#1 ArShi FF: Love me, Hate me

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 11 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

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OMFG meri timing 😃

After so many days I am first one to comment on your story...

I remember when I was preparing for my exams I used to Res first due to my absurd timings😆

loved the character sketch...

okay I need to go now, will write more after i come back.

Edited once again:)

Okay about summary of the story, I am absolutely excited after reading it.

ASR rejected Khushi when they were kids, aww poor KKG. Of course he is going to regret his decision, ain't he😉

i am so happy that you are writing a new story😃

Waiting for chapter one:)

Oh I didn't tell you that I just loved the banner. It is amazing:)

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

Cheeni

comment for chapter 1:)

Okay I am writing it again coz my battery died while I was writing the last bit of the comment. Haye re kismat...

Thank u so much for starting a new FF after healing of my wrist bone, now I can write longish comments which I just love to write specially on your stories😃

I just loved the banner. Its amazing:)

Coming to the update,

I am already loving this Khushi. She is cute, funny, adorable, naughty and most importantly loves to mess with Arnav Singh Raizada. I loved the fact that she is not scared of him. She is so sweet, Arnav drives her away all the time but she comes back to him. Thats like my KKG.

Wow ASR's mom n dad are already in love with Khushi, amazing.

Arnav likes her too as a friend but the issue is that Khushi is a girl. ASR and his stupid rules.

I am loving their relationship, they fight all the time but still are friends.

I missed Anjali. When will you introduce her??

About that Arnav making khushi bald and applying black paint on her takla, I too torture my room mate in same manner saying I will apply Veet on ur head and then make it chand jaisa shiny by applying Fair and Handsome wali cream😆

continue soon:)

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

By Now I know You are a very talented writer.. N this Story is awesome Helee... I'm very much into this track... The way you portrayed little Khushi is beyond perfection you know... I can't wait for the story to unfold further...

PS: The fact is I'm damn busy with my studies and I know I can't be a regular reader, but this little Khushi drags me very much.. So 'll try my best to keep in with this Thread...

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_sree_

@_sree_

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

wow ...that was a cute beginning...luvd it dear..😊

superb👏

commenting on your first chapter of new story in first page itself...🥳

interesting story...😳

waiting 4 the next update...

continue soon dear

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

Story looks interesting and CS is damm interesting 😆

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

nyc cs

plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

O.My.God... you are with FF!!!
now that made my day : )
First that banner is absolutely awesome... loved it yaar, Riazada looks so damn hot there *drooling* ok also khushi ; )
hmm... so its starts from childhood and khushi is sharma??
One thing i am happy is that there is no villians so shyamu will be a nice guy.
Ok... confession and rejection is already done.
Loved it chalo lets start the journey...

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Loved the first chapter...
hmm... he is a man, teenage mind is perfectly captured, boy-code "girls are enemy" but he finds her friend and wonder why she is girl, he wants her to be afraid of him like payal.
well that reminds me where is Akash do they stay seperate.
The beginning was nice Raizada's do like khushi and are happy with her.
Gupta's are nice as usual.
Nicely written will wait for next thanks.