Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


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ye ye yiepee
i have guessed that! But for confirmation read tht again!
Since riya was there , there must be any link!

Don't know abt solving mysteries but i am good in putting mysteries!😆

one of my FF have crossed 15 chaps and they still don't knw wht is the case, and they will kill me if i would leave tht!😆

best of luck for this one!
Jada wait mat karwana!


Thanks! Will not make you wait for a long time😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Jorja

Awesome update loveit plz cont soon


Will do😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
nice start n plz send me pm I send u request ok plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: riyaarjun

nice start n plz send me pm I send u request ok plz


I certainly will! Thanks for commenting.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
m sealing my mouth right now.. will comment later.. busy with ny works..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awesome awesome awesome!!!
This was a great start!! 👏 I loved it!!
So...Riya is alive! Well ain't I glad?! 😃
And ETF being pressured with these cases! I feel sorry for them!😭
And women being killed brutally?!!! That too at a young age!!! Itisn't fair!
Whoever is killing them should be punished to hell! He doesn't deserve to live! 😡

Plus the pressure from the media! Argh!
They just need a new story and they come flying like houseflies! 😡
Now why am I not surprised! 😉
Pata nahi kya hoga in media valon ka!! *sigh*

And why the indifference for the third woman huh? I don't get it!
Mysterious...very mysterious!

And I am glad that shree still remembered Riya!
Well of course he did!! Waist bhi usse koi bhul sakta hai kya!? 😊
I know he misses her a lot!! 😭

And Riya! My god she was actually looking/sounding awesomely fantabulous!😉
She was sure dressed to kill!!!

Great job!!! 👏👏👏
I loved it!!
Kudos to you! 😃

Continue soon!!
And do pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice start 😊

awesome update 👏

three murders ... both etf and riya behind the same...

choree missing riya...

riya in the pub... so there must be some connection b/w the pub and murders...

i've sent u a request , do accept it... 😃

update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

wow
super update
love it
cont soon


Thanks! Will update it soon. It's pretty much written already.


Originally posted by: unishaz

m sealing my mouth right now.. will comment later.. busy with ny works..


That's fine. Don't forget to Unres later;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

nice start 😊


awesome update 👏

three murders ... both etf and riya behind the same...

choree missing riya...

riya in the pub... so there must be some connection b/w the pub and murders...

i've sent u a request , do accept it... 😃

update soon...


Hey, thanks!

The story is full of thrills and suspense... everything will be revealed gradually.

Hope you like it😊

And you're the second person to guess the pub clue...brilliant.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Live-life

Awesome awesome awesome!!!

This was a great start!! 👏 I loved it!!
So...Riya is alive! Well ain't I glad?! 😃
And ETF being pressured with these cases! I feel sorry for them!😭
And women being killed brutally?!!! That too at a young age!!! Itisn't fair!
Whoever is killing them should be punished to hell! He doesn't deserve to live! 😡

Plus the pressure from the media! Argh!
They just need a new story and they come flying like houseflies! 😡
Now why am I not surprised! 😉
Pata nahi kya hoga in media valon ka!! *sigh*

And why the indifference for the third woman huh? I don't get it!
Mysterious...very mysterious!

And I am glad that shree still remembered Riya!
Well of course he did!! Waist bhi usse koi bhul sakta hai kya!? 😊
I know he misses her a lot!! 😭

And Riya! My god she was actually looking/sounding awesomely fantabulous!😉
She was sure dressed to kill!!!

Great job!!! 👏👏👏
I loved it!!
Kudos to you! 😃

Continue soon!!
And do pm me!


First of all, thank you for such a lovely comment.

It is always good for a writer to know that she is doing a good job. Especially with fanfiction, since you are playing with characters that don't belong to you and are the product of someone else's imagination.

So a lot of things happened in the first chapter, and you got them all. Kudos for reading the chapter so carefully!

I really hope that I don't disappoint you. Come back to the thread tomorrow, a bada wala update is in store!

😊

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