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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

omg tht was an improvement in arnav... awww such a lovely update... oh i love the twins :D

Aman was amazing in teasing... i hope arnav shares that he found khushi n put every one at home out of their misery ...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

awesome update loved it
felt bad for arnav

loved how khushi was there for him when he was having the nightmares

aman teasing arnav was cute

thanks for the pm

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Awesome Update!!!
The way Khushi console Arnav showed how much she loves him till now...
I hope Arshi's family like happy and perfect..
Arnav's family changed towards him after That Incident..
Seeing Aakash's cold behavior towards Arnav , I realised that Arnav was suffering all alone in these years..
Except Payel nobody can't see his guilty, his suffering...
Or they saw but ignored it ...
Hope now everything will be alright...
Waiting for next..

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: swatim318
the res

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OMG you dedicated this update to me..and i am commenting on first page..

AND for u updating earlier than promised, welll u got my song dedication dint you sweetheart... mmuuuaaahhh (I seriously want a kiss icon on IF)

coming to the update... Fantabulous...

God arnav's nightmare alwys scares me.. i cant even think of putting myself in his shoes... but i am sooo sooo glad that this time khushi was there to console him and she made him feel better and sleep again... 😳... and the second time when he was in the middle of his nightmare, his two cute angels were there to make it vanished... now i know why my hubby is soo keen for twins... sach mein, arshi has two most adorable kids ever.. awww i love their mischief when they were trying to hide arnav and then themselves.. Lovely

hahahaha Aman has become bold eh.. 😆😉... u are taking a big risk man... love him already...

woowww khushi thinks of her future with Arnav... she wants to see this breakfast scene daily... May All your wishes get fulfilled honey..

Oh god we saw a glimpse of Raizada Family after a long time... well.. I guess Arnav has really beeen suffering a lot... i mean his own family has given him lots of punishment.. his nani who used to dot on him, is not even talking to him...😭 and akash his dearest brother ignores him.. what more he deserves..... well i dont blame them, Arnav has actually done something incorrigible.. but i think its high time they see how arnav is repenting.. God I feel sooo bad... i wonder when will everything be alright..

and last but not the least... Arhi conversation... welll i always love the way they converse... they talk even without talking... OMG.. Arnav said things cant go as previously.. because he wants to go forward... awww and he gave her a sample 😳😉... i adored khushi's reaction... i wonder what will she do when arnav becomes bolder..😉

awesomest update..

ab aise updates doge to wait kaise hoga... please update sooon..

thanks for pm...

I had to dedicate this update to you...I wouldn't have been able to sleep otherwise! No one apart from you seemed so eager for this update 😆 I hauled a** to make sure I updated by the time I said I would just for you so yes..this update was for you.😳 And yes, I got your song dedication...did you get my reply to it???😉

Don't let Arnav's nightmares scare you just yet...I havent revealed what they're about... And of course, as evil as I am, I will bring it up at the worst possible time (I think...I havent planned it out completely yet). I was afraid that the scene may have seemed repetitive but I needed to see the affect Khushi and the twins have on him...they hold the power to make his nightmares go away and in them lies the solution of his redemption.😳 There is a lot that Arnav has been up to in the last five years that I haven't revealed yet...but slowly...I'll start hinting towards things...

They see his repenting but like Akash said...until they know that Khushi is safe and happy, he will always be the man who hurt her before their brother/grandson/nephew..Akash holds himself responsible to a certain extent because he had edited her pros and cons list and practically convinced her to marry him...so he feels it his responsibility to make sure she's fine before thinking about forgiving Arnav...

I'm with your hubby on this one...I dont know why but I've always had a thing for twins...when I get married and have kids...I would love to have twins!😳 too bad we can't plan stuff like that..LOL. Arnav, for the most part, will stop retreating into his shell and he will try to keep up with the pace that she sets...and as you could tell..she herself is already day dreaming and longing for a future with her husband and kids...so her decision has been made somewhere deep inside but the demons are putting up a fight.

As the story nears its end...I'm starting to worry more and more whether or not I'll be able to tie all the loose ends or not and whther or not I'd be able to do justice to the closure of the past and the story itself...so I'm giving you the responsibility (yeap, forcing it on you) to remind me if there's anything I forgot that I may have mentioned in the past and forgot to bring it up! If there is one thing that I hate is when CVs end TV shows without tying the loose ends. (for example...how no one in IPKKND found out that shyam was the reason behind Khushi's father's paralysis..like..W*F!😡) so yeah...you'll help me out, right? right? right?

Originally posted by: shiv456
superb I like where it is going

Thank you so much!😳

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
First of all I'm assuming the "sarah" you have dedicated the update too is me so I love you very much and it's a sweet gesture but if it is not me I'm looking away embarrassed, lol.

