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Posted: 12 years ago
i like your part 17 and 18
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like your part 19 as well
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AWWW YAYY I'M FINALLY OPN CHAPTER 18, WOOHOO!! EXCITED TO READ THIS CHAPTER AND ALL THE CHAPTERS ON WARDS! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!😃😃😃😃 AWWW I READ YOUR NOTE, I'M GLAD YOU ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO MY FEEDBACK, BECAUSE I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO WRITING COMMENTS FOR YOU!!! 😃😃😃😃😊😊 After reading the entire update, I feel that the petty arguments and fights Arnav and Khushi are having will just bring them closer and will help them develop a strong understanding. This particular update reminded me of the actual show and I feel that unknowingly and obliviously Arnav is starting to make a place in Khushi's heart.😊😳 The actual revelation and turning point was when Arnav rescued Khushi and when Khushi left NK, because something told her that she only belongs to Arnav. Although they argue and fight, they both care about each other just as much.😊😊😊 I really love the small things they both do for each other. I love how Arnav cleans up Khuhsi's cabin and work area for her. And I love that Khushi chose to help and support Arnav. The fact that Khushi chose to starve, because Arnav didn't eat anything and she wanted to have lunch with him, showed her care and that care will soon turn into love. When Khushi occasionally blushes and just secretly looks at Arnav, that shows she loves him. This update reminded me of a quote that states "the heart has reasons that the mind can never understand." 😳❤️❤️❤️ Even though Khushi has not realized that she is in love with Arnav, she should at least try being friends with him in the meantime, because friendship is the first stage of love! 😉😉😉 Arnav needs to reallize that his health is more important than money and the deals he's making, and he should have shown up to lunch, Khushi had every right to be angry. But one day when Khushi realizes that she loves Arnav wholeheartedly and confesses all her feelings to him, he will change for the better. And i loved how Arnav sent a text to Khushi saying "SORRY" in big letters and I loved it even more when she texted him back saying "IDIOT", because he is an IDIOT for not showing up to lunch. 😛😛😛😛 Arnav, you better show up to lunch next time, or better yet , take Khushi out to lunch or on a date, so that she can fall head over heels for you soon lol!😉😳😆😊 Awww I just loved their texts and small conversations and I'm sure one day they will get close! Loved how they both had dinner together and I loved it even more when Khushi invited Kaka to join them for dinner, that was so sweet of her! Lol Arnav, stop acting like you don't anything, you're the only military man Khushi knows hahaha!😆😆😆 And loved it so much when Arnav appreciated Khushi's kind gesture and also invited Kaka to eat dinner with them! 😊😊 Kaka, along with Khushi's parents and Payal and Akash, you should also play cupid to bring the love birds closer, I know you will do an amazing job!!😃😃😃😃😃 AWESOME UPDATE, LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ ALL OF THE OTHER CHAPTERS AND MORE, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I can feel arnav's pain!!.
he has gone through do much and this sudden revelation about NK shook his life..
he was dreaming a happy life with her!
but all this ended just in a nano second!!
on the other hand khushi was all chirpy n bubbly !!
I loved her nature !! she is trying to handle this military man!!
its not easy for her at all to tolerate his rude behavior!!
she is in pain too !!
