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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

so sorry guys
(i m holding my ear yaar)
cho sorry

woh kia hai na result k baad aj kal addmissions shuru hain tau main unhi chakroon main hoon

iss liye net pay zyada nahin aa patti

max 15-20 mins miltay hain

likin kal main promise pakka likhoon

sorry again 😳

luv u all

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ana



ana dear take your own time & continue...tumhe sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi... me will be waiting for the next part eagerly post it when you are free...😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

great part continie soon 👏



thanx yaar

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Posted: 19 years ago


thanx 4 liking yaara
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice fic 👏 👏 👏 i read all the parts today and loved them 😃 😃 😃 cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgirl249

nice fic 👏 👏 👏 i read all the parts today and loved them 😃 😃 😃 cont soon 😊 😊 😊



thanx yaar
WELCOME to my post
hope u enjoy afterwards

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Posted: 19 years ago
CHAPTER 6

Next morning

Rishab through the newspaper on the floor in full of anger…………

"kia howa?" prerna asked instantly……………it was morning time………a working day ahead…………..so every one was busy in having there breakfast…………rishab was a calm man………….and became anger on few things………….so right then……the three of them were surprised

"pooch archie say"………….rishab said while control his anger………..on this kripa and prerna started looking at her……………….who's face first turns red ut after that no expressions

"aap hi kuch bata dain…………what happened?"….prerna sit on the chair in full depression

"pic aaye hai hamari beti ki……………….headlin hai k the famous industrialist RISHAB KHANNA ki beti or "no doubt" magzine ki sub-editor ARCHIE KHANNA aj kal JIMMY k saath dekhi ja rahi hain"……………..rishab said in a fast tone but anger was shown in his voice………….

kripa pick up the newspaper in hurry………..on one side the pic of archie and jimmy was displayed in which archie seemed to be really close to him………..some bad words were used in the report……….she was not able to read further…………she give the newspaper to prerna………..prerna get shocked on seeing that

"kia hai yeh"…………prerna was questioning in full anger

"its all professional jealousy………..don't take any tension"……….archie was like nothing-big mom………..prerna get hyper on that

"tum abhi aath din bhi nahin howay is profession say realte howay or abhi say scandals banana shuru ho gaye…………..jab k tumharay papa tau kab say business kar rahay hain…………..phir unh k tau abh tak dus barah(12) scandals ban janay chahiye thay na………….scandal jhoota tha tau tha…………likin is this pic is also a fake"

"what can I say"……………..on her answer kripa was thinking to give her a tight slap………..and wanna make her realize that she is in front of her father and mother

"hum jiss society say relate hain wahan tau yeh daily routine ka aik hissa hai ……app loog bhi thoray say LIBERAL ho jain…………or agar app nay mujh pay zara zara si baton pay rook thook ki…………tau main yeh ghar choor doon gii"………..she left the dinning and put her bag on her shoulder and left………………there was a dead silent 4 sometime……….

If rishab was not like as he is………….then he will surely slap him tightly like an illetrate man

After sometime rishab said to prerna in a low heavy tone

"hamaray haan kaisi beti nay janam liya hai…………….agar tum nay kripa ko janam na dia hota……………us ki aisi parwarish na ki hoti……….tau main archie k iss attitude pay tumhari parwarish ko shikar banata……………main tumhain kuch nahin keh sakta………..kyoun k kripa ko bhi tum nay hi pala hai………….phir archie kin rastoon pay nikal gaye hai……………meri sari izzat, daulat sab kuch iss larki nay barbad kar dia hai……………..main kia karoon……………kia karoon?"

prerna was crying and glasping……………….rishab was blaming his fate………kripa tried to handle them but she was not seemed to be successful

after one week

the last one week was quite fine……..prerna tried a lot to make archie understand her fault with love, with anger, with request……………and in ans……..she kept quite…………prerna thinks it worked…………….rishab also see that she was not meeting with JIMMy so he left 4 his business meeting to new Zealand

in university two groups fight with eachother on some matter and coz of that all the classes were bunked……………rishab was not at home………….and kripa dropped prerna to one of her aunt's house as her aunt was ill…………….her return was expected till evening…………..she has not done the breakfast quite well………..so her's first priority right then was to have breakfast………

as she reached home……………she find a stranger sitting on the floor caution in a causal way…………..as she moved further………..it seemed that she had seen him before but she was not able to recognize him

"who r u…………..and what r u doing in my house?"………she didn't try to recover her angry tone in her voice………….

The stranger didn't sit right but was looking at her in amusement…………kripa didn't like him even in first look………….he was looking at her with a wrong way

"what r u doing here?"………..she said it in an anger tone even louder then the first one…………..she was scared but she remain stand

"hi……………..i m JAMIL…………..my friends called me JIMMY and I will like if u called me JIMMY"…………he was looking fresh………….lust was clearly seen in his eyes…………she remain shocked 4 a min…………"JIMMY"she remembered him instantly……………she has seens her pic with archie in paper………….and now he was sitting in her house.
"who's this JIMMy?"…………in the mean time archie also arrived there having some eatables in her hands……………she was shocked………..b-coz she has seen kripa leaving 4 uni in the morning………….kripa has also seen her when she left 4 her office

both were shocked

"how did u come back so early?"…………archie asked her in full of confused look on her face

"ta k main dekh sakoon k mama papa k yahan na hotay howay tau kaun sa khel khel rahi hoo……………..tum sharam na aye issay ghar latay?"

