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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha
frstly thanxx 4 dis os dii...

nd i truely loved it...

beautifull...

nd kriya's costume is jst wowww...!!!!!

nd last m rey is real...??

lovd it...:)

nd thnxx 4 changing d mood too...:)

thanks so much Shalini! And I am glad I could help with your mood even a teeny bit!

Haan last wala Rey is real!! ^_^

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
Tujhe aur Dee ko Happy ending stories kaathti hain kya..??? -_-
*sigh... Nywaz... Coming to this OS... It was mind blowinggg... I just loved loved loveddd it...

i havnt heard d song before..ab zaroor sunungi... 😳

Stage fear was beautifullydescribed... How she images Reyaansh everywhere... And the loneliness always overpowering her when the song comes to an end... Uff... It was beautiful...

Last ka part padne k baad u know i scrolled down to see ki aagey kya hua... Bit aagey toh kuch tha he nahi...

He was for real... Goshhh... Kuch toh dikhaati...

but maybe it was better like this only...
Beautiful...

Acchi ending hi toh di!! Isse zyaada acchi kya ho sakti hai??

Arre maine song embed kia tha.. PC se aaegi toh sunaayi dega.. Aagey ka part maine readers pe chodh dia ki woh kaise imagine karna chaahte hai.. :P

See, tune khud hi keh dia last mei... Ki it was beautiful like this!! ^_^

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sanjana_D3
Amazing
Loved the descriptions of the dance
Her portrayal of her feelings for him is beautiful

Thanks so much Sanjana. I am glad you liked it.

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ShemliArsha
That was outstanding...beautifully portrayed kria's feeling through her dance..
and last part...seriously????

Of course I wasnt joking with the last part.. nahi toh likhti hi kyun! Last part real hi tha~~

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -kitty-
superb os 👏

Thanks Kitty!! 😃

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: aTTiTude_dIvA
this was fab...

u depicted it all out too well.. and yess the highlight was the song..

i usually dont like classical songs or dance...but this one had me glued...

kriya as a classical dancer! it reminded me of shakti's nritya calender poses!

kriya still feels strongly for reyaansh... again feelings described perfecly!

and the end...it was again just apt.. u left it upto the readers to imagine however we want it to end... with Reyaansh actually being there!

loved it...do write more! ❤️

Fida, Even I usually skip the classical ones.. I think this is the first time I even ever attempted to write on classical song.. As I personally suck at the traditional dance forms..

But I am glad that I didnt suck as much in writing this..

Thank you for the getting the true essence of this OS so clearly.. Yeah, I wanted the readers to imagine whichever way they could about the re-union..

Thanks for reading it!!