I hope things will get better between them
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!! 😃 So I read all 10 chapters, starting from chapter 19 to chapter 29 all in one go, because I just loved it so so so so so so so so much much much much much!!! 😃 😃 😃 Im going to summarize all those chapters in my comment and leave you with one really looong comment, cuz I know you enjoy reading my comments lol. To be honest I don't even know where to begin, your work and writing left me speechless!! 😃 😃 😃 I just love the way the story progressed and I loved how Arnav's and Khushi's relationship got stronger every time!! Starting with chapter 19, I loved how Khushi apologized to Arnav about their fight, because their fights always bring them much more closer than before. 😃 😃 When Arnav heard the false information about NK from Aman, it was just awful that he believed everything so quickly. He should learn to follow his heart, not his mind. Arnav has become so heartless and bitter towards life that he just can't see the truth. The way he hurt Khushi was so not right, he should've just confronted her. However, it was also Khushi's mistake of not clearing up the misunderstands the day she came into Arnav's life as his wife. Khushi, should've told him everything from the beginning, if she had done so, they would've fallen in love a long time back. I'm glad that Khushi decided to go to her parents, I'm sure they would give her the best advice and help her win Arnav, after all they are playing Cupid lol! I don't think that Arnav doesn't trust Khushi, it's just that, he doesn't know how to deal with the situation at hand. Nonetheless, Arnav should never react or take any decision when he's angry, because it just makes any normal situation worse than it needs to be. If Arnav felt that Khushi is low and that she was being unfaithful to him, he should've just confronted her instead of hurting like that. But I know soon all will be fine!! Moving on to chapter 20!! OMG OMG OMG, I BELIEVE THE MAHA UPDATE WAS THE BEST 3 PARTS AND MY FAVORITE CHAPTER!! IT WAS JUST SUPER AWESOME BECAUSE IT WAS THE STARTING OF A NEW BEGINNING!! 😃 😃 😃 Awww so Khushi has the best parents ever!! I knew she would feel good after she would talk to her parents about Arnav! Both of her parents have her the best advice and support!! 😊 😊 😊 And Khushi, your mom is right, you have to believe in yourself and never quit and always stay courageous and be honest and you'll always win, no matter what!! I loved how Shashi Uncle could sense Khushi's inner turmoil and her agitation and I loved how he made his best effort to help lighten up her mood and make her feel at home, he's the best dad ever!! Khushi is truly lucky to have such wonderful loved ones in her life and they are all luckier to have her!! 😊 😊 😊 Oh it really made me upset when Arnav ignored Khushi's call, but it doesn't matter, she's going to get back at him sooner or later lol! Omg, when she returned to the Raizada Mansion, and when she received the call for Arnav's accident, that scared me to death more than anything!! 😲 😲 😲Anyways, enough about me lol, but the way Khushi reacted, her panic and her worry showed how deeply she cares for Arnav. Without even giving much thought, the way she rushed to the hospital showed that she can't live without Arnav and that she will do anything and everything to save him!! And when Arnav found out the truth and rushed to the hospital to get Khushi, that showed he cares and loves her equally and he always will no matter what!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ The way they sensed each other at the hospital, showed their true love...rabba ve!! Awww I just loved Khushi's hug in the hospital, and Arnav you should've hugged her back too, but I know you will soon enough! ❤️ ❤️ Awww I also loved their ride back home and jaanam samjha karo was the perfect song for their ride, it really brought about good old memories!! 😉 😳 Im so glad they reached home safely and loved it when they all ate dinner together!! Awww just love how Kaka is playing Cupid and telling Arnav very thing about Khushi's behavior, super cute, love him!! 😃 😃 Awww loved their cute encounter in the pool area, I guess that's a luck area for a romantic couple like Arnav and Khushi!! Loved how Arnav asked Khushi to dip her feet and loved how she obeyed!! I'm so happy that Khushi told Arnav that she broke up with NK and cleared up all the misunderstandings left between them, now it's the start of a fresh and new relationship!! Awww loved Arnav's apology!! Super cute ending to a WONDERFUL MAHA UPDATE!!! 