The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 52

Anu

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I super loved that. The conversation they had in the bedroom and in the library brought a smile on my face. And the thought process, the realizations that became clear to Arnav were so sensible. M so happy that he figured it out . He took time and it came to him just as naturally. I do wish that he spends more time with her. I observed that it was the only thing that had let him think sanely, made him take considerate decisions and gave him hopes for a future. Those few lines in the library scene just won my heart.

Him playing out the song from the 'toy' for her for really sweet. I LOVED THAT SCENE.

Since, you are my friend, I'd take the chance to be honest with you about the Pranab part. Had it been any other writer, I wouldnt have mentioned it.
Its not anything much. just that my heart had dipped when I read it and I had sulked for a few minutes. :(
Later, it occured that it was but natural to occur considering it didnt surprise me. Pranab had been spending time playing, studying or just chilling around with her. An adolescent heart is obvious to get attracted.
We are emotionally attached to Arnav Khushi and I get happy to see them as forever together.
And as it pains me to think, so il put it this way that had it been any other beings, wouldnt it have been natural to think that the child bride got attracted to same aged brother in law?


But its Khushi we are talking about and Arnav. I have seen the attachment, emotional, that they have. The concern and fondness. So I think, m still at peace.

The new twist is gripping to say. It holds so many possibilities. And either way the story proceeds out of those possibilities, it 'l break one s' heart. Such an emotional its going to be ahead and Jen, I trust you completely with it.

"Ki Jani Kishero Lagi Prano Kore Hai hai {My absent heart does not know why It's absolutely borne away"

It seems like both Arnab and Pranab are falling for Khushi

Arnab is waiting eagrely for his child bride to become a woman in the real sense and young Pranab is already mesmerised by the woman that Khushi is growing up into...

Another fab update..although it felt a bit short...

Please update soon...

Waiting ...

Chapter 5 is posted..on page 81 :)

Pranab is falling in love with Khushi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No way!!! Please don't tell me that Pranab is falling for khushi. Nooo!!!! Finally arnav is accepting khushi slowly and he has even become ready to wait for her. If he finds out pranab's feelings for khushi, he might even sacrifice his own feelings thinking of the similar ages of khushi and pranab. I really hope arnav fights for his love if he does find out. I love the arnav in this chapter, who is more considerate and empathetic. I really hope that arnav remains like this and spends more time with khushi. Again a wonderful update and can't wait for the next chapter.

My grandmother told me she also got married when she was 14 years old...I am talking about punjab...but parents never send their daughters to their in- law house until they turned 16...now khushi is already in her in-law house if her husband was normal man he would have stared his relationship with her every thing would have been fine...because Arnav wanted her to grow up and he also got a brother of same age khushi it is natural that pranab will feel more close to khushi may be not khushi as much as she knows that she is married to arnab

its an wonderful update... i loved every part of it. Khushi's innocence, Arnav's thinking liking about her...all the things!
thank u for writing such beautiful updt.