'Don't Take Life For Granted' A Series Of SS

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Tasha 👏 👏

I am happy that you are writing such a great thing 👏 👏

It will help us to be happy and will teach us lessons to live 😊 😊

The title is just perfect "Don't Take Life For Granted"

And the title is so pure and true 👏 👏

And then "Life is short live it fully"

This is my all time favorite phrase 😉

And this is the rule of my life 😊

I always follow this phrase 😊

Then the synopsis 👏 👏

What should I say about the synopsis

I am speechless 👏 👏

Super awesome 👏

Then the quotes 👏 👏 And specially Allama Iqbal's 👏

"Khudi ko kar buland itna ke har taqder se pehle
Khuda bande se khud pooche bata teri raza kya hai."

I personally love this quote 😃 😃

Then the part 1 😊 😊

Outstanding 👏 👏

Update soon 😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

tasha, greatest idea ever.

kudos to you for writing this.

this is a poem i love---and it seemed appropriate. if u have not read it maybe u would like it.

brilliantly written. and who cant face life are cowards.

A PSALM OF LIFE

WHAT THE HEART OF THE YOUNG MAN
SAID TO THE PSALMIST

TELL me not, in mournful numbers,
Life is but an empty dream ! —
For the soul is dead that slumbers,
And things are not what they seem.

Life is real ! Life is earnest!
And the grave is not its goal ;
Dust thou art, to dust returnest,
Was not spoken of the soul.

Not enjoyment, and not sorrow,
Is our destined end or way ;
But to act, that each to-morrow
Find us farther than to-day.

Art is long, and Time is fleeting,
And our hearts, though stout and brave,
Still, like muffled drums, are beating
Funeral marches to the grave.

In the world's broad field of battle,
In the bivouac of Life,
Be not like dumb, driven cattle !
Be a hero in the strife !

Trust no Future, howe'er pleasant !
Let the dead Past bury its dead !
Act,— act in the living Present !
Heart within, and God o'erhead !

Lives of great men all remind us
We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
Footprints on the sands of time ;

Footprints, that perhaps another,
Sailing o'er life's solemn main,
A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,
Seeing, shall take heart again.

Let us, then, be up and doing,
With a heart for any fate ;
Still achieving, still pursuing,
Learn to labor and to wait.

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

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unres...

hey tasha...

the concept is really really great dear...

and as u said its somethinf out of the box and never seen before kind of concept...

i would really love to read it...

do pm me wenevr u update😳

Edited by -Chaitra- - 11 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Wow tasha ypu rendered me speechless completely speechless I'm in awe of you angel you were brilliant..👍🏼.
First things the concept of this work its fantastic something very different and something very important also people get frustrated and tired of life very easily and just consider an option of giving up and ending their life which is a very sad option trying to evade problems and not facing them is the wrong thing to do facing them and working a way out is the thing that should be done..
Depends on the outlook one has towards life if you try to see the good and positive things and try finding happiness life becomes beautiful and worth living automatically but if negative is all one thinks and thrives on then its a watse of life the precious gift given by god to us..😊.
The way you wrote this update showing how one should see the positive rather than the negative aspects of life and value our life and weighing our options before taking any step was commendable girl you're a brilliant talented writer no words to say..
The quotes were awesome and truly motivating it made me think for a minute whether my outlook is truly right or even I'm taking my life granted and just living it for the sake of it..
You should definitely 100% continue this work I'd love to read it and support you in continuing this through my comments..
You rock angel simply superb you are..🤗 😃
Love,
Kashmi..😊

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

hey tasha u did a brillant job👍🏼
keep it up..
quotes are awesomes.
totally loved your concept ..

Yes life is too precious to waste just like this..
whatever happened or happening in our life we just have to be strong n tackle it..
Sucidie is never an option..
yes we all know its easy to say but hard to do but still we just can't waste our life n give up so easily right..
life is sometime good n sometime its really bad but we all know that it will never stay still..if its bad time now then definetly our good times will also come but till then we just have to work hard n stay strong to tackle whatever comes in our way ..

this story i am defintely gonna read..
poor naina..
really feeling bad for her :(
her family memebers 😡
those words they use for her own daughter or sister i can't belive it..seriously they need to realise what those words does to her😡
GA is angle to save naina n make her loved one to realise her importance in their life n to make naina also realise that sometime what we see is not always right..
Amazing start..
excited to read further..
thanks for the pm :)

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I seriously apprrciate d thought u hav put in in making this thread
truly it is an out of d box idea
i seriously loved d first part of ur first short story
i must say tashu dat was a perfect piece of emotions
eagerly waiting for its nxt part