*~CaPabLe oF LovE~(AK)my new ff link pg55

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Ana

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: brainychild92
great part.. continue soon and good luck.. ur results are coming.. best of wishes

thanx yaara
thanx alot

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Posted: 19 years ago

#82

good luck and best of wishes 😃 and....continue soon 😛

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

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ana dear a very wonderful part...it was seriously very nice & cute.....i liked it very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... 👏
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me eagerly waiting for the next part.. 😃

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Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv
good luck and best of wishes 😃 and....continue soon 😛

thanx yaar
i will cont tonight

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Ana

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: sun_423
ana dear a very wonderful part...it was seriously very nice & cute.....i liked it very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... 👏
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me eagerly waiting for the next part.. 😃

no thanx suri diii
u r really so especial to mee
my power

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Posted: 19 years ago

#86

GUYS

B-COZ OF UR WELL WISHES
I PASSED IN MY INTERMIDEATE EXAMS

THANX U ALL GUYS

LUV U

AND 4 THIS

A\I WILL WRITE AN EXTRA LONG PART TONIGHT

THANX AGAIN 4 PRAING 4 ME

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

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congo ana dear... 👏
& ya me will be waiting for the extra long part... 😛

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Ana

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: sun_423
congo ana dear... 👏
& ya me will be waiting for the extra long part... 😛

no thanx suri dii
i will update it in a few mins

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

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ana dear please jaldi se update kar na..me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃

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CHAPTER 5

as dilip naina and angad leaves...........prerna enters in archie room........full of anger

"is this the time to came home?"......prerna enterz in her room full of anger

"now....plz don't start inspection like the middle class mothers".........she wasn't having a mood to talk

"a mother is a mother...........whether it is of middle class or of a high class.........har akalmand maa itni raat tak apni beti k bahr rehnay pay inspection karti hai"..........prerna was in full of anger on her saying

"what a sin.........i have done.........that u have to inspect me?".........day by day.........she was forgettng the manners to talk to her mother.......prerna was stunned

"dilip or naina aaye bethay thay...........aisay main tumhara itna late ana accha lagta hai kia.......u know how ashmed i felt at that time.........u don't have manners..........k ghar aaye loogon k pass bethoo......i had not grow u up like that"

"24 ghannaty.............har waqt koi na koi unh k ghar ka member yahan tapa hota hai........abh kia main har waqt........kia khal hai.......ayye bethain jaisi formalities karti phiroon".........she was seem to be disgusting

"sharam nahin atti................tum main tameez naam ki koi cheez nahin..........sharam nahin atti tumhain naina or dilip k baay main aisa boltay howay..........aj jinh baap k paisoon pay tum naaz karti hoo.......woh kab k doob gaye hotay agar unhoon nay hamari madad na ki hoti.............waqt pay hamari company k shares na khareeday hotay"........prerna wanna make her face red with slaps..........she was not so illmanner before

"tau..............app papa or app ki sweet ladli kripa...........har waqt tau unh k ghar ghussay rehtay hoo...........why don't u stop her"........she was comparing herself with her lil sis

"tum abhi choti hoo............u don't understand good and bad........"........prerna wanna say more but she left with her robe to washroom........which clearly means that she didn't wanna litsen her more........as the door closed prerna came back to her room

archie was from that kind of people who didn't like the straight way of success .............like kripa.....prerna grow up her in the same way........she didn't compare them ever.........but she didn't know why...........why archie is not seem to be capable of repaying them............money was alot........there standard of living was equal to upper class......but the things related to her family........can't bound her.........she has crossed her limits.......rishab has some limits.......some rules.........and he didn't wanna either of them to brake that...........

till bachelors.............archie had a gr888 company of guys rather than girls..........rishab prerna never stops her as in the society.........they have to compromise 4 somethings........but they have some limits in friendship.......