"shut up kripa……………..yeh ghar jitna tumhara hai utna mera bhi………chahoon tau apni property hasil karnay k liye case file kar sakti hoon"…………she was completely forget the manners and respect 4 neone………….JIMMY was looking at both the sisters quite interestingly

"tau case karoo yaan apna hissa lay k maar jaoo…………….i don't care………likin iss ghar main who nahin ho ga jo tum chahti hoo"…………she was talking to her in the same way as archie did to her parents

"MR.JIMMY……………….leave now"

"JIMMY is not going ne where"

"archie………..mujhe ghussa maat dilaoo………….warna main tumhara or iss JIMMY ka kia hasar karoon gi yeh main bhi nahin jantii………………tum iss had tak bhar gai k issay ghar lay aaye………….MR.JIMMY app nay suna nahin maine app say kia kaha……………leave now…………….warna main police ko phone kar doon gii…………….or iss say pehlay main angad or uncle dilip ko bula k lati hoon……abh wohi tum say baat karain gain"………………..she was looking at JIMMY with a horrifying look…………..JIMMY who was thinking also tau make her his victim understands that she didn't like her sis…………..as she move towards the loan he stands up and said

"I m leaving archie…………..phir millain gain"…………JIMMY walked from near kripa

"damn fool…………….tumhari itni himmat k meray guest ki itni beizzati ki tum nay"

"iss ghar main kissi ghatia admi k liye koi jagha nahin……….agay say tum apnay "in jaissay" guests ko ghar lanay ki galti maat karna"……..she didn't accept defeat…

"warna……………kia karoo gi tum?"….she was looking at her with a killing look

"aj ki yeh sab baat main papa ko bata doon gii".

"papa ki chamchi……….jao bataoo………tum jealous hoti ho k meray circle main aik say aik larkay hain"………..she was considering her like herself

"aisay third class larkoon ki company tumhain hi mubarak ho" her question make a fire in her

"main third class larkoon ki company main rehti hoon……………likin tum khud kia hoo…..jab dekho us angad singhania k chakar katti rehti hoo……..tum kyoun nahin alag rehti us say?………mama papa tumhain usss say milnay say kyoun nahin rooktay"

"mama papa ki soch tum jaisi ghatia nahin hai…………..they know what is good and what is not…………angad ko tum unh ghatia larkoon k saath comparison na hi karoo tau accha hai…………….angad singhania aik naam nahin………..balkay mera guroor hai………..jiss din us main mujhay zara bhi burai nazar aaye us din main usay chor doon gii……………likin mujhay patah hai k angad ka muqabla karnay wala abhi iss zameen par koi paida nahin hoowa…………who mera proud hai"

"haan………….proud…………kabhi us pay apni jawani ki bijli gira k dekho tau patah chalay…………ah………..proud"…….she start laughing………….before that she said something else………….kripa prefer to leave.

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
ana dear a superb part.. i liked it very very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... 👏
i feel very sorry for prerna & rishab.. 😭 that archie is soo irritating.. she seriously gets on my nerves , me wanna give her a tight slap....... 😡 kripa totally rocked in the last scene the way she answered archie back..eet ka jawaab pathar se diya...coollllllll.. archie ki tho bisti ho gayi..mazaa aagaya.......... 😆
but dear why does kripa say jiss din us main mujhay zara bhi burai nazar aaye us din main usay chor doon gii..why does kripa say like this about angad... now i wish only one thing kahiin kripa angad ke pyaar ko ghalat na samaj baithte..aur usse rishtha na thod de.....nooooo........😭
please aisa kabhi nahi hone dena...usse pehle ki angad aur kripa ki shaddi karwa dena... 😉
post the next part soon , me will be waiting for it eagerly.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

great part continue soon anum



thanx yaara
hope u like further

and a good thing
1st time kissi nay mujhay meray real name say kaha hai

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Posted: 19 years ago


thanx yaar
can i know ur name plz

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear a superb part.. i liked it very very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... 👏
i feel very sorry for prerna & rishab.. 😭 that archie is soo irritating.. she seriously gets on my nerves , me wanna give her a tight slap....... 😡 kripa totally rocked in the last scene the way she answered archie back..eet ka jawaab pathar se diya...coollllllll.. archie ki tho bisti ho gayi..mazaa aagaya.......... 😆
but dear why does kripa say jiss din us main mujhay zara bhi burai nazar aaye us din main usay chor doon gii..why does kripa say like this about angad... now i wish only one thing kahiin kripa angad ke pyaar ko ghalat na samaj baithte..aur usse rishtha na thod de.....nooooo........😭
please aisa kabhi nahi hone dena...usse pehle ki angad aur kripa ki shaddi karwa dena... 😉
post the next part soon , me will be waiting for it eagerly.... 😃



no thanx suri dii
loved ur comments totally
bisti full toos thi na....................i also felt bad 4 risab and prerna di
but what can i doo
nothing is my hand😆
or prerna k ansoo tau waisay hi jaldi nikaltay hain.........so sad track us k liye fit hai as k kab k us nay apnay ansoo rook rakhay thay

kripa nay waisa kyoun kaha app ko jald patah chal jaye ga

wait 4 that dii

luv u soo much

lol
ana

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