😃 😃 So in chapter 21, I just loved how Khushi woke up early in the morning and asked her mom about how Arnav's morning used to be like, that's so sweet of her!! Wow in the morning she did and sang the arti just for Arnav!! Omg, Arnav's dream symbolized that his future and his his life and his happiness is only with Khushi!! :) But Arnav shouldn't fought with her like that, that was not right! I think he was just feeling overwhelmed and confused and didn't how to deal with the situation so he let his anger get the better of him! Hahahaaha loved how Arnav and Khushi teased each other when they work at work and loved how Arnav made Khushi complete all of her work and submit it to him in 2 hours just evaluate she called him an idiot lol, love them!! Hahaha and look what happened, your so called plan backfired on you, cuz Khushi not only finished all her work prior to deadline but she left for home without you hahaha! 😛 😛 Hahaha so when Arnav finally reached home Khushi is being stubborn, because he didnt sorry! Wow Khushi made so much prashad and lol Arnav asked her to bring it upstairs, thank god Khushi's heart won against her stubbornness!! :) Awww loved the prashad that Khushi made that he ate the whole bowl and Awww he loved it sooo much that he wanted to eat her bowl too, how cute!! :) Awww Khusho wants the old Arnav back, it's ok Khushi, if you stay in his life, then he will change for the better!! Awww loved their hug at the end, soo cute, loved it sooo much!! Ok now for chapter 22, awww Im glad Khushi has gotten into her normal morning routine just for Arnav and his well being, but Arnav should t left for a jog like that. I believe he's still overwhelmed by the changes taking place in the Raizada Mansion. Lol Arnav, you don't need to get annoyed or upset, Khushi is making fresh and hot pooris for you! Uff ho Arnav, stop scolding Kaka and stop being a spoiled sport, eating pooris once in a while wont make you fat! Awww I loved the prank Khushi played on Arnav with the bread! Hahahaha, and I loved when Khushi said "aur khush hota mera dil" hahahaha, Arnav you deserved for not eating the pooris! Awww I love how they were both playful with each other and awww loved the cute moment they shared, it was as if nothing besides them existed! Hahaha, I loved Arnav's punishment, thank god he didn't ask her to do all that for a month, he's evil lol! Hahaha Arnav, don't forget your wife is no less than you are, because after all she is your wife, so whatever you can do, she can do better hahaha! So you better do as she says and taker to office and bring her home with you, I hope we are clear loll! Awww their car ride to work was cute, especially when Khushi told Arnav "apna khayal rakhna." Someone is falling love, rabba veee!! Woohoo!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Awww I loved their conversations about the summer collection designs and Im glad Arnav decided to converse with Khushi on her amazing designs and decided to try them out too, he's awesome!! Awww loved their conversation and Arnav, admit you do check out, all day every day hahaha!! Awww loved how Arnav remembered everything and awww loved how Khushi got emotional cute!! Of course he remembers everything Khushi, he loves you!! :) Awww another beautiful ending to another beautiful update!! Time for chapter 23, woohoo!! :) Awww it's wonderful that Khushi is feeling so happy and ecstatic, because Arnav accepted her proposal and Im glad she shared the news with Kaka, he's happy too now, yayy! :D Awww Khushi wanted to test Arnav and Kaka, that's so sweet of her! Meanwhile Arnac, get rid of those naughty thoughts from your head, Khushi is innocent and she doesn't know too much about sexual things haha, but I have a feeling pretty soon you'll teach her everything!! Awww she mad mango shake for everyone, mango shake is really good, I love it too! :) Hahahahaha, Khushi is finally falling in love how cute, she can't stop staring at Arnav's and the way he licks his lips and sways his to tongue back and forth, awww cute!! :) Lol Arnav, nothing is wrong, it's just that your wife is checking you out lol!! 