Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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tanishalnk

@tanishalnk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Awww sweet update...
Diya is so possessive daughter nd so cute...
Awesome

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

We are getting updates back to back, you are seriously on a roll!!!!

When I was reading the parts, I was literally crying!!! Manvi is suffering so much!!! Oh my! Poor soul...& over there Virat & Diya are suffering, they are having tough time to cope up with things without Manvi!!!!!! Three people are are living in darkness & needs a ray of sunshine to come out of this...its really very beautifully written...you always do this, make a simple story with common characters into a special one...par excellence!!!!!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

awesome Anu
u are too Good
loved the story
update sooon

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Aenna

@Aenna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Wooow again an awwwsum update...
Diya is sooo cute...
She cant see any other women with virat except her mother. ..
Amazinggg update asap I want manvi to come back soon..

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Fab updt...so fast ha...rofl i loved diya she is so cute...dont like anyother woman anywhere near to her dad...hahaha ...superb...cont soon

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pyaarkikahani

@pyaarkikahani

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

omg, I cant wait to read the next chapter, please can i be pm in future.

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esme

@maclean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

😊 AWW,, MISSING MANU😭,,,,, LIKE RIA AND NIKKIE I STARTED LOVING DIYA,,,⭐️ TOO CUTE LITTLE MANVI,,,,,, LIKE ALWAYS DADY'S PRINCESS,,, VIRAT OMG,, SERIOUSLY HE IS MAN OF LOVE😳,,, AS USUAL VIRAT JAAN MANVI,👏,,, HAHAH TANYA...

DIYA TOUCH ME NOT... WAS SO CUTEEE,😊,,,,,, ONCE AGAIN VIRMAN WONDERFUL LUV,,, 🤗 LOVELYY UPDATE,,,, WRITER JI,,,,, 😃 WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER,,,

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Anu back to back updates..!!! Wow!! 😃 Amazing 👏👏.. Superb twist ⭐️.. Manvi is alive.. But she is in miserable condition.. Feeling so bad for her 😔.. She is dead to the world and now she is gradually losing hope.. Virat's family want him to get married again, loved his reaction on it.. Diya is just like Manvi.. Adorable ❤️.. Loved that moment when she was 'just hanging out' in the closet.. Smart kid.. Tanya and her fake sweetness didn't work on her.. She doesn't like any woman touches her dad other her mom.. 'Touch-me-not-flower' 😆.. Loved it ❤️.. Hope something will bring the family together again.. Will be waiting for the next.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Wow
wow
wowww
another awesomely fab story by you
omg i love it
love virat n diyas bonding
but feel sorry for virman n diya too
diyas a clever one... Caught tanyas intention at first sight
really looking forward to reading this
Update soon plz
thanz a lottt for the pm 😉