Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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lujeyn9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

superb update 😊

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Hey sorry for commenting so late
Really awesome os just love it
Love virats and diyas bond they are so adorable
They are missing manvi so much feel so bad for them
And poor manvi is suffering so much she wants to be with her family so badly but can't
Diya is so much like manvi
I really loved the part were diya and virat goes to Tanya
And diya was so rude towards her
The part were she was thinking about that nobody except her mom can touch her father wow that was so cute
Protective towards her father
And the part were Tanya gave her a M&M and she said I will take a bite and save the rest for later oh my god that was so hilarious
And the part were she was asking Tanya about the touch-me-not-flower just love it
You are really a amazing writer
Every time you write something it just touch my heart
Thank you so much for the pm
And please continue soon
Will be waiting for your next awesome update

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome!!all ur virmanS do love unconditionally na..his world revolves around manvi and diya only...without manvi their life is not the same..her absence is highly felt.. ...kya diya, ria ki twin hai?? she is so cute..she is not asleep cuz her eyes are still open..so smart huh ..& wants a "touch-me not flower! lol..the way uve portrayed her possessiveness & jealousy for her dad is brilliant and hilarious..she got it from manvi kya..just like her i hate tanya..diya rocks as long as she is there woh kisi aur ko virat ke aas paas bhatakne bhi nahin degi ..im proud of her!! :-p
im still wondering how will virat get to know about manvi being alive ...continue soon
(and plz do me a favour be inactive permanently its better for me and all ur readers)

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floral

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm to dear😊😊

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Awesome..! Virat had gotten a blow but then want Maanvi to be back befre he is trapped or say tangled with unwanted relation..Diya is sweet and smart kid...she didn't like any 1 else talking to her dad over the top sweetness and yes possessive as wel...Virat was right she is mini Maanvi,,,Waiting for next!!!

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Omg anuu !! Ur updating speed my god !! I m loving it ❤️
Diyaaa !! She is soo freaking cute !! The way she was jealous n all !! Soo sweet !! Tanyaa ki acchj ban bajaayii :P
These characters !! awwwn !! First ria n nikki n noww diyaaa !! They are awesome Anu !! ❤️
Lovely update !!! ❤️ the way she hug virat n said she don't need any story !! Tat was soo touchy !!
Diyaaa playing with manvi things was hilarious !! I could juz imagine it !! 🤣
Fabulous !! Now u have to continue soon Anu :P tumne hi aadat bigaari hai !! Looking forward !! <3

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Superb... its so painful... pls make a happy ending dear... pls... thnks a lot fr th pm...:)

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kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

awesome update

diya is so cute

loved it

plz cont soon

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shirhid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

read all the part in one go

must say this is amazing story

diya is so sweet

thanx 4 pm

Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

read the story in one go... thank god u pmed me unless u would have missed it...

i have to say a lot of things and will comment for every part individualy...

coming to this part...

it was fab... 👏 👏

a father alone is not capable of taking care of a child and u displayed it here also... a child needs her mother the most... the relationship a mother shares with her child is just the purest form of love and its above all the other relations in this world...

virat's pain... its making me cry... he is all alone with the responsibilty of manvi n his token of love... he is trying to fill in the void which is created by absense of manvi but will he evr be able to when he himself is incomplete and shattered... he is trying to hold back his emotions and be a mother to diya... but its not easy at all... he is struggling... struggling every single day...

diya is just too adorable... i have fallen in love with her from the very first scene of her being in the playground making a sand castle... she is missing manvi so much... a child needs her mother the most and its reflected in each and every reaction of diya...

the make up scene and the scene at the boutique were hilarious... 😆

touch-me-not flower cracked me up... 😆 😆

and diya is just like manvi... she craves for virat n his attention and she is damn possessive about him... she doesnt like anybody touching virat...

i am loving it more and more...

you are great...!!!! 👏 👏 👏