😳 😉 Been waiting for this moment for so long and now that's finally, I'm sooo happy!! :) Oh Khushi, relax, stop running, you're just falling in love nothing else and haha good excuse! Oh lol Khushi, but Arnie is a dream hero, he's your hero always and forever!! :) Hahahaaha, I love how Khushi wasn't understanding Arnav when he tried to her that it's not right for them to call Akash and Payal at night, awww Khushi is so naive!! Hahahahahahahaha their prank was sooo funny and loved how Akash was so annoyed lol! It's ok Akash you can get back at Arnav and Khushi anyday and at anytime!! Did I mentions I hate phones, they always ring at the wrong moment! Aman, just go away!! They were about to have their first kiss, but it's ok, I'm sure when they have their first kiss, that moment will be perfect!! :) Another wonderful ending to another wonderful chapter!! :) Woohoo, I'm on chapter 24 now!! :) Oh poor Khushi, she really wants Arnav to react to their almost kiss, but Khushi Arnav can only do that if he knew what you feel for him and it's best if you tell him about ll of your feelings soon enough! The sooner the better!! :) They shouldn't have fought like that, now neither of them are going to get any sleep, which is bad! Oh gosh, how long will their fight last and Arnav, stop letting your anger take over and be sensible!! Don't take your anger out on food and just tell Khushi, that you love her already!! I'm glad Khushi asked Aman about Arnav's schedule and it was good that she postponed the meeting, Arnav seriously needs to eat!Yes Arnav, Khushi postponed the meeting, she has every right too, she's your wife after all!! :) Awww just loved Arnav's concern for Khushi, he's so bipolar, what's wrong with him, but I like it, especially when his caring and loving side takes place! Awww so Khushi is fasting and awww Arnav ordered fruits for her, how cute, that's true love!! :) Hahaha oh Arnav, Khushi won't leve you until you apologize! Awww their conversation on the phone was so romantic and I loved when Khushi said to Arnav, "jaldi aana, mein tumhara intezaar karoungi." Awww loved it even more when Arnav invited Khushi into his cabin and loved it the most when she actually said it in person, how super cute, lce them sooo much!! :) Awww loved how Khushi blush and the cute romantic moment they shared, rabba veee!! Hahaha so finally Mr. Raizada you understand that your wife is in love with your lips and I think she wants to kiss them so eagerly!! :) Awww lovely ending!! :)Yay I'm on chapter 25, another maha update woot!! :) So it seems like everything is set and ready for the pooja! Awww loved the conversation between Kaka and Khushi, and don't worry Kaka, Khushi's efforts will never go to waste, everything will be great and absolutely perfect! Yayyy for Payal, she's a wonderful person and a great friend! Unknowingly she helped clear a misunderstanding between the two love birds. I'm so glad that Khushi now knows that Arnav came to see her when she was at the hospital! So Khushi is following tradition and is making moti choor ladoo, yummy! This is going to be great!! :) Arnav is finally home and aww loved how she addressed Arnav as "Aap", how cute!! Awww love their sweet moment, now Arnav won't leave a chance to tease Khushi and make her go red, how romantic!! :) Hahaha Khushi, how else will Arnav drink his tea?! Besides it's not just you whose hypnotized by Arnav's delicious, I and several other girls feel the same way!! :) Hahaha awww poor Khushi, she's so distracted and flustered and on top if it all, Arnav is making the situation worse for her by his non-stop teasing! 😛 Awww yayy Arnav finally laughed and for worry Khushi, as long as you stay in Arnav's life forever, he will smile and laugh everyday!! :) Haha Arnav's stomach growls at the most strangest times lol! Aww loved how Khushi is making sure that it's Arnav's stomach that's growling and Awww Arnav fasted for Khushi, their home, and family, how sweet! They are the perfect couple!! :) Awww loved how Arnav asked Khushi to sit with him and loved their cute conversation soo much! Lol Khushi is so much scared of Arnav that she is searching for diapers online hahaha that was hilarious! Awww Khushi is I'm love with Arnav's signature and she can almost sign it the same as he does, that's awesome! Loved how Arnav held her hand and made her signature perfect!! :) Awww Arnav looked at Khushi's henna and he loved it a lot, I'm glad!! So now it's pooja time and Khushi is looking gorgeous, but Arnav hasn't given her a compliment yet, don't worry Khushi, he will soon! Arnav decided not come to the pooja, but I'm glad Khushi's love and chants made him come to her and I'm glad they both completed all the rituals!! :) Awww I just love Kaka, it's just so cute how he's playing Cupid! Awww poor Khushi, she must be maroon after hearing the ladoo story and now Arnav won't leave any chance to tease her! Haha I knew it, uff ho Khushi don't be angry, your husband is just teasing you! Awww loved how Arnav creates a romantic mood and turned off all the lights, how cute! And I guess the tradition still remains, kisses for ladoos, super romantic! Loved the two kisses that Arnav have Khushi and once again a beautiful ending to a beautiful chapter, loved it soo much!! :) Woohoo, now I'm on chapter 26, yayy!! :) Awww, before going to sleep, Arnav looked at the photo of Khushi's