#1 ArShi FF: Love me, Hate me - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
I can't believe Khushi, how can one person eat so much! And Arnav likes Salman? Since when do his movies make sense? So how does this work, is Khushi going to stay in Lucknow forever now? Or is Alok also moving?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, at ten, looks like it is more of a crush than love, but one never knows. Poor Khushi, being teased for not having a mom... kids can be mean! However painful, looks like it is the right decision taken by Alok to send Khushi to stay with her aunt, especially as she was so happy there. The loving welcome she receives from Arnav€™s parents and her rapid fire questions being answered with such indulgence show how close she is to that family! Arnav as Akshay Kumar... cute! This fun-loving Anjali, playing pranks on Arnav, is like a breath of fresh air and her support of and friendship with Khushi [despite the vast difference in age] is touching. Maybe, she got along with Khushi so well because it gave her a chance to enjoy the freedom and the simple pleasures of childhood... something she will miss when she goes off for higher studies and as people already expect her to act all grown up. Wow, Helee, trust you to come up with that unique combo: Rambo and Di... I could imagine a designer saree-clad [most likely the net kind Anjali sported in the show] Rambo smiling coyly at I don€™t know who! Lovely to see the respect Arnav has for Khushi€™s dad... the latter is right about being honest and grateful while doing business... such advice is seldom shared or heeded. Correction. One young woman. One girl. And one zombie... hilarious! Khushi lost in thoughts of her own €˜Akshay Kumar€™ is adorable, especially when she changes her preference from Akshay to Salman Khan because Arnav likes him! Arnav€™s desperate attempts to stop Khushi€™s tears and he buying her the chocolate and strawberry ice cream cones was endearing... or was it his ice cream cone that she now wants? Nice story progression!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Rambo, teddy, barbie, zombie...wooww 😆
Loved how Anjali doesn't want to grow up as yet.
Loved how arnav cant wait to be all grown up.
Poor akshay kumar ...lost such a loyal fan😉
How adorable she must have looked while badgering her D uncle with questions.
All set for heartbreak already??? But she is so young😭.
Looking forward to more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
I know you said romance/humour but these innocent relationships here are more endearing and would love to see glimpses of these even after you take a leap in the story into their adult years...

So Annav is Khushi's first crush and soon to be first love...and soon enough first heartbreak too...oh dear lord!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Reserved.

When I saw your PM, I thought you had written an OS titled 'Late Latif'🤪

Kuchh bhi!

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Edited: ha ha sweet chapter! Especially the last scene, you know. Very sweet.

Btw, I think I forgot to tell you this in my last comment, but I really like the title of your FF. I'd like to see how the "love me" and "hate me" bits come into play.

Now coming to the update...

Love the sort of relationship the friends share. It's cute. Also, I really like the age-gap between them. It's takes me a little time to adjust to too short or no age gap between the lead pair (not just Arnav Khushi)

So miss Khushi has a secret crush on mr. Raizada so much so that she changed her favourite actor for him? Ha ha, typical 10 year old I guess. But... It's funny imagining Arnav saying that he likes Salman khan. I mean... Imagine him being like, 'I want to be Salman khan when I grow up. He so cool and I want to make muscles like him." Just imagine. LMAO.
😆

Anyway, last scene was uber cute. Oh what I won't do to watch Arnav's face when he sat there waiting for her to finish one cone of icecream so that he could hand her the other. Haha.

Also, Arnav and karate? Eh... Hot. Very hot.

I do have a doubt, will scrap you about it :-)

Cheers!

P.S- I've mentioned this before. But you're too fast and efficient for the lazy me :-P So I'm apologising for the delay in comments (already)!

:-)
Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Reserved.


When I saw your PM, I thought you had written an OS titled 'Late Latif' 🤪

Kuchh bhi!


😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Just read the both parts... sound quite intresting,
ARnav is so sweet here... khushi developed feelings towards him... Thts gonna be intresting.. post soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awesome and nice start.
Both part good.
Arnav v possessive about khushi.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Really really nice, cute n adorable update.

Hmmm 1st crushes.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok Hun I shall read this story with a open mind, lol.

The update was amazing and brilliant, absolutely loved it.

So Khushi has returned after 3 years and has developed some feelings for Arnav, so sweet.

Awww I'm loving Arnav he is such a sweetheart and love the way he was worried when Khushi dropped her ice cream.

I'm loving the nicknames in the update Annav and Rambo is a classic,

Can't wait too read how they both spend there summer together,

Loved the update it was a awesome read,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM,

Also don't worry I will not ditch you, the story is amazing xx

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