SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ :FINAL RAMAYAN UPDATED! - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: cscs

just wanna say..thanx fr cheering up my mood..

thanx😊


m glad i could 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
🤣 🤣 🤣
Omfg!!! Lmao 🤣 🤣 🤣
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i cudnt cntrl ma laughter wen i was reading dis... 🤣 🤣 🤣 room me sab log darin
Niways i swear mene ESA RAMAYAN APNE LIFE ME NAAHI KABHI PADHA AUR NAAHI PADHUNGI!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
esa sense of humuour kaha se opt kiya hai tune?? Agr zyada hai toh thoda muge bhi de de 🤣 🤣 🤣
nw abt ur update -----
Vil strt wid swayam...Omg!! Ye SRK ka atma bana tha 🤣 🤣 🤣 n den siren aka sharon..inki baare me kya bolu?? 🤣 🤣 🤣 re haan!dat dialogue .. I mean har dialogue r wrth commendable bt i loved dt one wer ravan tells hr to cum out of d house n cross d line bt she denies on sayin ki ME REY NE BANAYI HUI RAY Ko cross ni kar sakti 🤣 🤣 🤣 phir vishaka's pimple shaap aur bharat ka dialogue abt swayam 🤣 🤣 🤣 n cute cuti si confused si kumbhi 🤣 🤣 🤣 re yr rinni! N phir totla amar 🤣 🤣 🤣 poor ravan!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 dekho kesa zamana aa gaya ...wer we hav to adress ravan olso as "POOR" n phir neha ka babu 🤣 🤣 🤣 "MY BABU BECOMING RAJA" 🤣 🤣 🤣 modern kaikeyi eh?? N dt too in a HINGLISH lang?? 🤣 🤣 🤣 ufff!! Peth dukhin re mera... N den rey,taani n kriya..bhagwaan!! Oops!! Bhagwan hi pagal hai is ss mein 🤣 🤣 🤣 sry par ram ka character ka MOTHER SISTET kar di tune 🤣 🤣 🤣 chill re..cuz i meant in a +ve way! 😉 n aur kuch bacha hai kya??
Re haan vo sattar min!!!!!!!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 hw can i 4gt it??
THE EPIC DIALOGUE OF BHAGWAAN RAM!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
u noe me was operating cell wen i was in d class n jab ye line padha 🤣 🤣 🤣 gawddd!!! I could nt control ma laughter n burst out in frnt of evry one.. Par thank god!! (nt swayam bhagwaan) i was in d last bench.
Niways nw my handz r paining n eyes too cuz am commenting thru cell as i saw ur pleading scrap n den came here to comnent...

Thanx a lot dear fr d scraps n pm! 😃
love u! ❤️
keep writing n keep shining!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

🤣 🤣 🤣
Omfg!!! Lmao 🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣
i cudnt cntrl ma laughter wen i was reading dis... 🤣 🤣 🤣 room me sab log darin
Niways i swear mene ESA RAMAYAN APNE LIFE ME NAAHI KABHI PADHA AUR NAAHI PADHUNGI!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
esa sense of humuour kaha se opt kiya hai tune?? Agr zyada hai toh thoda muge bhi de de 🤣 🤣 🤣
nw abt ur update -----
Vil strt wid swayam...Omg!! Ye SRK ka atma bana tha 🤣 🤣 🤣 n den siren aka sharon..inki baare me kya bolu?? 🤣 🤣 🤣 re haan!dat dialogue .. I mean har dialogue r wrth commendable bt i loved dt one wer ravan tells hr to cum out of d house n cross d line bt she denies on sayin ki ME REY NE BANAYI HUI RAY Ko cross ni kar sakti 🤣 🤣 🤣 phir vishaka's pimple shaap aur bharat ka dialogue abt swayam 🤣 🤣 🤣 n cute cuti si confused si kumbhi 🤣 🤣 🤣 re yr rinni! N phir totla amar 🤣 🤣 🤣 poor ravan!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 dekho kesa zamana aa gaya ...wer we hav to adress ravan olso as "POOR" n phir neha ka babu 🤣 🤣 🤣 "MY BABU BECOMING RAJA" 🤣 🤣 🤣 modern kaikeyi eh?? N dt too in a HINGLISH lang?? 🤣 🤣 🤣 ufff!! Peth dukhin re mera... N den rey,taani n kriya..bhagwaan!! Oops!! Bhagwan hi pagal hai is ss mein 🤣 🤣 🤣 sry par ram ka character ka MOTHER SISTET kar di tune 🤣 🤣 🤣 chill re..cuz i meant in a +ve way! 😉 n aur kuch bacha hai kya??
Re haan vo sattar min!!!!!!!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 hw can i 4gt it??
THE EPIC DIALOGUE OF BHAGWAAN RAM!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
u noe me was operating cell wen i was in d class n jab ye line padha 🤣 🤣 🤣 gawddd!!! I could nt control ma laughter n burst out in frnt of evry one.. Par thank god!! (nt swayam bhagwaan) i was in d last bench.
Niways nw my handz r paining n eyes too cuz am commenting thru cell as i saw ur pleading scrap n den came here to comnent...