feet that are covered with henna, how cute!! :) So Khushi is washing dishes and awww I just love Kaka sooo soo sooo much, I can't believe he left them to give them some privacy, this is going to be great!! Awww poor Khushi, she's nervous to be all alone with Arnav, it's ok Khushi, it's time for rabba veee!! Awww Arnav wants to eat a ladoo again and awww I love how he's following traditions and have Khushi two kisses once again, so cute!! :) Oh Arnav's leaving and Khushi is scared to be alone, don't worry Khushi Arnav will be back soon! :) I guess Khushi was so distracted that she put so salt into the Poha, but I loved how Arnav didn't throw it away and ate all of it, because he didn't want her efforts to go to waste. Awww even though they fought I stil loved their conversation on the phone and aww Arnav was waiting for Khushi's call, how cute!! :) Finally, Arnav is home and Khushi looks stunning and I know it's going to be a romantic night out! Oh you're evil, it's a cliff hanger, but it's fine with me, I can still read chapter 27! So I'm on chapter 27, yippee! :) Awww I just loved this chapter soo much, it was super cute and romantic!! Aww loved the sweet moment they shared and how Khushi removed the lint from Arnav's skin and just loved how she caressed it! Awww love how Arnav is teasing his innocent wife, so cute! So Khushi is feeling restless and disturbed, oh Khushi you're just falling in love with your sexy husband!! :) Awww I just loved the car scene when Arnav removes Khushi's hair and keeps glancing at her back and awww love how Khushi shies away, how cute!! :) Omg so Khushi asked him "who he loves" and Arnav didn't tell her directly, that's not good now she's jealous and possessive, because she has no idea that girl is her and only her! :) Wow the party seems to be in full swing and yayy they met Payal and Akash, that's cool!! :) Oh no they're fighting again, and yes what Arnav did was wrong, he should've let go of his ego and should've invited his father in law. Oh no Khushi she is crying this is just not good! :( And Khushi finally saw the photo of her feet covered in henna on Arnav's phone, Khushi, take a hint!! Awww I just loved Arnav's speech, it made me a little emotional too, he truly had such great things to say about everyone he loves! Awww Khushi's speech was so amazing and humorous too, I loved it a lot!! :) Awww I just love their romantic dance and awww just loved the song Arnav chose for Khushi, it's one of my favorites as well!! :) Yes Khushi, Arnav is trying to tell you that he loves you and only you!! :) Aww yayy, Khushi finally realized her feelings for Arnav, but she's sad because she thinks he loves someone else! Oh Khushi that someone else is you and only you!! :) Awesome ending!! :) Yayy, I'm on chapter 28! :) Oh no Khushi ran off to the bathroom and Arnav is worried! Thank god he asked Payal to go after her and I'm glad he asked her to give her, her cell phone. Oh noo Khushi is sobbing like crazy, this is not good! Thank god Payal found her and awww Khushi, Arnav will never leave you! Arnav, be patient, your punishment is that you wait, cuz you caused a stupid misunderstanding for no apparent reason. Yayy, I love you Payal, thank you for explaining everything to Khushi and I'm glad that Khushi now Knows that Arnav has always loved her! :) I'm so glad that the truth is finally out and loved how Khushi felt empathetic and supportive for Arnav because of all the hardships he went through. Awww loved the concern in Arnav's voice and his eagerness to see her because she was crying. Yayy, Khushi came out and ran to him and gave him a right hug, loved it!! Oh Khushi didn't tell him, she's just waiting for the perfect time and moment and it will come soon! Awww loved their car ride home and how Khushi is making Arnav flustered and leaving him surprised for a change, how cute! Loved how she told him to not let go of her wrist and aww her kiss on he cheek was so cute! I just love the way she's expressing her love and I can't wait till she openly tells him!! Wonderful ending to a wonderful chapter!! :) Finally on chapter 29, yayyy!! :) Awww so it's raining how romantic, I love the rain! It's the perfect weather for the perfect couple! Uff ho Arnav, for a second forget about your past and move on and enjoy the rain with Khushi, make this moment last! Just loved how Arnav was staring at Khushi in awe and couldn't look away, such a sweet romantic moment! Awww and loved how he picked her in his arms and loved it more when she wrapped her arms around his neck!! :) Haha in the time Khushi was trying to find her keys, Arnav took off his shirt. Lol Arnav is so naughty and such a tease, now it's his turn to get Khushi