UnRes😃
The moment i started reading this update till the time where the flashback started I thought of complaining you about yourself that you are doing EMOTIONAL ATYACHAAR since last few updates with TLIR.😭But the moment flashback started i dropped the idea of complaining.So you are spared for now.😉
To start with Aisha-Rathod:The pace with which the two are progressing in their more of unsaid relationship is highly commendable Avantika.👍🏼
I remember a line by David Tyson which goes as:
True friendship comes when silence between two people is comfortable
The way Sameer Understood Aisha's Silence of her wanting someone to hear her out without any questions or explainations after which she has gone through & accompanied her to her house to make her speak out was a very kind gesture.👍🏼
That was such a cute gesture from him to help Aisha in cooking.😃But ye kya tomato ko cut karne mein bhi perfection ki kya zarurat hai Sameer Rathod.😆
"Let's make some quick dinner..Ready Ayesha?"😆Cook karna hai Sameer encounter nahi.Chief will be chief.😆😆
I liked this section wherein the way you have described the 4 friends giving a synonym to each 1 of them.
Arjun's practicality, Aisha's patience, Roshni's maturity aur Ro ki zinda dili
Each one of them made an impact on others life & were incomplete even if a one is missing.The most saddest thing now is that their angel their Mishti, the one who was the mature among them is no more.But its gud to see her beside each one of them when they need it even if its in their sub conscious mind.
I loved this line by Rathod.It was Amazing
It's always better to break a promise than letting a promise break you.."(This goes to my favorite list😃)
Flashback
You explored their relationship from yet another angle.👍🏼If Ro was the one who used to cheer up Arjun when he was sad then Arjun was the one who would do the one impossible task that no one can do i.e. to make her understand things.Here in this flashback the way he made her understand her's father's POV was amazing.👍🏼
Father daughter convo was yet another treat to watch.😃I always adorn & love to see a father daughter relation exactly the way you have portrayed it.Usually its the mother that a daughter is friendly with most of the time but having a friend like relation with a father is a rare thing.
Aur phir saari zindagi tumhe apne saath rakhoon? Baap re, itni himmat nahi hai mujh mein.."
Tumhari life mein bhi ek superhero aayega, bacche.. Waise sach sach batana, don't you ever dream of a prince charming?"
"Shh.. Kissine dekh liya toh kya sochenge, mera sher wala baccha ro raha hai.. Tumhari reputation toh mitti mein mil jayegi.."
Each & every conversation of the father-daughter duo was superb.Thoda emotional,thoda funny.I enjoyed reading this part the most.😃Brilliantly written👍🏼
Then came the terrace scene.
As you slated in the start There are times when it's better to choose to love a person in silence.. For in silence, you will find no rejection..
I am not sure if I am on the right track on understanding this but I get a feel that they had never ever voiced out their feelings towards each other fearing of losing their friendship that they share.Arjun description of his would be life partner completely opposite to what Ro is might have been one of the reason Ro not confessing it to him.But that was a cute gesture of hers trying to be the way he wanted his life partner to be & that her bringing him his tea was super cute.😃
All in all amazing update.Thank you for giving this light hearted update after so many emotional atyachaar wale updates.😃😉
Edited by ll-Farheen-ll - 12 years ago
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