Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 89

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

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First of all, the quote in the beginning of the update.It was just perfect choice, very well suiting the situation and also justifying Arjun-Rosy's relationship.
The way you described Rosy's beauty and her dance, Arjun watching her silently and then dancing with her, it was so Beautiful.I felt as if I had been watching it all from one corner.It was so beautifully potrayed.

Thanks so much.. 😳 I thought so too.. Loved the quote! 😳

Arjun has been trying hard to control himself and not demand answers from Rosy, I wonder what will happen when he comes to know about Mario's intentions.Mario is gonna have a hard time then..

Oh yesh!

Glad that Arjun has now some idea about her being in undercover mission and is gonna keep a watch on her.He won't give her any way to escape but the mere thought of the situation when all the truth will be out scares me.
Rosy had faced a lot since her childhood and was forced to make such decisions due to the time and situation.I won't say that what she decided was correct but I guess she didn't have any other choice and did what she felt was right.

Exactly.. she's always followed her heart, no matter what!

Looking forward to what's in store for them.
Great update.
Loved every bit of it..
Continue Soon.

Thanks so much.. 😃

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great update..

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: anu91

Well written
superb!!!!!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

No doubt di u r sweet but poison umm ni..
lol..
awesome update...
glad i m d reader...
n joined d forum...
cos i able to read d most powerful characters introduced by u Vidya Di n Shilpa di..
either its Ro.. Reva n Priya..
loved d quotes..
song Speechless ..
mario gya lol ab to intensions not gud na...
well friendship is something na ...
zindagi ke sath bi zindagi ke baad bi..
lol...
very well written di..
hats off..
lovely
waiting for revelations ...
Inteha ho gyi Intezar ki.. ;)

Originally posted by: shreya09

a very nice, cute, romantic & beautiful update

superb writing 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update dear
It was just amazing
Arjun and rosy part was beautifully written
Their emotions were potrayed perfectly
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Originally posted by: kunchu

Startinv from yr reply... Yes Lady IS my most fav ff in the forum
no doubt on that
n I get your worry. I feel it always when someone expects a lot from u
I feel it eberytime someone likes my work
so behna we are in same boat

Aww.. thanks a ton! That really means a lot.. 😳

back to the chapter
do I need to repeat that I loved it
the quote was perfect. I too had read it somewhere in net
you n Farheen puts the apt quote everytime.bravo
the whole scene of her dancing to the tune n that too "ore piya"... Mashallah
kya song selection thi
the moments whn she glided along n him watching behind the pillar was picture perfect
I felt like hugging your... Sorry our Ms.A n tell her all will be fine soon
sachi
but I know better.she wud have kicked me out for my emotional drama

Nah! she wouldn't.. 😆

Mr A... Ah what a way to sooth her.that one hug set a benchmark to say that it need not be overacted with pouncing or making out to show one's care
a mere hug is more than enough at times

Oh yes.. loads of 'em in store.. 😳

Back with Mr n Ms A's verbal fights
but her last line did hurt deep
aah this Mario is such a pain
I wish I cud jave erased from the world
but no he needs to be there to give the ample level of pain
right?

Yeah.. maybe.. he needs to be around to push them both to their extremes and towards each other too.. 😳

Maybe this is the longest review I wrote in Lady
n al blame on you dear
spree baba ki jai!!
Jaldi aao

Lol.. is baar phir se late ho gaya.. Got caught up with a few family visits..

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

A Beautiful update... As usual!😊

So Rosy will now teach dance...
Is this gonna be a way of relieving herself momentarily of stress.. Or something else?

A bit of both.. 😉

I really can imagine Rosy in that dress (blue suits Drashti) 😃 Yes it does.. 😛

Aw the dance sequence is just larger than life...
So much can be emoted through your dance its amazing...

I loved the Moment between Arjun and Arohi...
The A couple!❤️

Aww.. thanks for that..

The ankle scene was well penned down.

he missed out something which could have been rightfully his. -
Haye! This line pricked somewhere deep.

Please relieve them of this pain di! It hurts us too!

I know.. but they need to be pushed to the extreme na, Sumu.. Else there's no way they can be together..

u r true, they are indeed mirror images of eachother.

