Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 7

Originally posted by: alee001

wow!!!!!!! a spy thriller..!!!

i loved it..!!!

i am sending u the buddy request!!!!

pm me everytime u update

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Nice concept Superb update So riya is undercover agent The case is very interesting Hate that guy who killed 3 women butrally Shree is missing Riya Pls continue soon Can't like your post because is not working and I don't know how to sent buddy request So if possible then sent me pm

superbly awesome ...!!!

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

thanx dear

Originally posted by: Amri174

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks a lot for the detailed review!😊</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yeah, so the first chapter has many important plotlines that will be explored in the rest of the story.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The murder case is of course, the foundation.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But how will this investigation change the lives of the ETF, Arjun and Riya? To learn that, you have to wait😉</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And sorry for the secret agent going to the disco trope- I just wanted to use that much abused storyline to show Riya as a female James Bondish character. Ian Fleming Zindabad.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And regarding thrills and mysteries- yeah, it will definitely be a part of this tale.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">About the Chottu-Shree and Rathore-Arjun moments- it will be definitely explored again. In fact, I am also going to touch on all possible combinations- Ayesha-Rathore, Shree-Lisa, etc,.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Will definitely PM you. Also, a contest- an important clue in Chapter 1 about the murder case. Can you guess it?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Regards</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Amrutha😊</font>

clue
i am gona read it again! 😆

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superbly awesome ...!!!

the mystery build up is very nice...!!! and the case is very interesting...!!! quite difficult to think who the murderer could be...!!!

as usual arjun's brain is going at a jet speed to find the killer... and am sure he'll find them soon..!!😉

really loved how he was concerned for rathore as he is the chief and answerable to higher authorities as well as has to give confidence to his juniors... so arjun's not gonna put more stress for rathore...!!!

shreetu's pov were lovely... both are missing riya... but are determined to solve the case to honour her...!!

riya's part was lovely... so she is also working on the same case kya???

omg she actually took all the data from etf ???and no one came to know about it.. am impressed...!!! and whom is she looking for? is the guy related to that crime? and is also upto something else???? in the hit list of NIB??

can't wait to see how the case is solved and who the culprit is???

continue soon...!!!

do pm me whenever you update...!!😳

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

hey mujhe bhi pm karna

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

clue
i am gona read it again! 😆

awww even arjun is missing riya

Okay i think the clue is of the first victm whose body was found near the pub!

And lately the arrival of riya in the pub!

And both are in worli!
May be this one!😆

the time span is proving it as it was serial murder!

If not then don't break the mystery😉.
I am very possessive abt the mysteries. My readers were very much irritated with me for ths 😆

hey i would really love to read about shree-lisa !
And yeah wht changes would happen in future for this case!