😆

Whtvr,i dnt mind..mujhe to sirf ARSHI romance chahiye..and i knw u can give it to me so perfectly..
Update soonwa..

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Aww u started an FF!!!

And what a start!!! it was amazing!!!!😃

Kushi is full of nautankiness!😆

Aww the Raizadas dot on her...that's so sweet...well except on 13 year old Raizada😆

Kushi's cute way of calling was so nice...well not nice to Arnav of course😆

their relationships seems cute and nice...

Im looking forward as to how u handle the story ahead...😃

cheers for PM!😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow, a new story, I'm so excited to read further and I hope it is very very long.

The character sketch was very intriguing, loving all the characters.

Loved the first update it was brilliant and amazing,

Awww Khushi is so mischievous as she ran away with Arnav's project,

Loved the way Khushi played the prank on the family, by falling down the stairs.

So both Arnav and Khushi like to play pranks on people, brilliant.

The update was written wonderfully and a awesome read,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM,

Regarding the "Tiger" story, I have read something similar but it's calling "crying wolf", also I have no problem with the story being a slow placed one as this one consists of humour, so it's fine by me.