Thanx a lot dear fr d scraps n pm! 😃
love u! ❤️
keep writing n keep shining!


dil kush karditta ji , thank u soo much a taarey fan reading n appritiating my works , relly means alot , again a bigwala thank u indeed gives me reason to write .😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Remaining cmnt

hahahahahaha


bharat sharon ko uthane aaya hai nd then un dono ka jagda
hahahahaha😆



nd end scene was hilarious

SRK Swayam nd there dialogue frn SRK movie

that was hilarious😆




Swayam ke sattar minute vala dialogue ki speech bhi mast thi

mujhe laga tha kahi ye vanar sena ram ko n mar de
it was hilarious os😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Itni khush bata ni sakta kitni khushi hoti hai jab mein ye OS padta hu



me planning to give this os to my frnd



so they can read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
thank u thank u thank u sooo much sunil bhai , it means alot, u dont noe how happie i m i finally crossed 100 comments n yeh ek shagun wala extra 😆 . feels owesome , this os have recived on of the best n hugest comments i have ever recived in my entire write ups . thank u universe ji n how could i forget my ram ji 😆 , unki krupa se iss os ne apni charan seema paar ki hai aur haame asha hai ki aage bhi ayesa hi response aata rahe .



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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Unres...

PP 🤗 🤗
Yaar padh toh kab ka liya tha but itna haas rahi thi ki comment Nahi kar payi n phi bhul gayi..
Really sorry for delay patlu...
Dis was just brilliant. . Best best comic os i ve ever read..
Ur simply awesome. .
Hats off to u for attempting dis n doin it so so brilliantly..
I wonder yeh likhne ke liye tune full ramayan ko rata rata maar liya hoga 😆
Only one reaction 🤣 🤣 🤣
Lookin for more comic os.s from u..
Pls do write more of it. .


finally , thank u soo much 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Part 1

Amazing very funny
Loved the invovment of all charecters
And the idea of having tani and aashi on it
U knw some typical hindi
But dint get any of.it
As i dnt knw it


Part 2
🤣
I was literally lauging out loud
H u so good wiv comedy sans
Am so impressed
And damn ur commnd over ur lang(hindi) is so good
I totally loved how whole gang real selves were shown in the ramayn charecters
Swayam and amar scene was the besf...all shahrukh khan dialogue

It wud hve been more fun if i had at least a little idea about the whole ramayan story
I dint knw wots happening coz i dint knw the realstory

But i enjoyd reading it like anything
It was fab hats off to u sans
Loved it
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Part 1

Amazing very funny
Loved the invovment of all charecters
And the idea of having tani and aashi on it
U knw some typical hindi
But dint get any of.it
As i dnt knw it


Part 2
🤣
I was literally lauging out loud
H u so good wiv comedy sans
Am so impressed
And damn ur commnd over ur lang(hindi) is so good
I totally loved how whole gang real selves were shown in the ramayn charecters
Swayam and amar scene was the besf...all shahrukh khan dialogue

It wud hve been more fun if i had at least a little idea about the whole ramayan story
I dint knw wots happening coz i dint knw the realstory

But i enjoyd reading it like anything
It was fab hats off to u sans
Loved it


thank u soo much ammi di 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg sanskruti wat an awesome os
the characterisation of the whole ramayan play was superb
each character given perfect roles n it was actually an hillarious
i literally couldnt stop laughing while reading it n by the end of it my stomach started paining
n while reading my sister thought i had gone mad
it was a rocking ramayan play i soo wish i actually get to see such type of a play man
n wat to say abt u , u r an awesome writer n u always come out with amazing stuff the first wen i read ur works was ur vrushan movie series n now this
love u man for writing such awesome stuffs n actualy reading such awesome things after studying and a tired day it lightens the mood n acts as an energy power
loved this os
swaron back to school days rocks!!!!
loved it
thanx for the pm
keep writing more like this
will never forget this ever in my life n havebecome a fan of all ur writings dude
will be waiting for ur next write up

n very sorry for commenting so late

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