The length of the update has definitely made up for the delay, so you are forgiven this time.

The update was absolutely amazing and simply superb,

Awww poor Arnav having another nightmare and I'm glad this time Khushi was there to comfort and console him and Arnav's was aware of it.

It was so sad to read Arnav breaking down and crying, I'm glad Khushi is going to give him time and let him talk about the nightmares himself.

Finally we got a glimpse of Akash and Payal, awww bless there son is upset with Arnav.

I don't blame Akash for still being angry but I agree with him about forgiving Arnav when he sees Khushi, I'm sure he will forgive Arnav when he knows that Khushi has forgiven him. (I hope this sentence makes sense).

Awww I absolutely loved the part with Arnav and the kids and the way they tried waking him up and then hiding behind him like cute innocent kids, so sweet.

Wow the Aman and Arnav harmless arguing was so funny especially when Aman bought up the number of times he has fired him, lol.

I loved the last part where Khsuhi bought up the promise talk and I loved what Arnav meant when he said no, wow he gave her kiss so sweet and adorable.

I think it's enough of the kisses on the cheek lol, so on the next thread I want a kiss on the lips.

The update was a brilliant read and written exceptionally well,

Thanks for recommending a story, I shall definitely give it a read,

Thanking you in advance for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part on a brand new thread xx

No no...you're right...the dedication was for you.😳 I edited the post to put your username in brackets...hehe...Along with Swati, I had to give you a shoutout/dedication for being one of my most reliable and constant readers! Whether or not my updates are delayed, your comments are always right on time! so, Thank you for being such a dedicated reader!🤗

Yeap, Arnav's aware of her support and he will no longer push her away...so things are good in ArHiland for now.😳 he has decided to let go, yes, but there is only so much a human being can do in terms of what they dream...and these nightmares have been a part of him for five years now and they're not going to leave just like that...but...Khushi and the twins will ease him out of this purgatory as well.😃 The twins, as you can tell are easily incorporating their "buddy" in their daily life and they've become so attached that they're willing to break their mother's rules to make sure he doesn't get in trouble...the twins and father trio will drive Khushi crazy..LOL.

Akash somewhere feels responsible for what happened with Khushi because at the end of the day, Akash had a hand in convincing her for the alliance...so his first priority is to find Khushi and to make sure that she's alright...and true to his word, when he finds khushi safe and happy, he'll forgive Arnav.😊

As far as Arnav-Khushi's kisses go...I wont say anything as of yet...😆 I shall let you find out when it happens...I wont be hinting towards it at all...😃😈 Admit it...deep down, you love my evilness!😆😉

Originally posted by: shalini_s
Aman had the cheek to pull Arnav's legs... loved the update.. hope Khushi meets the family soon..

After Arnav opened up to him, Aman is getting more bolder in terms of teasing ASR.😉 Thank you!

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Amazin part

Thanks!

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Tht was am awesome update
Loved akash n payal part

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neethurose

@neethurose

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#876

I read all chapters in one go. I loved the story very much.

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#877

hey read ur story in one go...n I'm in love with ut...i liked the way u wrote the plot...with so much of positivity after all those heart wrenching events...looking forward fr future updates:)

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#878

omg the surprise for me was at the end... thank u so much hun for liking it. I am really feeling embarrassed coz I know its not tht god but still ur gesture touched me. Thank u! loved the update... I m gonna res thenext post for detailed comment as promised previously n I'll unres it in a moment or two off to lunch nfor the time being

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#879

LOVED da update...
the beginning was so intense emotion wise... I guess somehow Khushi's instincts the love for Arnav in her heart was da reason y she woke up suddenly in da middle of night though yes apparently it was her dry throat but u know when ur loved one is in some kind of pain or trouble u feel restless urself right... to right at tht time Arnav was having a nightmare and Khushi woke up and when she was going to come back to her room he screamed... I m feeling so bad for him he did a mistake in drunk state and he is paying a huge price. That's y no one shld drink so much dat they lose theor senses... anyways I just loved the whole bedroom scene. Khushi's I m here is all dat Arnav wants in his life. Arnav's tears made ny eyes wet too...
So happy u brought back Payal and Akash. Sahil sweetheart u r gng to get both a brother and sister both. How sweet their bonds r Payal n Arnav and akash and Khushi.

Aman u r really daring darling but don't push ur luck too much haan! and the ending was just Muaaah really he is not going to act as he was bcoz he is taking many steps ahead... just loved da update. ... waiting for next

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 11 years ago

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: .Sia.
If I reserved a spot last time, I didn't unres and I apologise! Seriously, I get so annoyed when anyone does that so I'm sorry!

I've been inactive on IF but your FF is one I have bookmarked so I regularly check for updates. I have read every chapter since I last commented & I take my hypothetical hat off to you.