Their few moments together was a treat to read.

Ooh! Toh Arjun ko ab photography ka shauq charaha hai.
Anything for his miss A ofcors.

"Jo Marzi karlo, Im not going anywhere"

This tym Rosy's Mr. A is here to stay!

kash tumne ye 5 saal pehle kaha aur kiya hota Mr. A

a single lyn expresd so many emotions!!

Thanks! and yeah he's not going anywhere..

P.S apt song quote!!

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Hey Di! Umm.. I'd like to dedicate a song to the journey of our LADY IN RED.

Its a bengali song and I feel that it matches with our "A" couple to an extent.

I dont know if you know Bangla or not...
I'll translate it for u!😃


Song :- Bol Tui Amay - Zooel ft. Kona


Bol tui, amay chere kothay jabi;
Bol tui amay chara kemne robi.
Tor porane amar ei mon bandhiyachi shara jibon, Tore chara bachi na

Say, where will u go leaving me alone...
Say if u'll be able to live without me.
All my life i had wanted, to be with u, to love u.
I wouldn't be able to survive without u.

Ek jibone ektu bhul.. Hotey pare...
Tai bole ki apon manush rakhbi dure!
Jashna re ebhabe chole,
Ami jachchi ei poth bhule, bohu dure keu toh janbe na...

In one lifetime, to err is inevitable.
But should it cost me my dear ones?
Dont leave, dont desert me like that...
I'm forsaking your route forever, heading some place unknown...

Hope U liked it😊

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Beautiful... Amazing... Supperbbb... Mindblowing... Fantastic...
loved their dance...
Beautiful.. song.. lovely...
cont sooon
thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

awesome update dear.

as usual.

continue soon.

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

super awesome update
Rosy's mind state...well described
the song was awesome and to add up Rosy's performance
and later joined by Arjun was superb
loved it!!
their convo was nice
Arjun's sarcastic replies while her frustration was nice
precap...super,super exciting
thanks for pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: alee001

a lovely song for a lovely couple!!!

awsome update

Originally posted by: yas23

Supdate update
the quote is beautifull..loved it
loved the way you described Rosy's state of mind
Arjun was watching Rosy dancing alone from behind the pillar and then joining her later was awww awesome
the song was lovely
the way Arjun handled her and also didn't do anything to blow up their covers was just amazing
aah so Mario has fallen for Rosy and wishes to tell her
looking forward to the precap
thanks for the pm...continue soon

Originally posted by: srividhya68

Great update..

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Swara85

As usual great update..
Rosy's mind state was well described..
the performance..their convo was nice..
thanks for pm and cont soon.

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

The quote said it all Avantika.It was just perfect⭐️👍🏼

They say,"The greatest love stories are not those in which love is only spoken, but those in which it is acted upon.".The dance on this beautiful song was the best est part of the update.Just like the way this song lyrics touches one's soul,their dance takes one to an altogether dreamy trance.I visualized the whole dance sequence & it was beautiful😃

Awwie.. 😳 You knoow what.. You make me fall in love with them, all over again.. That quote is just perfect! 😆😳

Finally,the anklets on her foot made him realize "He had missed out on what could have been rightfully his.."

I can say,this is the trigger to the exploration Arjun is nearing to

Le chal wahan jo

Mulq tera hai..

Painful one.Wonder when will he actually take her along with him leaving behind the painful past & the baggage of guilt she is carrying

Someday soon, dear.. He will! 😳

Their chotu sa clash gave a glimpse of the way the were long back😃😆

"Kaash tumne yeh paanch saal pehle kaha aur kiya hota, Mr. A."

Trust me ,this one line welled up my eyes.😭She said it all in just a single line.The countdown to breach in the mysteries wall build between the two has begun.

