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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Mee



Diii i love you damnit

i mean wat a surprise you gave us ahhhi really didnt expected dis on sachi

Bt as they say we always get we dont expect soo i took it happily

back to updatewa

😳😳

Lolwwaa khushi seriously thought her own cabin is arna cabin bcz it was neat and clean according to wat she left was dirty and messy 😆😆

Btw dii i loved it wen finally she realized that its her husband who did d cleanng work for her just by the smell she found of her husband perfume hayee dis is so cute in reading😳😳

Uff the line was enought to take mee to arnav world wen she sad kitna khadoos hai he does everythng but act as he s not aware of it


Hmmm khushi checking her out and arnav notied it and the phn call was so funny hahaha i was laughing badly dat tym u knw dii

Mannn khadoos boss 😲😲 just for two hrs he deduted 2 days salary wht the😲😲 and soonm realisation hit arnav by khushi line was so perfect wen she said she didnt take money for the last 8 yrs for working for him 😳😳 dis was my rabbe ve moment

Ohhh how badly i was enjoying there nok-jhok😳😳 it reminded me off ipkknd😳😳

What the hell meting nooo😡😡

Khushi left office in a angry mood loll asr wife hai asar toh padea hee😆😆

So arnav back to his permanent job thinking khushi chalo dis tym he actually bothered to care bcz he was wrng nt intentionally nut unintentionally he did a mistake😡

U r becoming bad dii 😡😡 u r trying to divert our attention aisa mat kiya karo dii u knw the line wich you he lokks sexy wile removing his tie ufff was sounding so awesum

Gosh she was throwing things at him typical lover o dat u knw dii😆😆😆 and to top of dt asr wasnt shouting at her moreover he was calmly telling her to stop😲😲

Hayyeee she cares for him too but its just diff way of showing to him an wat the tea scene ufff u knw dii wenever i watch the scene i feel lyk crying 😭😭

Arnav pov for his company was ryt but khushi wasnt \wrng too why dont he understand dat how could he so careless towards his health😡😡


she said sorry lalalalalalal

the last part was wow dii i mean aisa kavi show mein v nai hua tha soo wat to say more about

Arshi rain scene for you dii





Love u dii


I really Khushi in my FF. I want her to be the mirror image of ASR but little more calm and patience, who doesnt jump to conclusions and who believes what she sees is always not truth.

I am so glad you like this chappter. Sorry for the delayed response.

Chaise is the blue/grey couch or sofa that we have seen in Arnav's room in the soap. You remember?

And I love the rain sequence..awesome super. I love the way he just lifts her off the ground and saves her..So magical..I miss them




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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update!! Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Khushi waking up & the sight of her husband making her to admire his every small move; suddenly she remembering his hurt words, making her compare the sweet & ever cheerful college friend to the present stone cold, anger filled & emotionless Arnav, she thinking how clueless she was regarding the real him at the present & she shuddering at the thought of stepping into his shoes of living a forlorn life & the pain of leading a life devoid of parents surging unknown fear & insecurity into her threw light on the fear Khushi had at the mere thought of leading his life

She hurriedly rushing to speak to Arnav & to seek his apology, he confused at her sudden need to speak to him & then her tears causing him to panic & worry to see her gloomy & upset & surprised by her apology was lovely …………. loved the manner in which he adjusted her hair carefully 😃

He inquisitive to know how she found out about him skipping his meal, he intently listening to her & his heart jumping in joy on looking at her concern & at the same time vowing to never let her go brought out how his lonely heart started depending on her & couldn't even imagine the thought of letting her go

Khushi silently understanding Arnav & not pressing too much into the matter of making him openly accept & wanting to take things slowing was a smart move 👍🏼

I wonder why NK is still on leave ……………… must be he's upset after the break up. But in all this I can't understand why he still didn't cancel the hotel reservation ………….. has he forgotten it or is this his new plan to cause trouble into Khushi's life 😲

Arnav's anger bubbling within him on thinking that Khushi was merely using him & tricking him just for shelter; & he breaking down all the more on knowing that his plans of making his live contented with her coming back all gone to the drain & disgusted for being blind to her doings was well framed 👏

