FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2

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imma chek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

nice ff

PLZ PM me

waiting for your next update 😊

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

nice one pm me also...

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Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

oh so Arnav doesn't remember Khushi...poor Khushi...
hope Arnav will remember things soon...but its already more than 1 and half years and still he doesn't remember anything...
hope Khushi gets all the happiness that she truly deserved...
update soon...

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ritzzzii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

oh gosh...so he loved he but have forgotten her...ufff...faded memories...
loved the update...hope things go fine soon...

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

I LOVE the twist :)

Thank God you took the memory loss route instead of the usual misunderstanding one. Now everything makes sense. Her family disowning an unwed mother to be makes much more sense than just shunning the poor girl because she cheated on her husband etc etc which is the much beaten path stories take.

I seriously can not wait for the next part. Specially their meeting and his memory regain. It is a very simple story told very beautifully.

Kudos :)

Hi Anony_mous,

Thanks again for reading.

I personally dont like cheating stories. dont mind reading them but really hard to create those and justify.

I am so looking forward to write the parts where he will gain memory and what he does about it.

Thank you for appreciating the story.

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---Sonia---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: gopijimodi

I read your comment and laughed.
I guess I want to write this story.
In my mind have have gentle moments between Arnav and Khushi.
His power, success and handsomeness and her beauty, softness and kindness, it is a match made in heaven. I have all these scenarios for them but not able to put them on paper.

I probaby want the story out there. out of mind and in the paper or screen or what ever the medium.
I will update as often as I can.
i guess currently i am ignoring alot of my work and concentrating on this.
but once i realize that I have to catch up my house work, I might slow down here.

yes, dear
I so understand what you are trying to tell me...I have been there and if it was up to me I would update every day but then there is life and work also:)
for me it is good and you update every day as I dont have to wait so long to read the next part:)
it is a very simple story and I love about it because it is not many times when you can read this type of story here so I an really glad that you are writing this story:)

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scarlet2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

nice update, so he forgot only somethings, not a complete memory loss. Khushi & Arnav's love story is not known to anyone, so no expectation of help from the family also. Hope Arnav will regain his memory completely and search for Khushi.