Yup! I get what u mean.. and yesh! the countdown begins.. 😛

Ro as a dancer and him as a photographer.😃Now that is what is called as a 10/10 Arjun Rawte's perfect move.👍🏼😎

Ro's state reminds me of a quote which slates "Love makes you stronger among the people but makes you weak against the one you love"

Her Mr. A who unfortunately for her happens to be ACP Arjun Rawte as well is gonna give her a very tough time controlling her feelings which is impossible to pretend in front of him.But then i must applaud Arjun's self control of keeping in check his anger & dealing with her in his way👏

Yup! and a glimpse of it in the next one.. There'll be times when he won't even have to do anything to make her fall right into his arms.. 😎 😉 Uske liye main hoon na.. 😉
Ab Arjun ke bhi patience ki limit hai na.. He'll explode at the right time.. Or maybe at the wrong time too.. Who knows?! 😉

Mario Pereira: I wonder whats going on in his mind but seriously his intentions are something which is giving me more negative vibes.When are you planning to band bajaoing of his in the hands of our Lady in Red. Arjun se bhi dilwaogi to wo aur bhi best hoga.😆😉

Oh.. band bajaofying ko time hai.. but yeah.. she's almost getting there.. 😉

All in all,I super super super loved the update Avantika.🤗The song's presence along with Mr & Miss A's dance was the star of the update⭐️😃

Thanks so much, Farheen.. Really loved reading every bit of it.. 😳

Originally posted by: MriduB

First of all, dil se sorry for this late comment of mine!

Busy with school, so wasn't able to catch up on updates!🤢

And sorry again, like button not working!

Ch-31

Quite emotional...silent cries, rage...haye ab mein kya bolun!

The lady whom he had assumed dead few years back, was now standing in front of him, alive!

Hope Sam comforts Aayesha!

Ch-32

Tod-fod karke gussa nikalne ka tareeka acha hai!

Mario saab, truly despo! chi chi chi...😆 Control control!

Rosy transformation from being a vulnerable lady to the one in front of Mario..amazing!

Sameer😳

Ch-33

He was too mad at her to offer her a chance to explain her cruel betrayal.

But he should, give her a chance to explain!

Zyaada hi ni haddi pasli todne ka shaunk Arjun ko! Hunh!

Ro-Aayesha's convo was awesome!

Anyways, Sam-Arohi confrontation! Looks interesting!

Ch-34

Hmm...so Arjun was in full mood to get himself black-blue!

Rosy was so concerned for him, but still he was busy fighting some random gunda! Hadd hai yaar!

Karan helped the doc by paying his daughter's education expanses!👏

Sam wants answers from Ro...oh wait, not only him, but we too want to know every single thing!

Ch-35

Flashback!

Thanku for Karan-Ro convo! 😳

Awesome update as usual!

Ch-36

Sam stayed by Aayesha...😳 A good friend by ur side during tough times, is the best thing ever!

Questioning session tha ya grilling session tha?😛

Anyways, awesome!

Ch-37

Both r stubborn!

Mario saab waapis! Welcome ji welcome! Hai bhagwan...Mario ji, sachi despo hai!

Ch-38

Hmm...bechare bache...aise senty song pe dance kyun karwana? Koi peppy song dal dete!😆

Mario saab...ab aapki kya tareef karun! 🤢

Sorry for blabbering so much! Cont. soon!

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

firstly i am extremely sorry i got so late to comment this time...got busy with somethings...

No worries.. Glad u got back though.. 😃

now coming to the update...as usual brilliant delivery of the emotional turmoils of the characters...

you have already designed them so well now knowing their inner self is making the characters alive...

Oh thanks.. That has slowed down the pace of the story.. But I had to.. 😃

arjun is gradually suspecting the feelings of rosy,and her mission also,

kash 5 saal pehele pata chal jata..but then itna maza kaha ata??😆😆

Lol.. 😆 Very true.. Mushkil prem kahani kahan se banti phir.. 😆😆

mario my sweetheart back in the picture...claiming rosy wont be that easy dear...rubies and diamonds cant buy scarred souls,🤢

Yeah.. but he being himself, wont stop trying.. 😕

really looking forward to the next update...waiting to waitch mario and rosy in action...

once again sorry for late comemnt

thanks for pm..😊

Thanks so much.. 😳😃 Glad u like it..

Originally posted by: Geeta.R

AbsolUtely fantastic last two updates im literally speechless yaar!!

The emotions portrayed were spot on couldnt have gone any better

Please do continue xx

Originally posted by: 123pritha

THANK U FOR THE AMAZING UPDATES

LOVED IT