FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2

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Posted: 12 years ago

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice attempt and very good plot..

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Swaran13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Something unique. Love it so far..

Please continue :)

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Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved the story but have lot of confusions...
if both Arnav and Khushi loved each other den what happened that things got so wrong...
so Arshi consummated b4 getting married...
then y did Khushi claim that Arnav was being judgemental...
what happened...wanna know Arnav's side of story 2ooo...
good concept...
update soon...

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ashavi,

yes arshi consummated before marriage.

Yes they loved each other.

Things do go wrong. what goes wrong and what happens will be in next few updates in the from of flashback. You see, I started the story in present day when Khushi is with her 6 month old.

Thank you for asking for clarifications.

please let me know if there are more doubts. i will clarify them.

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi All,

Thank you for your responses. I was doubting if I should continue the story or not.

your responses encouraged me to continue,

i personally like this story line a lot. I had a few ideas with different story lines. But I like this one the most. so wanted to write it. This is my first time writing something.

There might be gammar, spelling errors. please let me know, I will correct them.

I am not much of a blogger nor do I post actively other than commenting on stories of some authors that I read. so this is a new experience for me.

please let me know if you have any questions about the story or if some situation needs more explanation. Also let me know if something is not as per forum rules. I will remove any such stuff.

There will be a lot of flashback. maybe 5 updates. you will get to know what happened or what might have gone wrong, that they separated.

There are no villians in this story. it is all situational.

Like you all Arnav and khushi are my favourite couple. cant get enough of iss pyaar ko kya naam doon. Now watching re-runs.

Thank you all for reading so far.

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rupzloveu

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it...

really interesting...

plzz continue soon...

n do pm me .. :)

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---Sonia---

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow, read the two parts and love them:)
this sotry is so good so good that I will tell to my friends to read this story as I know they will liked:)
hey dont be sad you will get readers it just takes time to get a readers...so dont lose hope no matter what...
okay, going to tell to all my friends to tell your story and do pm me when you will update:)