Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Wow what a gripping update! 😃 you have expressed this in a way that, i want it never to end! Continues in flow 😃
the case was very nteresting! And the suspence was also interesting! Well i am looking forward for more in this case 😳 . May be Arjun was right about the murderer!
And then the personal point of view of shree about riya and the understanding he shared with chotu was adorable 👏
loved the way arjun thought about rathod and not to mislead him! 😃
and now comes to riya! Seems every secret agent loves clubs and disco n all 😆 ! So she is just for another case from department 😉 or any it really have any connection with the case ETF handeling 🤔
whateven will it be most welcome 👍🏼
waiting for more thrill and mysteries 😎
yeah already hooked up with this 😛
do PM me next time! 😳
Thanks a lot for the detailed review!😊
Yeah, so the first chapter has many important plotlines that will be explored in the rest of the story.
The murder case is of course, the foundation.
But how will this investigation change the lives of the ETF, Arjun and Riya? To learn that, you have to wait😉
And sorry for the secret agent going to the disco trope- I just wanted to use that much abused storyline to show Riya as a female James Bondish character. Ian Fleming Zindabad.
And regarding thrills and mysteries- yeah, it will definitely be a part of this tale.
About the Chottu-Shree and Rathore-Arjun moments- it will be definitely explored again. In fact, I am also going to touch on all possible combinations- Ayesha-Rathore, Shree-Lisa, etc,.
Will definitely PM you. Also, a contest- an important clue in Chapter 1 about the murder case. Can you guess it?
Regards
Amrutha😊
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