KriYaansh OS - Ras ke Bhare Tore Naina

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing

Loved the descriptions of the dance

Her portrayal of her feelings for him is beautiful

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shemli

@ShemliArsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

That was outstanding...beautifully portrayed kria's feeling through her dance..
and last part...seriously????

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Amazing OS di..

loved it

beautifully described

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awsum..yaar..

wo end wala real wala rey tha na..??

loved it..

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

this was fab...

u depicted it all out too well.. and yess the highlight was the song..

i usually dont like classical songs or dance...but this one had me glued...

kriya as a classical dancer! it reminded me of shakti's nritya calender poses!

kriya still feels strongly for reyaansh... again feelings described perfecly!

and the end...it was again just apt.. u left it upto the readers to imagine however we want it to end... with Reyaansh actually being there!

loved it...do write more! ❤️

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Res :-D. .
Unres :-D . .
Superb OS DI. . .
I never heard dis song. .
Lagta hai hai jake sunna padega. .
Ek dum mast tha os. .
Kriya imaging 1000's of rey all around, waah. .and last mei ek real rey mil hi gaya, 🤣
i realy lovd the way u showd kriya's feeling through d song. .realy loved it. .:-D
ek dum jhakas os tha di. .:-D

Arre, maine song embed kia hai post mei.. Thru PC jaaegi toh sunaayi dega..

Thanks so much Madhu..

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Ash_KriYaansh
woowwwiieee...!! 😃😃 loved it...! n as already said on fb...needed smthng to chnge my depressing mood...thankuuuhh dii...👏 👏

i am so glad mai tera mood thik kar paayi. Although jitna sad sa yeh OS hai.. Mujhe nai pata kaise thik hua tera mood..!

Thanks so much baby!! ^_^

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: nifty-nia
I absolutely love love love this one! Its so beautiful! I have no other words.
I must confess, I'd been craving to read something written by you that's not kinky or gothic :P This is amazing :D

You make me sound like such a dark writer!! :P ^_^

But I am glad that I wrote this then.. I know I have been writing broody and kinky stuff all too much and haven't touched even a bit of fluff in like a century.. Maybe I'll do a light hearted short series just for you!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: asmaju
Anky di this is by far one of the best Dance based OS I have ever read..
Mujhe pata nahi if you are a dancer o not but yes you did justice to it beautifully..
I have just seen friends practicing Bharatnatayam and this OS was a beautiful one.
I loved how Kriya imagined Rey while dancing as her only audience..
Acha was one Rey real..I mean he found out her..The words of song came true..
The first time I hear this song and I love it...
:)

Aww Asma! Itni badi baat mat bol.. Aur bhi acche OS hai Dance based!! :)

I actually am not a professional dancer.. But I do have thodu thodu sa training in some styles.. Not classical par.. That toh takes years..

Haan, the last wala Rey jisne spectacles pehen rakhe the was real..

Thanks so much!! ^_^