Arnav's rage erupting uncontrollably at the sight of Khushi & making him vent out his bubbled up anger causing him to roughly handle her, she puzzled at his sudden rage not knowing why he's all of a sudden so wild on her & pleading him to let go of her, Arnav's rage vanishing the instant he saw her hurt excellently narrated how Arnav, the ruthless man whom people claimed to have no heart proved he did have one for his Khushi ………….. though he was dead angry at her but her hurt pulling out the tender concern that's hidden deep inside his angry mask showed that even though he wanted to hurt her for her deceit but in real he couldn't withstand even an iota of her pain

Khushi crying on losing hopes of changing Arnav & decipher the real him was so emotional. Felt sorry for her when she sobbed unable to even further talk to her dad 😭 😭 😭

His mind & heart battling within, he tearing up unable to bear that his lady love cheated him & all his hopes of sharing his life with her crushed & his loneliness all the more squeezing his heart fabulously portrayed the immeasurable pain he was undergoing 😭 😭 😭

Khushi formal behavior pissing him, making him doubt if it's her new plan, she adamant to not reveal the reason of her leaving the office early & not willing to budge until he accepts her as his wife, she in the end asking him if he ever trusted her causing Arnav to battle within himself & the statement clenching his heart & she revealing that she was actually going to pay a visit to her parents ………………… amazing scene ………………. even though Khushi was hurt she still being strong & voicing out the doubt that was running in her mind created a hope in my mind as a reader that when she knows the real reason she would bravely stand up for herself unlike some woman who'll completely break down & call off the marriage or continue bearing their husband's harshness

Wow!!! Deeps the precap is lovely 😃 creating a lot of expectations & excitement. I don't mind their start being either love or friendship, since the first step of love is friendship 😉 OMG!!! First hug ………….lovely 😃………… Hmmm …………… I think I'll be literally jumping in joy while reading about their first kiss ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ (But for the kiss to happen I think there is a long way to go). Thanks for the PM buddy

Awesome precap, next chappie maha update with VM & not to forget Arshi's first hug …………… eagerly waiting for the next chappie

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
man this is the best ff i have ever read loving it just to good yaar thanks so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW THANK YOU DEEPTHIYA, EID MUBARAK TO YOU TOO! 😃 😃 😃 AWWW YAYY IM FINALLY ON CHAPTER 17, EXCITED TO READ ALL OF IT!! 😛 😊 Lol Arnav's sleepless and restless night reminded me of a Bollywood song, mujhe neend nah aye, mujhe chain na aye, koi jaye zara dhoond ke laye, na jaane ka dil ko gaya na jaane ka dil ko gaya hehe! 😆 Awww Arnav just can't take his eyes off of the room Khushi is staying in, yes someone said it right, love can make anyone go crazy, even ASR LOL! 😉 Awww I loved how Arnav is so concerned for Khushi, and Arnav why would Khushi leave, she's here to stay with you forever!! 😃 😊 😳 Awww yayy, Arnav is already changing for the better because of Khushi! Awww loved the sweet and romantic moment between Arnav and Khushi, loved how she held his hand in his sleep and how he just admired her beauty and awww Arnav's thoughts just make me blush! 😳 😳 Awww I loved how Arnav is so concerned about Khushi not getting disturbed and getting the right amount of sleep! 😊 Awww Arnav got a chocolate for Khushi from the vending machine, how cute! Hahaha Khushi's cabin is already a mess, but thankfully Arnav cleaned everything up. Oh no Arnav, Khushi is yours and only yours, I wish she told you that so that you can stop hating her! 😭 Hahaha Khushi, relax, if only you knew that Arnav didnt want to wake you up from your beauty sleep! 😊 Lol poor Garima Aunty, she was making pooris, and Khushi, chill, don't get scared of Arnav, he loves you! ❤️ Awww Shashi Uncle really knows how to bring these two closer and oh Garima Aunty don't worry, Khushi won't stay mad at you for such a small thing forever hehe! 😉 Awww so Khushi finally found out that it was Arnac who came into her room drew up the blinds and wrapped her into a blanket! 😉 Aww love how Khushi is so concerned for Arnav's health and Im glad she asked Kaka to pack food for them! Arnav seriously needs to take care of his health! 😛 Hahahahaha Khushi, you don't belong in a mental asylum, you belong with Arnav!! :) Awww so Arnac trusts Khushi because he can axles the deal with Mr. Mittal! Ooh I love how Khushi surprised Arnav! Haha seriously Arnav, why did you make Khushi do all that work, if you were going to cancel the meeting with him in the first place?! Poor Khushi, both of her eyes are red! Is there a time when these two can't fight, when will they learn to get along?! Awww I loved how Khushi touched Arnav's cheeks, that was so cute and romantic! Arnav, stop tuning the moment! So Khushi realized that it was Arnav who brought her the chocolate bar and I loved the way she confirmed, GO KHUSHI!! 😃 Arnav stop ruining the moment again and again, Khushi brought food for you and herself, and so you both are having lunch together, end of discussion! LOVELY UPDATE! I LOVE HOW THEY'RE FINALLY GETTING CLOSER AND CLOSER EACH TIME!!! 😃 EXCITED, DESPERATE, AND EAGER TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER, THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...superb...
superb...yaar...
lovely update...
cant tell u yaar...
hoe deeply falling in love with
this story day by day...
cant wait for next update...
thanks a lot for the pm yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsom update...
Can't wait for next chap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Deep u r very deep and deep in writing such wonderful updates,honestly...:)
after long i feel like crying today...ur update has left me so emotional,i really wanted to cry ...loved the way u have written khushi's character...she is a gem of a person...so strong,sensible ,fun,so understanding and at the same time immense intensity of feelings within her....its true a writer give life to each character and u r doing it :)

