Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 87

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Posted: 11 years ago
super awesome update
Rosy's mind state...well described
the song was awesome and to add up Rosy's performance
and later joined by Arjun was superb
loved it!!
their convo was nice
Arjun's sarcastic replies while her frustration was nice
precap...super,super exciting
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
a lovely song for a lovely couple!!!
awsome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Supdate update
the quote is beautifull..loved it
loved the way you described Rosy's state of mind
Arjun was watching Rosy dancing alone from behind the pillar and then joining her later was awww awesome
the song was lovely
the way Arjun handled her and also didn't do anything to blow up their covers was just amazing
aah so Mario has fallen for Rosy and wishes to tell her
looking forward to the precap
thanks for the pm...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
As usual great update..
Rosy's mind state was well described..
the performance..their convo was nice..
thanks for pm and cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The quote said it all Avantika.It was just perfect⭐️👍🏼
They say,"The greatest love stories are not those in which love is only spoken, but those in which it is acted upon.".The dance on this beautiful song was the best est part of the update.Just like the way this song lyrics touches one's soul,their dance takes one to an altogether dreamy trance.I visualized the whole dance sequence & it was beautiful😃

Finally,the anklets on her foot made him realize "He had missed out on what could have been rightfully his.."
I can say,this is the trigger to the exploration Arjun is nearing to
Le chal wahan jo
Mulq tera hai..
Painful one.Wonder when will he actually take her along with him leaving behind the painful past & the baggage of guilt she is carrying
Their chotu sa clash gave a glimpse of the way the were long back😃😆

"Kaash tumne yeh paanch saal pehle kaha aur kiya hota, Mr. A."
Trust me ,this one line welled up my eyes.😭She said it all in just a single line.The countdown to breach in the mysteries wall build between the two has begun.
Ro as a dancer and him as a photographer.😃Now that is what is called as a 10/10 Arjun Rawte's perfect move.👍🏼😎
Ro's state reminds me of a quote which slates "Love makes you stronger among the people but makes you weak against the one you love"
Her Mr. A who unfortunately for her happens to be ACP Arjun Rawte as well is gonna give her a very tough time controlling her feelings which is impossible to pretend in front of him.But then i must applaud Arjun's self control of keeping in check his anger & dealing with her in his way👏

Mario Pereira: I wonder whats going on in his mind but seriously his intentions are something which is giving me more negative vibes.When are you planning to band bajaoing of his in the hands of our Lady in Red. Arjun se bhi dilwaogi to wo aur bhi best hoga.😆😉

All in all,I super super super loved the update Avantika.🤗The song's presence along with Mr & Miss A's dance was the star of the update⭐️😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Di! Umm.. I'd like to dedicate a song to the journey of our LADY IN RED.

Its a bengali song and I feel that it matches with our "A" couple to an extent.

I dont know if you know Bangla or not...
I'll translate it for u!😃


Song :- Bol Tui Amay - Zooel ft. Kona


Bol tui, amay chere kothay jabi;
Bol tui amay chara kemne robi.
Tor porane amar ei mon bandhiyachi shara jibon, Tore chara bachi na


Say, where will u go leaving me alone...
Say if u'll be able to live without me.
All my life i had wanted, to be with u, to love u.
I wouldn't be able to survive without u.

Ek jibone ektu bhul.. Hotey pare...
Tai bole ki apon manush rakhbi dure!
Jashna re ebhabe chole,
Ami jachchi ei poth bhule, bohu dure keu toh janbe na...


In one lifetime, to err is inevitable.
But should it cost me my dear ones?
Dont leave, dont desert me like that...
I'm forsaking your route forever, heading some place unknown...


Hope U liked it😊
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all, dil se sorry for this late comment of mine!
Busy with school, so wasn't able to catch up on updates!🤢

And sorry again, like button not working!

Ch-31

Quite emotional...silent cries, rage...haye ab mein kya bolun!
The lady whom he had assumed dead few years back, was now standing in front of him, alive!
Hope Sam comforts Aayesha!

Ch-32

Tod-fod karke gussa nikalne ka tareeka acha hai!
Mario saab, truly despo! chi chi chi...😆 Control control!

Rosy transformation from being a vulnerable lady to the one in front of Mario..amazing!

Sameer😳

Ch-33

He was too mad at her to offer her a chance to explain her cruel betrayal.

But he should, give her a chance to explain!

Zyaada hi ni haddi pasli todne ka shaunk Arjun ko! Hunh!

Ro-Aayesha's convo was awesome!

Anyways, Sam-Arohi confrontation! Looks interesting!


Ch-34

Hmm...so Arjun was in full mood to get himself black-blue!

Rosy was so concerned for him, but still he was busy fighting some random gunda! Hadd hai yaar!

Karan helped the doc by paying his daughter's education expanses!👏

Sam wants answers from Ro...oh wait, not only him, but we too want to know every single thing!

Ch-35

Flashback!
Thanku for Karan-Ro convo! 😳

Awesome update as usual!

Ch-36

Sam stayed by Aayesha...😳 A good friend by ur side during tough times, is the best thing ever!

Questioning session tha ya grilling session tha?😛

Anyways, awesome!

Ch-37

Both r stubborn!

Mario saab waapis! Welcome ji welcome! Hai bhagwan...Mario ji, sachi despo hai!

Ch-38

Hmm...bechare bache...aise senty song pe dance kyun karwana? Koi peppy song dal dete!😆

Mario saab...ab aapki kya tareef karun! 🤢

Sorry for blabbering so much! Cont. soon!



Edited by MriduB - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
firstly i am extremely sorry i got so late to comment this time...got busy with somethings...

now coming to the update...as usual brilliant delivery of the emotional turmoils of the characters...

you have already designed them so well now knowing their inner self is making the characters alive...

arjun is gradually suspecting the feelings of rosy,and her mission also,

kash 5 saal pehele pata chal jata..but then itna maza kaha ata??😆😆

mario my sweetheart back in the picture...claiming rosy wont be that easy dear...rubies and diamonds cant buy scarred souls,🤢

really looking forward to the next update...waiting to waitch mario and rosy in action...

once again sorry for late comemnt

thanks for pm..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
AbsolUtely fantastic last two updates im literally speechless yaar!!
The emotions portrayed were spot on couldnt have gone any better
Please do continue xx

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