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Posted: 12 years ago

Brilliant update 👍🏼 Love the way you bring out the changes in the couple gradually, the efforts each take to make the other happy, Khushi all set to breathe happiness in his life & giving importance to every detail even if it includes digging into his past; shattering on seeing the pain shadowing on his face, gestures & actions & above all feeling the depth of his pain even forgetting to feel the hurt she was getting due to his harshness; Arnav upset on having hurt her even after vowing to keep her happy & then their little fights & especially the scene where Khushi understands the need of love his heart would be longing at the moment that she welcomed him into her open embrace ... outstanding buddy ... I always feel that understanding is the base for an eternal relationship bound by true love where one feels the joy of sharing as well as feels the pain of their partner even without the need of expressing it. Your portrayal of the love growing in between this couple is simply brilliant. Love this story immeasurably. Thanks for this lovely journey 🤗 Cheers for the PM

Khushi starting off her attempt to bring back the old Arnie by following the footsteps of Arnav's mom was a wonderful thought. Little Arnav piously helping out his mom in the daily pooja was so sweet ... his bonding with his mom was amazing. Garima warning Khushi not to hurt him by reviving old memories was so thoughtful of her. So true, how one incident has wiped out the lively & happy go lucky guy

Yesterday's incident of Arnav leaving behind a rose for her secretly throwing light on the quantum of her love that she needed to shower in order to bring life into him & she determined to fill his life with her place was so beautiful 😊

In the dream Arnav surprised to find the young lady with his family to be Khushi, his parents handing over their lovely son to Khushi & vanishing, Arnav's heart engulfed in pain to see his parents & sister leave but Khushi placing her hand on his chest as though taking away all the pain & assuring him that she was there for him was emotional but yet beautifully written 👏 ... I hope from now on the thought of his parents saying that anymore Khushi is your life will always keep lingering in his mind & heart & it might soothen his lonely heart that here after Khushi is there to wipe away the emptiness in his life & it might also help him to bond with her & let her into his life

Arnav shocked to hear the song for real & rushing down; he asking her to stop but her continual encircling his mind into a pool of confusion whether she did it purposely or she wanted to show that she belonged to him; he scuttling off the next instance & the dream reminding him of the loss & afflicting tons & tons of pain; & he worried for breaking the promise & hurting her while Khushi on the other hand breaking down not able to continue singing on witnessing the terrible pain that mirrored in his eyes & shutting her eyes unable to bear it; his new avatar of remaining silent & not letting out his pain in the form of angry words further worrying her was excellently laid down showing how even glimpses of the memories of Arnav's family had left him in pain unable to bear the loss even after 8 long years & Khushi's pain at the sight of witnessing his pain

Arnav noticing the gradual changes in himself & the thought of getting a smack from her for ignoring her calls completely drawing a smile on his face washing away his anger, Khushi threatening to barge into his meeting once she got a glimpse of him eying her, telling him that she is a Raizada which made him forget his surrounding & chuckle evidently was well framed 😃

Oh man 4 down to 3 down to 2 hours ... poor girl hmmm but she's the right competitor for you Mr.Raizada 😉 ... here comes our girl to teach you about time management - 1 hour 38 mins 19 secs 😃 ... loved her note warning him not to challenge her signing off as KKGSR

Arnav engulfed in excitement to meet his wife to be disappointed by Aman's presence however her note lightening his mood was well written

Khushi's mutterings were awesome. Enjoyed the way she was chiding him & holding her stand as to not to talk to him one second but then the other second she looking keenly to catch his expression or his thought of what he felt about her cooking while Arnav thinking her to be a typical wife & asking her to bring the prashad bowls up to the room & waiting for her was very sweet. Khushi failing to understand Arnav's silent gesture of conveying to her the moment she most expected due to her constant mutterings about his silent attitude & he gently pointing out to her how much he relished her food was amazingly narrated

Arnav astonished on hearing the same statement from Khushi's mouth literally making him relive his morning dream & the incident turning him delicate followed by Khushi inviting him for a hug which he didn't want to let go at any cost & Khushi holding onto him till he relaxed was captivated very beautifully by you in words, deeps 😃


Love to read more

Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update very emotional khushi waking up her mom to find out more about chotte so cute she can't remember his nick names loved how she found out the time and what arnav and his mom used to do and loved how she recreated it for him and arnav dreams a dream of a new beginning with khushi getting blessing from the family and him getting angry and khushi not stopping till she finished him leaving anf not talking to her the texting in office was so cute loved how she warned him she would barged in and arnav coming and giving her a dead line but every time she speak he takes and hour of and then her idiot on the paper was so cute and at home kushi prepared sweet for arnav and eagerly wants to know how it is but arnav teasing her by tell her to bring it up and she finally brings it up 30 minutes later so cute cribbing all the way loved how she is getting him to open up kicking and screaming but he is opening up that was so emotional letting out his hurt loved the update beautifully done loved how she tried to reassured him that she will always be there for him loved how she asked for the hug he really needs it awesome thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bitter sweet update! I mean the dream and when we woke up! The silent moments he was fighting within himself!

