Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Vampu i edited my comment...

Nakshatra hi5 to u too...

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@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

wow!

this is really nice!!!!! ARIYA ff yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Miss them so bad!!!!!

loved everything abt it! Arjun-Riya, Rathore-Ayesha! Chotu-Shree friendship and everything!!!!

the mystery around her "death" is intriguing!

pm me too next tym u update!!!!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Jorja
Amez update loveit plz cont soon

I will...in a couple of days😊

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Reserved!

Want to read this in a peaceful mind! 😆

Take your time😃

Originally posted by: sravz23
u r an awesome writer.this ff is captivating.
plzzz do write more.👏😊⭐️

Thank you😊 I will certainly write more. Chapter 4 on Saturday. See you!

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Christeee
OMG this was mind blowing
loved the way you potrayed about arjun and riya's sensation of each other it was so wonderful and magical
ayehsa's crush for rathore and liza shree moment were awesome
the mission the case it's all so intoxicating
thanx for pm and will be waiting for ur next update

Hey, thanks for commenting😊

You might think it's unrealistic that Arjun smelt Riya's perfume at least 10 mins after she left. Let's just say that she wore a lot of perfume that night😆 So Arjun could smell her.

One of the ways in which physical attraction works is the olfactory way- your sense of smell. So i had to put that in. Even if is not love yet, they're at least attracted to each other. And that's a great place to start.

And yes, I fully intend to give space to the other team members as well.

I am waiting for Saturday as eagerly as you are.

Till the next update then😳

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Aabish_02
awesome update
very well written and perfect
arjun sensed riya presence
precap is interesting
waiting for nxt update

Thanks. It's because they're soulmates in a way I guess😊

Will update on Saturday.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg
Fantastic update love it very much ETF nahi jan pae ki Riya zinda hai Arjun thought of Riya when he get the similar smell of Riya's sent Waiting for the next update Precap seems very interesting Thanks for the pm

Thanks for commenting😊

And yes, the next chapter is definitely going to be interesting, I promise you that.

Till Saturday then;)

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: shah10
Superb updates
Love shree n chotu
Riya is great
Awesome precap
Continue soon plz

Thanks for commenting!

Will continue this Saturday, so keep stalking this thread😃

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Ops sorry now i got ur PM😃
thanks😳

It's okay yaar😉

Reading your comment now.

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome yar..

Thanks😊

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EkNoKiNashedi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

and and i second leki's thought why all of a sudden riya's death case???

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Leki
Vampu we guessed it right re Hi5!!! Yipee...
Super duper part...
So they are one step closer to the killer...
Riya left the killer??? Well that was need of the time... but the way she recognised Arjun... just she can do it...
Ri was part of ETF for her mission as NIB agent??
RR convo was good... Arjun replying to Rathore in calm way... great...
loved those moments in ETF... Aisha's thought abt Rathore
Small but nice moment of Shirza...
Arjun felt her presence near him... if he had trusted his instinct now may b he could hv met him... but looks like that have to wait...
Case is getting more interesting...
Precap is intresting so now they find Riya's death fishy but why all of sudden?? Continue soon...

Awesome comment, Leki.

It was really a pleasure reading it.

And yes, you and Vampu are really clever people. Congrats again.

The case will get more interesting. The ETF will get closer to Riya. And more importantly, a specific ACP will get really, really closer to her😆

Hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters as well😊

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
and and i second leki's thought why all of a sudden riya's death case???

And to answer the question both of you have asked- wait for chapter 3😃 Some questions will be definitely answered in the next update.

Till then, I intend to make you wait.

Yes, I know that I am a horrible person😆

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVE IT
CONT SOON

Thanks! Will definitely continue this Saturday😉

Originally posted by: IshqDewaani
wow!

this is really nice!!!!! ARIYA ff yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miss them so bad!!!!!

loved everything abt it! Arjun-Riya, Rathore-Ayesha! Chotu-Shree friendship and everything!!!!

the mystery around her "death" is intriguing!

pm me too next tym u update!!!!

What can I say? I miss them too😭

So this story will make up for their loss and have all the elements in the show that we saw before Riya's death.

Will definitely PM you next time😃