Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 86

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First of all, the quote in the beginning of the update.It was just perfect choice, very well suiting the situation and also justifying Arjun-Rosy's relationship.
The way you described Rosy's beauty and her dance, Arjun watching her silently and then dancing with her, it was so Beautiful.I felt as if I had been watching it all from one corner.It was so beautifully potrayed.
Arjun has been trying hard to control himself and not demand answers from Rosy, I wonder what will happen when he comes to know about Mario's intentions.Mario is gonna have a hard time then..
Glad that Arjun has now some idea about her being in undercover mission and is gonna keep a watch on her.He won't give her any way to escape but the mere thought of the situation when all the truth will be out scares me.
Rosy had faced a lot since her childhood and was forced to make such decisions due to the time and situation.I won't say that what she decided was correct but I guess she didn't have any other choice and did what she felt was right.
Looking forward to what's in store for them.
Great update.
Loved every bit of it..
Continue Soon.

Great update..

Startinv from yr reply... Yes Lady IS my most fav ff in the forum
no doubt on that
n I get your worry. I feel it always when someone expects a lot from u
I feel it eberytime someone likes my work
so behna we are in same boat
back to the chapter
do I need to repeat that I loved it
the quote was perfect. I too had read it somewhere in net
you n Farheen puts the apt quote everytime.bravo
the whole scene of her dancing to the tune n that too "ore piya"... Mashallah
kya song selection thi
the moments whn she glided along n him watching behind the pillar was picture perfect
I felt like hugging your... Sorry our Ms.A n tell her all will be fine soon
sachi
but I know better.she wud have kicked me out for my emotional drama
Mr A... Ah what a way to sooth her.that one hug set a benchmark to say that it need not be overacted with pouncing or making out to show one's care
a mere hug is more than enough at times
Back with Mr n Ms A's verbal fights
but her last line did hurt deep
aah this Mario is such a pain
I wish I cud jave erased from the world
but no he needs to be there to give the ample level of pain
right?
Maybe this is the longest review I wrote in Lady
n al blame on you dear
spree baba ki jai!!
Jaldi aao

Superb update Avantika..
This story always confuses me to take side of Mr A or Ms A...
I hope someday I will be able to take side of both..hope they will be together. ..
Ms A is still a mystery for me..
I cannot gauge her next step..
May be I am too simple to judge her...
Ms A had left away her simplicity to become what she is today...
I want her to get a simple life..But I love her determination in her mission..
May be I am in dilemma. .
Kya karen?? I am in love with Arohi thoroughly...
Absolutely liking the way Mr A is handling her...
Their dance was superb...
Their togetherness for short while was blissful. ..
Waiting for next chapter dear..

And thanks for all your good wishes...
Fit n fine..I am back here...

Awesome update dear
It was just amazing
Arjun and rosy part was beautifully written
Their emotions were potrayed perfectly
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

No doubt di u r sweet but poison umm ni..
lol..
awesome update...
glad i m d reader...
n joined d forum...
cos i able to read d most powerful characters introduced by u Vidya Di n Shilpa di..
either its Ro.. Reva n Priya..
loved d quotes..
song Speechless ..
mario gya lol ab to intensions not gud na...
well friendship is something na ...
zindagi ke sath bi zindagi ke baad bi..
lol...
very well written di..
hats off..
lovely
waiting for revelations ...
Inteha ho gyi Intezar ki.. ;)

a very nice, cute, romantic & beautiful update

A Beautiful update... As usual!😊

So Rosy will now teach dance...
Is this gonna be a way of relieving herself momentarily of stress.. Or something else?

I really can imagine Rosy in that dress (blue suits Drashti) 😃

Aw the dance sequence is just larger than life...
So much can be emoted through your dance its amazing...

I loved the Moment between Arjun and Arohi...
The A couple!❤️

The ankle scene was well penned down.

he missed out something which could have been rightfully his. -
Haye! This line pricked somewhere deep.

Please relieve them of this pain di! It hurts us too!

u r true, they are indeed mirror images of eachother.

Their few moments together was a treat to read.

Ooh! Toh Arjun ko ab photography ka shauq charaha hai.
Anything for his miss A ofcors.

"Jo Marzi karlo, Im not going anywhere"

This tym Rosy's Mr. A is here to stay!

kash tumne ye 5 saal pehle kaha aur kiya hota Mr. A

a single lyn expresd so many emotions!!

P.S apt song quote!!

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Beautiful... Amazing... Supperbbb... Mindblowing... Fantastic...
loved their dance...
Beautiful.. song.. lovely...
cont sooon
thanks for the PM

awesome update dear.