ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 4 - COMPLETED - Page 69

loved it!!!

This is so nice ... Their relationship is progressing smooth

OMG!!...superb part!!...

Tht was an intense, beautiful, cuddly, little bit bitter..aall n alll package of evry thng kind of update..

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Another so beautiful update Deepthi Di...loved it so much...whole of it...
Khushi called her mom at 5:30 am...this girl is desperate to get her old Arnie back...make him happy...
Loved it how she wanted to know about how's he back then...her determination to bring LIFE back to his life...
and the chote, mote or whatever just cracked me up...
Then his dream...the picture would be like this if only that accident didnt happen...and the last part of the dream...so meaningful...beautifully written...
Their encounter in the pooja mandir...Arnav's pain was visible...loved it how she continued the prayer...and those lines...may the reason be unknown to her at the moment,hope soon she will realize she is falling for him...
Then in the office...amazing...Di u are genius...how beautifully u brought the lighter happy moments after the sad ones...this is just so awesome...loved it...
in the dinner table...his eagerness to taste her cooking...her muttering...his thought...WOW...
he told her to bring the dish to his room,to make her wait...mischievous he is...Arnav Singh Raizada is well aware that her restless heart will won over her egoistic mind...the shaatir dimaag he has...
I just loved how he ate his portion and then wanna eat her portion too...loved their Tom&Jerry fight...and his making fun...
and then their convo...his opening up to her...her giving him support...telling him that she will b there for him...and the hug...all I can say is WOW...
this is such an awesome update...Thanks for this...
thanks for the pm Di...I noticed u r still sending pm to 20 people at once...but Di u can send 50 pm together now,u know that,right...

Loved their sweet banter...easygoing relation that is building slowly but steadily...love Arnav's opening to her even though little...Khushi is also making efforts to make Arnav move in life...ALL IN ALL A LOVELY UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The BIG BEAR HUS WAS TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!

Wow such an emotional and lovely update

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Nishu, Pooji told me about sending 50 Pms but I totally forgot..Sigh*

The pool part is my favorite..I re-wrote this chapter 4 times to balance humor and emotions :) I am glad it paid off 😃

this balance is just so awesome Di...my favorite ties between pool-part and office scene...😊

Amazing update...

simply superb