The way his dream came true! The way they fought! The carefree attitude everything so sweet! Loved it!

I guess Khushi realized her love for him I know its too early to say so but that's what I feel with the constant breakdown n his ignorance!

Loving it to bits

Cheers
Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg 😲
second page mjhe update ka pata hi nai
i didnt had a idea abt being the update posting 😭😭
anyways back to update dii 😛😛

Calling amma at 5.30 😲 who does dat nonsense except khushi 😆

par i loved the reason she called for it was arnav her arnav 😳

Rofl she doest remember her hubby main name kaise wife hai yehh😲😲

Oh my my she prepared everytng for the puja 😃😃

Dii dream was Just perfect {madhuri style }

👏👏

Ohh how he muma made arnav and khushi togther and left both of dem it was really emotional to read dat tym uknw dii wen i was reading di part i had a shy smile bcz being a emotional part i was happy ki arnav ko uskkke mom dad realise krwana aye hai uski relationship wid khushi and morover not to misundrstnd her in future wenever she does everythng 😃😃

Mann he shouted at her wen he himself thought he wont hurt her ever again😡😡

and ignored too 😡😡

Message fight was cute dii cutest fight ever i cn say 😆😆

loll she blackmailed him to come to her hilarious khushi blackmailing arnav 😲😲

perfect revenge 😆 4 hrs now 3 hrs gish i lovd it so much and wat the she didnt say a word but he still deductd an hr 😲

she wrote it on paper😳😳

over xnfdnt arnav met wid smart khushi tricks heheheheh😆😆

well tbh i also thought khush only came but it ws aman lolll😲😲

Puri tarah pagal ho chuki ufff u plan to kill mee na in every update of ur wid his damn sexy lines ☺️

Both r damn egoistic😡😡 playing around like a kid

why the dinner go silent wid dem cnt dey talk dere a bit Confused hayee he was testing her patience nw by ot tasting the prasaad wich she made for the first tym in his house hahahah i enjoyed it alot dii 😆 😆

Jab dekho sorry fight ufff dis khushi is really a kid at mind and heart 😳😳

Fnally her patience got over 😆 and she took the bowl in his room i knew she wil take it bcz arnav is no less ziddi den khushi 😛

He loved the prasad mannn but didnt say much to khushi annoyance hahahaha damn funny part dii u knw i was to waitng for the response of him just wanna know whether her cooking skillls match enough to his demand or it was yucky at taste but he didnt say only and was eatiing in a full speed he grabbed her part also as she wasnt eating dat was so cute of him but one thing didnt make sense to me was dat y he wasnt acepting it dat its taste great😕😕

And aftr hearing dose words wich was khushi longing for frm arnav mouth made her happy but instead of dat she asked him the reason why was he chngd frm clg arnie to dis asr 😲😲

LOolll MMM it was so fun diii i thought he was doing bcz he was getting happy but he was toh giving his amous smirk to khushi thoughts MMM 😆 😆

Dii arnav part of emotions and feeling was really hurt touchin i ouldnt ven imagine of getting so much pain wich he got Cry😭 and den his dream came true the words wich he heard in his dreams were actually spelt by khushi in real and actually i was surprised by her exact words bcz i didnt expected dis lines ryt dat tymTongue

The hug was beautful dii👏👏

a big hug frm me to u 🤗
Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
we r stalkers yaar 😆... we will stalk every day weather u update or not...

really cute one,the way kushi called her mom asks when arnav mom will wake up, what she will do...she really wants arnav to come back from the shell...hope this day comes sooon...

the texting in office its simply superb yaar...very funny and kushi wrote idiot on the paper can not stop laughing😆...

at home kushi prepared sweet for arnav so sweet...at dining tble she eagarly wants to know how it is but arnav is arnav...

their pool side talk it simply superb...slowly they are arnav is opening to kushi...sooon he will realize she will never leave him...hey 😉can not wait to read more...

poor that AMAN at office and Kaka at home, they are strugilling between MR and MRs Raizada...

thank u thank u each chapter is different yaar...


Edited by kushiarnav1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an interesting update!
Both trying to adjust to one another.
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update his dream part and their cute fight in office were awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayee last part is heart touchin ! Arhi r made for each other
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Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update and I like their cute fights. omg its so emotional. everyday I was stalking ur ff. its worth the waiting.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow their relation is growing on.

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