ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 4 - COMPLETED

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

fabulous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

wow.. tht was quite an effort on khushi's part...

rt frm trying to find out abt whts normal fr arnav, to trying to absorb his pain in her hug.. appreciable effort.. :) :)

i guess she doesnt relaise it yet.. she is doing as a frnd fr nw.. bt all tht she is doing.. is done only towards one goal.. to mk her realise tht hse loves him, n fr him to move on.. let go..

loved the yet another mention of hw ignorant khushi is of arnav's life.. no i dont mean abt his mom, or his life before the tragedy... tht can b normal fr any arranged marriage.. wht i m refering to is the name part :) :)...

n i m again amazed at the effort she is putting up nw.. going thru understanding all the pooja realted procedures, getting up early.. .. cooking prasad.. .. doing the pooja.. n all thsi knwing fully well tht arnav might nt like it.. n if he doesnt.. he was sure to shout at her.. :) :)

considering arnav left gardening after his mom... it must hv been quite an effort fr him to get htt rose fr khushi in the last update... well khushi.. u gt ur 1st step towards ur aim rt over there.. n i guess like us u too didnt realise it bak then :) :)

hw much effort he again must hv needed to control himself frm breaking down infront of khushi... be it inthe form of screaming n venting out.. or crying ...

this man sure neeeds too much love to overcome wht he had to face alone..

i wonder.. wud it have been a little easier .. n mayb arnav wud nt hv hardened as much.. if NK was nt in the picture.. n if he had khushi with him tht time.. well.. who knws.. :) :)

n just like khushi n arnav.. even i m confused wht she meant by saying those last few lines luking at him... bt i m sure all of us wud hv a better clarity on it with time :) :).. n i guess tht is wht mks it beautiful :)

i love the entire office fight... n i can realte here very well... everytime one is too tensed or worried over some prob.. distraction always helps... n wht better distraction than frnds... so here khushi being arnav's frnd came in raelly handy :) :)

the best parts being.. 2hrs ( the reaction to IDIOT) ... n the better than best was:: I finished the designs in 1 hour 38 mins 19 secs, way before your deadline! Dont challenge me!

that one gt me laughing :) :) ... i cud really really see 2 clg frnds fighting silly :) :)..

he doesnt realise it.. bt he really is coming bak slowly... trying to irritate her by his answers in office, by reducing the deadline ... bt asking her to come up to his room... the whole 'MMM' scene.. :) :)

he is just flowing along.. n soon he wud b on the same side as his happiness is ;) .. a place his parents wud b happy to see him :) :)

he really needs to cry.. n cry out loud.. i wish khushi can do tht ... mk him cry .. n just hold him while he does..

loved hw she gt him to accept the hug, n held onto him, like he did to her last time..

waiting fr the next update...

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Very good update...given time may be he will trust khushi...hope so

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anyafarsi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

it was such a sweet n cute update...especially th last part...awesome update

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Superb update!
Poor arnav, feel so bad for him , still after so many years he's still in turmoil and grief
Loved the way khushi lightens up his mood
Pls continue soon
Thanx

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shiv456

@shiv456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

very nice update can't wait for another one

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Kya karo ge jaan ke

@nidhu18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

WOW! Is the word for today's update. Totally speechless after reading today's update .
Written so beautifully with right amount for emotions loved the way the story is unfolding.
Eagerly waiting what all you have in store (next update)

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navjot7

@navjot7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

awesome updt
i love it
arnav donot want to open his feelings in front of anyone
their relationship is improving
thnx for pm
updt soon

Edited by navjot7 - 12 years ago

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sushna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

Oh touchy
thankx 4 pm :-)

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#700

just loved it

i really got emotional while reading this

khushi is trying her best to bring back the arnav in college

she wants to share his pain

so the khushi who was never interested in pooja and stuffs started to change herself for khushi

that dream of arnav was beautifully written.

Then his parents, Aran and Komal came upto him and walked him to Khushi. Aran and Komal took Arnav's right hand and placed it in Khushi's hands.

Chote! Ab Khushi hee tumhari zindagi hain. Saying this, Aran, Komal, and Anjali slowly withdrew their hands from Arnav's hand and drifted away from the new Raizada couple Arnav and Khushi.

