Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 24

@amri- I know i write too and know how much it hurts for silent readers ..

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

@amri- I know i write too and know how much it hurts for silent readers ..

Will comment ...😃

Wow fabulous update
everyone in etf misses riya...specially arjun
loved the update
thnks for the pm n for a lovely update

Sorry i am a little late
but don't you dare stopping this 😡
this FF is like a crystal of snow in a desert completely different 😛

coming to the chapter 😊

again awesome work by you 👏 and i will say not a bit of imperfection ⭐️ .

The way arjun handled the manager of the club Z was fantasticly explained and that proved his good senese of handling thing unlike , the one who used to destroy
😆

riya and her teammate were good! MK blushing..lol
so riya was thinking that she have been erased from their life. But still i will wait to know more about the NIB officer and what made her think like this 😉 defenately this was not just another case solved by her 😉

and she didn't even know what they felt after her 😭 still people are missing her !
Loved the way shree gatherd he things and that thing tickled his mind to returning this pic to her mother! And this is the first key that would led him gather about riya!

And here arjun too was thinking about her! And loved the way that he realised she was not just a collegue but more to that!
But the feelimg of betraying his beloved wife is stoppin him everytime i think!
Ah their first meet! That way expressed his feelings about her, i want to wahtch ths scene more and more! U didn't even missed any seconds of time describing this!
Hats off for this scene presening like this!

Shree and chotu , the duo are always there for eachother. Loved their friendship and also theor feeling for riya!
They wouldn't get any trace of her mother was not a shock for me! As i kno everything was planned! But her mother being in with commissioner was a big shock😲! That to infront of rathod and arjun!
Hmm she must be any other worker of the department!

Oh well i am waiting for the progress of the case and the next thing which will lead them to realise that there is more than the eyes met!

Overall this chapter revolved every teammates inner feelimg for the girl who is no more with them ! And also the personal feeling they held for each other!
I would also loved to read about ayesha 's pov more!

Lovely chapter❤️

thanks for the PM😃

Originally posted by: ninii

Wow fabulous update
everyone in etf misses riya...specially arjun
loved the update
thnks for the pm n for a lovely update

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Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Sorry i am a little late
but don't you dare stopping this 😡
this FF is like a crystal of snow in a desert completely different 😛

coming to the chapter 😊

again awesome work by you 👏 and i will say not a bit of imperfection ⭐️ .

The way arjun handled the manager of the club Z was fantasticly explained and that proved his good senese of handling thing unlike , the one who used to destroy
😆

riya and her teammate were good! MK blushing..lol
so riya was thinking that she have been erased from their life. But still i will wait to know more about the NIB officer and what made her think like this 😉 defenately this was not just another case solved by her 😉

and she didn't even know what they felt after her 😭 still people are missing her !
Loved the way shree gatherd he things and that thing tickled his mind to returning this pic to her mother! And this is the first key that would led him gather about riya!

And here arjun too was thinking about her! And loved the way that he realised she was not just a collegue but more to that!
But the feelimg of betraying his beloved wife is stoppin him everytime i think!
Ah their first meet! That way expressed his feelings about her, i want to wahtch ths scene more and more! U didn't even missed any seconds of time describing this!
Hats off for this scene presening like this!

Shree and chotu , the duo are always there for eachother. Loved their friendship and also theor feeling for riya!
They wouldn't get any trace of her mother was not a shock for me! As i kno everything was planned! But her mother being in with commissioner was a big shock😲! That to infront of rathod and arjun!
Hmm she must be any other worker of the department!

Oh well i am waiting for the progress of the case and the next thing which will lead them to realise that there is more than the eyes met!

Overall this chapter revolved every teammates inner feelimg for the girl who is no more with them ! And also the personal feeling they held for each other!
I would also loved to read about ayesha 's pov more!

Lovely chapter❤️

thanks for the PM😃

Originally posted by: Amri174

Thanks a lot for commenting, Vampu😊

I don't think I would dare to discontinue this story after getting dhamkis from you and many others😃

On a more serious note, I am blessed to have a lot of readers like you who constantly keep encouraging me to keep updating this story. So I decided to continue without the complaining.

Thanks for the compliment about my story being the crystal of snow in the desert *blushes*

And I would also like to compliment you on reading the chapter thoroughly. You picked up every important detail, and that is praiseworthy.

I esp. liked writing Arjun's PoV. In the show, we didn't get to see much of what he really thought of Riya.

After having lost his wife, I think Arjun would be reluctant to move on with another woman, and this is what I wanted to show in this chapter.

And what you said-"Overall this chapter revolved every teammates inner feeling for the girl who is no more with them ! And also the personal feeling they held for each other!"

You hit right at the heart of the chapter!😊

"I would also loved to read about ayesha 's pov more!"

Thanks for commenting, and I promise that I'll include more of Ayesha and Lisa in the next chapter.

oh thank u soo much for continuing this! Or else no one would be able to save u frm my bite🤣
you are right about his feelings for riya!
oh i am very happy to know that i am now becoming avery good reader😃
and thank you for the compliment
i am too blushing☺️🤣

Hey dear dont stop this ff.
Its amazing.
Or main unres kal tak kar dungi.
Aaj mai sirf silent reader hoke padh rahi hoon.
Kal apne sare res unres kar dungi.
Actually today i am very busy thats why

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

Hey dear dont stop this ff.
Its amazing.
Or main unres kal tak kar dungi.
Aaj mai sirf silent reader hoke padh rahi hoon.
Kal apne sare res unres kar dungi.
Actually today i am very busy thats why

unres my comment pg-26