as archie joined the magzine without the permission or rishab..........the matters started complecated 4om that........she was having frienship with girls only 4 name........she becme more social and her friendship with guys growing............jimmy was one of those guts.........he didn't have a good image.......to make wrong photos of rich peoples and then to blackmail them was his hobby.........like archie.......many of other girls came in his words and were distroying there life..........archie has closed her eyes and ears and only listen to jimmy words..........everyone seems to be against her..........even prerna, rishab and kripa too

the next day

party was about to end…………..party was rteally rocking……………angad really arrange a beautiful party and stand upon his assertion………..guests had left…….dilip and naina has already left………….even rishab and prerna went to there room as they were so tired…………archie joined the party 4 a short interval of time……….and then left 4 her room………..servants were cleaning the place…………….and kripa was sitting on the stairs of loan

"kahin tum meray baray main tay nahin soch rahi hoo"…………angad snapped in front of her and sits beside her………….he had not left yet………..he saw her engrossed in thoughts and couldn't stop himself………

"abhi itna bura waqt nahin aaya"…………..he smiled by hearing her words

"kaafi deer say dekh raha tha...........u were so engrossed in ur thoughts that u didn't even care about all those were around u.........i called u so many times........likin tum youn hi bethi rahi.......kia soch rahi thi?"

he was constently looking at her.........she does not change yet........in red and a white suit.......with a lil make up........she was looking gorgeous

"tumhain or servants ko kaam karta dekh........i was thinking......k aik cheez ko bananay main kitna time lagta hai.........likin usay begarnay main......pal bhar bhi nahin"......she was still lost in her thoughts

"so u r having a Philosophical mood right now".......her seriousness was not digested by him..........

she looks through her brown eyes in the dark grey eyes of angad

"i m not joking nags"..........on her behaviour.....he also get a serious mood

"that it is.............iss ki sab say common example main tumhain yeh day sakta hoon k insaan ko apni izzat bananay main kitna time lag jata hai.........likin us izzat k khatam honay main pal bhar bhi nahin lagta............hamara aik galat kadam.......aik galat rah.......humain galat prove karta hai.......apni izzat or status banana asan hai.........likin usay banaye rakhna.........its not an easy task"she also nods on his words

"loog apni hi izzat or attitude k dushman kyoun ban jatay hain".......she remembers archie........on her this kind of questions........he understands why she was asking such questions..........but he didn'y make her realize that

"GOD gives all the things which we need and take an examination of us..........in reality........woh hamari soch or sabar ka exam leta hai.............agar hum inh ka sahi use karain tau woh hum say khush hota hai.........likin agar hum galat use karain or greedy ban jain............tau woh hum say naraz ho jata hai or hum apnay sahi rastay say bhatak jatay hain"......he was saying that in a low tone..........and kripa was shoked by hearing his words..........she fixed her face on the palm or one hand and continously looking at him......

"nags........u speak too well"...

"bus ji...........i never feel proud of that"......he said this by setting his hairs with his hands.........and on this.............kripa can't stop to laugh

"aj............sab adies main.........u were different"...........as her style of appreciation was also diff

"haan haan............tabhi tau us silver pari k saath baray shook say baatain ho rahin theen".....he also laughs at her comments

"aray kyoun na rehta............woh keh rahi thi k i was lookin so handsome in this dinner suit.........now har koi tumharay jaisa tau nahin k dekh k bhi good comments na day"..........she stand upp from stairs

"someone should learn how to settle scores 4om u......i didn't ask u to comment on my beauty"........she left the place

angad was still siting there.............watching her leave when she turned and come to him

"or haan..........main suraj ki tareef nahin karti.....iss ki shine or khoobsurati hamesha k jaisi hi hai"...........she also settles the scores in a diff..........but in what a beautiful style.....

"likin mera naam suraj nahin...........angad singhania hai" ..........he trys to make her angry

"janti hoon............i am hearing this name since my childhood".........she turns and enter in the house

"and i promise..............tum zindagi bhar yeh naam sunti rahoo gi"........he said that with a smile and then node..........and stands up while hitting his head lightly

"i don't know..........k sach jaan k.........tumharay chehray pay kaisay rang nazar aayein gain.......uff.........kahin main mar na jaoon on rangoon ko dekh kar".........he whistle and left to his house.

the tiredness of the day ends with a joy

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guys..........i think k yeh lamba part hai
hope u like that

enjoy the treat

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ana

Edited by cool_SK - 19 years ago

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