I had said from the start that I wasn't sure if Arnav would ever be able to redeem himself, and I read every chapter keeping an open mind but I could never bring myself as a reader to forgive him. I guess my state of mind was similar to that of Aakash in this chapter.

Every time Khushi was cold to him, I took her side, and initially as she began to soften towards him I kept asking myself if he was deserving of that. Yet when he saved the girl from the goons, when he prevented her from being subjected to the same fate as Khushi, that was a turning point in my opinion. Because he saw the other side, he saw the terror. He felt the terror. He was in full consciousness and he saw the situation he had put Khushi in. & that was so necessary as he had to confront his demons. My admiration for Khushi significantly multiplied as she stuck by him, something which must have taken so much courage. Despite logic and past experience telling her that he was more than capable of being an attacker, her belief in him and his redemption was enough to show her that he wouldn't do it again.

The two of them have a long path ahead. Perhaps one day that nightmare will disappear for good, but this will only happen when Arnav confides the truth of his nightmare to Khushi, when they are sure of their future together. And I love how we are beginning to see more of the Raizadas, definitely making me feel like someone from that household will find Arnav & Khushi. For some reason I don't imagine them returning to the Raizada house as they have their own life set up. But I do see an encounter on the horizon...

The kiss at the end gave me butterflies, I can only imagine how Khushi felt! I love how the comfort is being introduced between them, and how there aren't any unrealistic jumps in the level of intimacy. I must say, this story is shaping up beautifully. Definitely one of the best I've ever read, and I'll always remain a keen reader!

I'll try not to leave it too long next time, but just know that I've loved every single chapter of this story. I haven't even skimmed the surface of all I had to say on the story but it's late at night and I honestly have no idea what I've typed in the paragraphs above! 😆

Hey! Its no worries...I've definitely reserved spots and forgotten to unres them. Its all understood, no apologies needed!😊

Even as a writer, I couldn't bring myself to let him be forgiven...that's where my updates had been delayed for a bit...life was busy and on top of that, when I sat down to write...I just couldn't write anything that seemed lenient towards Arnav...it took a few writers' blocks to come up with an alternative take on the story and then the updates became easier to write with that mindset, so I completely understand your POV. I contemplated putting in Priya's case...I was torn between whether I should or shouldn't but then I decided that there was absolutely no way I could let him get forgiven unless he did the opposite of what he'd done in the past and then I went ahead with it. I was glad that mostly all the readers shared that opinion...😊

Khushi in this FF has to be one of my favourite characters that I've ever created...she's what today's woman should be like. Brave, strong, independent, and able to lead a life without the support of a man or without caring for the societies stigmas

Despite the few repairs that have been done, they indeed do have a long way to go and in time, they shall overcome them together. they're both aware of how much the other has suffered and they both realize that they will have to support each other out of this.

To be honest with you, I dont know if I'm going to have them stay in India or if they'll go back to Canada to reunite with the family. I normally don't start my stories with a particular end in mind...I have a few endings and as the story goes on, I choose the one that best ties all lose ends and completes that full circle.😳

Their progress in terms of physical intimacy, given their past, will be slow. initially I worried that my readers may get bored without the sparks between the two but everyone seems to echo the sentiment that the pace is right...so that makes me happy. Thank you for providing your feedback on that.

From your detailed review of the story, I can tell that you haven't just skimmed over it...you dont have to justify it😆😆 but Thank you so much for taking the time out to read the story, for appreciating it, and for finding the time to write a huge comment! It really means a lot. Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: .Sia.
It's been 11 months since I last commented on your story. I actually suck!

Oh come on! You dont suck! You essay of an comment as more than made up for it.😳

Originally posted by: AKHUSHI
Wonderful update. Worth the wait. I feel so bad for Arnav when he gets up in the morning or in the middle of the night with these horrible night mares. I agree what he did is wrong. Bit he is repenting truly. I hope he will fine sooner. And the ff you recommended kuch to tha... Is awesome. I don't want to talk more about it as the new readers will loose the interest, but I cried with every single update of hers... Thank you to both of you. And coming back to the story, I felt happy to read aakash and Khushis relation. In this world own brothers won't help their sisters ,where as Akash believes and treats her as sister and I was so proud seeing their relation. Same goes with Payal and Arnav's.

Thank you! Yeah, Arnav has truly repented what he has done and he has balanced the scale as much as possible in terms of redemption. Now both of them just need to free themselves from the clutches of the past and embrace the future...hahaha..I'm feeling poetic with my comments...😛 and oh my God! I agree! I normally don't cry when I read stories or watch movies but I cried like a baby near the end of the story!! I appreciate her for ending it the way she did! Akash and Khushi were close and Akash's support for Khushi also stems from his guilt...he feels guilty for convincing her to marry Arnav...he feels that if he hadn't gotten them married, this would have never happened...