back! Awww loved the way he pulled Khushi closer and loved how he tightened his hold on her, so romantic! So it's back to Arnav teasing Khushi! Oh lol when Arnav said "if you step backward beyond this point, I won't be able to open it", that was classic and loved how Khushi fell for it! I just love the naughty thoughts they both are having these days, so cute!! :) Oh gosh Arnav, by the time this night ends, Khushi will be left breathless! Haha Arnav, stop making fun of Khushi, I wouldn't blame her for her flustered state, the same thing happens to me when I look at you! ;) Haha Arnav, you are besharam and my heart also goes "uff" when I see you!! :) And yes Arnav, Khushi loves you, and I hope you realize that soon!! :) Oh no Akash and Payal think Khushi has confessed her feelings, but that hasn't happened yet. I hope it happens soon!! :) So Akash and Payal are having dinner with the love birds, sounds fun! Oh no Akash is asking Arnav about marriage life and the gift he have Khushi on their wedding night, this is going all wrong. I hope they find out soon that Khushi hasn't confessed her feeling yet!! Oh no Arnav scolded Khushi for cooking non-veg in "his" house. He seriously shouldn't have said "my house", he's letting his anger take control. But I loved how Khushi told him off and made it clear that everything in this house, including Arnav is hers. Awww loved how they made up and loved Khushi's kisses and Arnav's eagerness to hug her ever so tightly. :) Awww love how Khushi could read Arnav, and that's cuz she loves you sooo much!! :) Awww I just loved the conversation they shared at the dinner table. The pain and misery he and Akash and Payal suffered from was so tragic! That was awful and I could relate to it somewhat, but I'm glad things changed for the better! :) Awww loved their hug and of course Khushi used to send food for Arnav, so in a way she was there too! In fact she was always there for him, he just never knew! :) Anyways, it sounds like they're about to play a question answer game, I hope it spurs romance among all the couples especially Arnav and Khushi!! :) Super ending to an amazing chapter!! :) SUPER AWESOME UPDATES! I SAW THAT YOU UPDATE CHAPTER 30 AND CHAPTER 31!! SUPER EXCITED TO READ CHAPTER 30 AND CHAPTER 31 AND SO ON, I LOVE YOUR FF SOOO MUCH!! :) Just wanted to surprise with this long comment because I was so busy and I'm still pretty busy but I'll make time for you and all the wonderful writers who enjoy reading my comments so THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing maha chapter👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
This NK I am telling you he is planning something am I correct arggg 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just finished reading all the chapters in Thread 3.
NK is up to something for sure... hmm
Kaka is really a sweet man, staying with Arnav for all these years.
Love how Arnav and Khushi made him eat with them.
He is an important person in Arnav's life.
Arnav is really struggling with his feelings and what Aman told Arnav about NK doesnt make anything easier.
Poor Khushi, she's trying yet Arnav can't nor won't let her in.
See you on the next thread.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi hid her break up from Arnav as she was tense abt his reaction.But bcz of that Arnav is misunderstanding K.Aman's 2nd hand information is so wrong
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"It is supposed to be their first night. And it indeed is for their hearts.

They dwelled into each other thoughts forgetting the rest of the world just like the way newly married couple would do on their first night.

They touched each other with the belief in purity of their body, mind and soul when he called her name and when she heard him call her.

They stayed up all night understanding what they mean to each other not wanting the night to end anytime soon just the like any other newly wedded couple would do on their first night.

In all pure ways, they celebrated their first night and made love without letting the other know and without physically touching the other."


I liked this part very much deepthi! what a thought that really u have put into this part..really this is the first night that they stayed under same roof...and they spent the whole night thinking abt each other only...

Since i missed commenting i m rereading the parts which i like most...be patient becaz i will be commenting on the past parts...but i want to let u know what parts i liked...n why..becaz u asked the readers abt their comments at evry part and blakmailed them also abt not getting the next update...😃

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