The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

OMG!!! that was the best chappy until now!

yeppeee!!

i think more tahn arnav, i m desperate for khushi to turn 18!! lol

but pranabs feelings give me a creepy feeling...i hope he does not mess up with arhi...

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sruthick

@sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

Amazing update...
LOVD it...
Especially Arshi scene...
That was so Romantic...<3 <3
Arnav kissd her...!! Wow...
Nd d way u describd bout Khushi's reaction...
Aww...she s so cute...
Cntinue soon

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moushumi_90

@moushumi_90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

though i waas waiting for d teaser but i am dot disappointed cuz it was fav one...omg i toh though arnab will kiss her on d lips but yaaa he shud not go so fast n khushi 😆 she though she is anemic cant stup my laugh 🤣

plz update soonn :)

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

I love it love it yaaar it is awsome tough u have to change the topic i mean what is written in front of the ff headingsomethin like link to 2nd trd

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 12 years ago

#975

Aww. so sweet of Khushi.. her 1st token of love to 'A'rnav..
Readin abt Khushi family's past ws heart wrenching :(
I love her fr her nvr gv up spirit so much. despite discouraging comments frm her m.i.l , it dint deter her to discontinue..
Aand sigh!! wot an acknowledgement fr the present by her husband! :D
heart fluttering n blushworthy..
Pranab too is married. wot do these kids understand the significance of such a sacred union if dey r married at such a tender age?

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

Alas! it ws the norm those days n the sufferings , sacrifices had to be made by the lil ones widout evn knowning wot dey r exactly doing..
#disheartening :(

Edited by kooldewdrop - 12 years ago

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myriads

@myriads

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Posted: 12 years ago

#977

Khushi is so sweet ..she is day dreaming abt arnav..she is eager to embroider so as to please arnab . willing to take up a boring job diligently just for her arnab..

Arnaab is so caring & attentive to Khushi though he can be impulsive & a complete jerk

Sigh ..Arnaab is satisfied with the effect he has on her at his proximity..nd poor khushi has not come to terms with wats happening to her..

Jen simply marvelous loved it

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rumu

@rumu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#978

its beauuutiful...

her feelings are changing ...she is stepping the first line of her womanhood...and gosh !!!! the kiss was amazing...it gave me goosebumps while reading...

loved the update very much...

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#979

Jenny..I am falling more and more in love with your stories with every new chapter. Love it..beautifulLy written...loving the chemistry now..

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#980

Hey Jenny, caught up with the last two updates today...

Arnav is having a hard time, you portray him very precisely - the confused youth of pre-independence time hailing from a rich background, studies, marriage, his ambitions, his principles all the concepts are neatly presented and it gives the matured look to Arnav. The way you weave Bengali culture in to the story also helps to see Arnav characterization evolving. The way he took Khushi to the library and how they both listened to the Tagore poems was beautiful. Khushi's innocence - the way you present her - 100/100 I could feel her innocence. the handkerchief gifting scene in bedroom and their first kiss was fantastic!