Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

superb
loved it
finally virat found manvi

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Awesome update
Excited for the next partt
Continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊😊👏👏⭐️⭐️😃😃

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Anamta

@ShadowImbue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

It was the most emotional update had depth...Thanks for writing it...Virat and Manvi earlier stayed away from each other for short time span but still were desperate to see each other...she was dressed and was looking the prettiest...they didn't meet...when they met first...she wasn't same Manvi...was laying helplessly was...in extreme pain...wasn't even in stable state...physically mentally or emotionally but the beauty her soul held!!...that woman endured for saving lives for saving families...survived for her family...even being unconscious...she could still feel him around or can sense his touch...that declaration of love was declaration of sharing pain...of protecting...of being soul mates... was cute...again u have brrillianly connected past and present...Virat's guilt his frustration made me love him...he was burning inside...wanted to kill the person...who hurt his Manvi...his love was battling for her life...Manvi whispered her baby's name first...

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

this is the most emotional one more than manvi's worst and miserable condition virat's condition on seeing her like that made me soo damn emotional he mite have felt sooo guilty ...his pain hurt anger guilt love each and every feeling sooo beautifully written by you anu ...
but atleast happy that virat got her back she will get better soon until she has her daughter and virat besides her for them she beared the whole pain 😭😭
the flashback parts were just sooo awesome specially the mumma daughter scene 😃😃
waiting for the diya meeting her mom scene...
update next part soon 😊

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

This update was so emotional just got hooked with it!!! Loved it to the max...I adore the mother daughter relation omg sooo adorableee it was just perfect I cud imagine each line... Diya adoring her mom n wanna be like her awww gosh u remind me of Ria n kaapish eeekkk!! It was their anniversary n she got kidnapped that day how sad is it?? Gosh... But new twist broke my heart. She don't wanna see virat is tagt cuz she thinks he wud have moved on or don't wanna ruin his life cuz her life is almost nO use? Or is she mad at him??? Gosh do many assumption or did she lost her memory???? But no she remembered him cuz u said "it was true finally he was there for me?" gosh please update soon... I'm craving for it n that's y not pestering u for BILU >_<

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

This one is for Part 6

Thank the heavens the whole Tanya fiasco ended before it could even start. Diya and her pranks loved them all. and you ended it with the call.

Part 7

OMG this was so emotional, the flashbacks, Virat's promise to protect her and his guilt knowing that he couldn't do it. glad to see that the OS has turned into a SS this has already become a master piece.

I want to know how Virat will get manvi through it, she has been through so much and I'm going to love to see how Virat will be her strength through it all.

I'm so in love with your work whatever it maybe. I can't really choose which one I love the most.

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Wow awesome update so emotional
Finally virat has seen manvi and oh my god
Manvi doesn't react anymore hope she will be okay
Loved how you mixed the past and present
Loved the flashbacks and hats off to you
You explained their emotions so good
You can just feel how sad they are and how mad virat is
And poor manvi going through so much
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue soon will be waiting for your next update

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

It was so emotional Anu.. 😔 And at end when she turns her face.. aww my poor VirMan 😔 M crying subah subah 😔 Just loved it ❤️

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anvyagnihotri

@anvyagnihotri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

👏i realy think agar ehmmbh k writers India foram k virman ff se inspire hokar story likhte t o ye show loe trp ki wajah se off air na hota...👍🏼

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

part 4,5,6,7 are awesome
diya is so sweet and cute and smart
her bonding with her mother was so good
finally tanya out and he came to know manvi
is alive update soon