the way khushi felt arnav's inner turmoil...putting her feet in his shoes,wow,hats off...the way she goes to him and said baat kerni thi tumse,uff beautiful mixture of feelings and emotions

can romance be any more better then the way u showed ,just awesome .. the way both hold hand and he correcting her hair...loved it

its first time i am not liking aman at all,:(...hell yar...so u have the ability to make some one love at one time and then in just one ph call that love can change in hate for that person:)...i know its his job...but u have done ur job here great :)

although arnav is in trauma of trust or not to trust,listen to brain or to heart...but his every aggression is totally justifying...keeping oneself in his shoes,as u mentioned...his anger,his ability to love with the same intensity the way to hate ...loved it

last office scene,where khushi broke down...uff and wow

breath taking sentence u have written is "u dont trust me ,do u"


...

🤗 loads and loads of love,for making us sometimes smile,laugh ,then hyee only by making him lose his tie,crazy i know😳...and today totally like feel like crying ...

yeeeh so maha update precap is looking awesome...first hug,vm...wow ❤️
.ok time to zip up my mouth :)


Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

😆


U knw dii im writing it the secod tym first tym wrote it and it gt dltd

Di dis update was awesum but not wat i expected

Hayee she opened her eyes and found her husband busy wid files 😆😆 mann she adjusted her pillow to get a better view of him😆😆

U knw dii i feel lyk arnav is wrng smwere bcz he was a guy who doesnt belived in brand bfr but now money and expensve thiings matter him the most i knw wat happened wid him in the past was wrng but why the hell is he letting the past overome his future and present 😲😲

Khushi one tear melted him and he strted saying sorry hayee how sweet of him ❤️

Khushi remember everythng of dere past and dat teez part u didnt showed us bfr dii but still i m happy he kept fast for her to boost her and the most awesome parah was dat wen he said ki himself doesnt undrstnd himself to the extent khushi undrstnd him 👍🏼❤️

Urghhh wrng tyming aman khushi left nk den y d hell she wil go wid him for the honeymoon.. Wats wrng wid u

He hurted her again how badly e behaved wid her . He agin made her cry widout any reason ..


How she broke down in frnt of her parents but i m glad she made herself calm and handled the situation wdout letting the actual reason cmng out

He was crying for her mannn i cnt believ he love her he calm her he wanna trust her but doesnt let it done any of the thing bcz of his blindness
😡😡

Dii u have a made a prms i guess to keep me spellbound in each of ur update in the last part

I mean the way she reacted wid arnav and her replies wich dumbfolded arnav was really smthng i wasnt expecting first she ask him abt the trust and den leaves him wid answering his question y sooo



Ab aagaya mazaa to see you all angry on Arnav...LOL

You know people say CALM BEFORE STORM..but there is more storm to come in next chapter but will end up sweetly...Get ready to drool :)

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