Dad, Maa? He wept calling their names...Khushi leaned to his chest and placed her hand on his chest and whispered, Its OK Arnav. Main hoon tumhare saath.

this part really touched my heart

and then he went and tried to stop khushi. but she didn't. but then arnav didn't yell at khushi. he just backed off. that's not ASR

then that office part was so cute!😛

In meeting! was his text message to Khushi.

Another change in Arnav! He ignored her call but he responsibly texted the reason for ignoring her call, because after what happened last night, he was sure that she wouldnt mind giving him another slap in front of clients. That brought a cute smile on his lips, making him forget all the anger.

How dare he ignore my call? And in meeting, My foot!!! as if I dont know. She peeved but she noticed subtle smile on his lips and finally she caught him taking brief look at her.

Attitude, Huh? Khushi said to herself giving him a witty look. Wait and watch Mr. Raizada!

She texted back to him, You got 3 mins to call me, otherwise I will barge into your meeting.

She noticed shock expression on his face while he read the message. He texted her back, You are not doing anything stupid of that sort!

I sure very well can. I am now Raizada, remember? I can be as cruel as you!!! She replied.

khushi is acting like a typical wife! threatening and all!

and then there was arnav who was smiling like an idiot. but he went and met khushi. so cute! :D

and then arnav gave khushi so much work and said "Not a word now". so khushi wrote "Idiot" in a paper and gave it to arnav. she is sooo crazy. but cute too

and then arnav was really disappointed to meet aman instead of khushi

an d then arnav went home and khushi was very irritated with arnav and his behaviour

and irritate khushi more arnav asked khushi to bring the sweets and khushi refused. but the excitement won over ego and khushi went gave arnav the sweet.

and then arnav didn't comment on the sweet and continued to eat

that small argument over the bowl was so cute

You have changed. You were not like this in college. She said sadly.

Yeah? How was I in the college? He asked raising his brows while taking spoonful in his mouth.

You used to do this and sing MMM whenever I made chocolate cake for you.She closed her eyes and brought her lips together and drawled.

He chuckled. Kaise kartha tha mein? Show it again?

Aise, like this, MMM. She enacted again.

Phir se Karo? [[Do it again]] He is clearly enjoying her silly expression.

and then arnav decided to pull khushi's leg

well i really miss arnie. but i am sure with khushi's determination and love, we will get back arnav soon

He continued, You know why I couldnt say a word about this sweet? He asked looking into her eyes.

She tried to search for an answer in his moist eyes, and she in a way guessed it's got to do something with his mom.

This was the last dish my mom prepared before I left to NY 8 years ago and before she left me for good. He spoke in shaky voice.

He released his hold on her but she grabbed his hand and held it tightly as he needed that touch and warmth at that moment.

No matter how much I tried to put myself in your shoes, I dont think I can understand your pain. Or I dont think I am strong enough to even imagine the pain. But I want to see you as the Arnav in college. I want you to come back. Why is it so difficult? She asked in low tone, almost whispering, holding his hands tightly as he started trembling.

Why is it so difficult for my parents and sister to come back? He asked as a lone tear escaped the corner of his eyes. He hated himself for showing that side of him to her.

and then again i could see that lost child in arnav who misses his mother's warmth and affection. that was beautiful

i really can't understand what arnav's going through all time. he was alone for 8 years without anyone there to support him and share his pain. so it must be very difficult for him share his pain with khushi and showing his vulnerable side to her.

You need to let them go Arnav. Its OK to move on. Main hoon tumhare saath, hamesha keliye. [[I am with you forever]] She raised her head and looked up to see him. He was surprised to hear the same words that he dreamt in the morning.

Dont promise Khushi. If at all I learnt anything in my life, its that Nothing is permanent and no relation lasts forever!!!

and then khushi said the exact word she spoke in arnav's dream and he was surprised

She opened her arms and asked tilting her head, Can I get a bear hug? She smiled trying to divert the mood.

that was so cute. khushi asking a bear hug from arnav. I am glad now there is khushi to support him and share his pain and make him enjoy his life

can't wait for the next update!

continue soon